Writing Workshop Week (Section 605/fall 2020) by Rebecca Harris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605 (1st) Plan (2nd) Accomplishments AND (3rd) Comment on 5 classmate posts en-us 2020-10-18 13:29:00 UTC 2025-12-06 12:49:29 UTC hello@padlet.com Dr. Harris’s example dr_rebeccalharris https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/838804086 Plan:
  1. To explain the current practice and my reform in more detail
  2. To strengthen the details of my philosophy of education
 
Accomplishments:
  1. I strengthened my research by adding 3 sources.
  2. I developed details on my philosophy of education, the current practice my reform responds to and my reform itself.
  3. Made sure the theme of equity is clear across each section of my essay
]]> 2020-10-18 13:29:00 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/838804086 Nicole Sepulveda-Velez https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842242094 Plan: 
1.  I want to explain my reform in more detail for better understanding within the introduction of my paper.
2. Add 2-3 additional sources to help me strengthen my research within my paper. 

Accomplishments: 
1.  I found 2 online resources that gave me valuable information to use within my paper. 
2. I expanded further on Section 2 (Philosophy of Ed) within my paper to connect my reform to my philosophy of education. 
3. Strengthened both my introduction as well as my conclusion in my paper. ]]> 2020-10-19 18:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842242094 Hannah Gobert https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842500298 Plan:
1. I want to make a strong abstract and conclusion with detail. 
2. I want to explain what this reform would look like in a classroom setting with real world applications implemented

Accomplishments: 
1. I have my paper already set up in the correct format.
2. I have 10+ sources for my paper.
3. As we have been submitting our paper in sections, I have made the necessary revisions based upon feedback by Dr. Harris. 
3. Made sure to prove that diverse students and equity is proven throughout my paper with strong sources. ]]> 2020-10-19 19:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842500298 Ashleigh Fleming https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842773059 Plan: 
1. I am going to clarify what teacher turnover is considered in North Carolina. 
2. I am going to make revisions to my section 1: Purpose and section 2: Philosophy of my paper. 
3. Gather more research to support my ideas about my reform in relations to the sections. 

Accomplishments:
1. I found additional resources to support my claims I made in my paper. 
2. Revised my section 1 and section 2 for final paper. 
3. I have made sure to include comments that Dr. Harris made to my final paper. ]]> 2020-10-19 20:42:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/842773059 Haley Myers https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/843095357 Plan:
1. Go into more detail about how my proposed reform will foster equity for all students
2. Do more research and gather more sources to strengthen my position.

Accomplishments:
1. I have found 3 credible sources to support my position.
2. I have made necessary changes based on the feedback from Dr. Harris. 
3. I have the general outline of my paper and how I would like it to be set up.

]]> 2020-10-19 23:58:56 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/843095357 Erin Poepping https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/846011975 Plan: 
1. I want to include my reform in my paper more
2. I want to add more information that will help advocate for my paper from the book
3. I want to strengthen the 3rd part of my paper a little bit more before submitting and adding in the comments that Dr. Harris has left for me.

Accomplishments: 
1. I feel really good with most of my paper just want to add some more support throughout the paper for my reform. 
2. I have a lot of different resources to help back up my reform
3. I have made sure to make the adjustments that Dr. Harris has suggested 

]]> 2020-10-20 17:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/846011975 Madison Vincent https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/846985261 Plan:
1. more in detail about why I'm pushing this reform
2. add or add more stats on why my reform is for the best of others
3. add more sources; more important sources and more reliable that seem more accurate than others
4. more in depth and more research on the philosophy of my paper

Accomplishments:
1. Knowing why I want to have this reform
2. doing a lot of research already for my reform/paper but more research could never hurt
3. asking questions when need be to Dr. Harris
4. adding stats (but I want to add more)
5. having more than one or two reasons for why I want this reform to happen and not just one basic idea for why I would like it to happen]]> 2020-10-21 00:08:44 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/846985261 Penny Glover https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/847046777 Plan:
1. I need to revise a portion of my paper that is not in APA format for a long quote.
2. Within my philosophy of US Education, I need to add more details for Progressivism for support. 
3. I need to find up to date resources because some of my research sources are older. 

Accomplishments:

1. I have revised my paper with the long quotes to the APA format. 
2. I have added more details on Progressivism to support my philosophy.
3. Updated my research, to a ESSA and not NCLB.
4. I made an appointment to OWL center to review of my paper. 
5. I made my paper flow better from one topic to the next. ]]> 2020-10-21 00:40:34 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/847046777 Lauren King https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/847332363 1. I plan to go into more detail about my reform and clarify things I need to elaborate more on. 
2. I plan to search for a few more sources and finish the final section and conclusion. I've already started researching more, and looking for things to make my argument stronger. 
Accomplishments-
1. I feel really great about most of my paper now. I've added some support for my reform and really developed a lot. 
2. I've added a lot of resources.
3. I think with this paper, I've developed more as a writer, and learned to use APA format a lot better than I knew before!]]> 2020-10-21 03:26:45 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/847332363 Jaclyn Carr https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/848643950 Plan:
1. I plan to go back and more thoroughly explain my reform.
2. I also plan to find more references in the book that relate to my paper. 

]]> 2020-10-21 13:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/848643950 Sarah Dickerson https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/849587832 Plan:
1. I plan to go back into my paper and give more detail for my reform and how I plan to substitute end of grade testing to a learning portfolio instead. 
2. I also plan to strengthen and thoroughly explain my reform more into depth. 

Accomplishments:
1. I feel really good about my paper, I just need to add more support and more in depth detail to make it what I want it to be.
2. I am also proud of my proposal I want to see in the future for our classrooms. 
3. I have credible resources to back up my claim. ]]> 2020-10-21 17:03:54 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/849587832 Mara Rozzi https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850320483 Plan: 
1-Find more scholarly sources to replace other sources that are not as strong as others 
2-fix in text citations 
3- Strengthen my philosophies argument 

Accomplishments
1-properly formatted each section
2-have over 10 credible sources 
3- have a strong conclusion and thesis supporting the argument for removal of all standardized testing 

]]> 2020-10-21 20:16:42 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850320483 Makayla Ball https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850534772 Plan: 
1. Adding a couple more of resources to help back my reform.
2. Also adding more information from the textbook that will help advocate for my paper.

Accomplishments:
1. Revised my sections of the paper for the final.
2. Doing research on my reform to make sure I have all the information to why promoting my reform would help education in the U.S.
3. I have multiple credible sources for my reform.

]]> 2020-10-21 21:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850534772 Bryant Hilarie https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850594082 Plan: 
1. Adding scholarly articles to help support my proposal and reform.
2. Fix citation format.
3. Make sure my arguments are explained

Accomplishments
1. Fixed the format for my ciatations.
2. Doing more research on my reform.
3. Found more sources to use in my paper.]]> 2020-10-21 22:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850594082 Gillian Walter https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850786899 Plan:
1. I want to add more statistics to show why my reform would be better for everyone. 
2. I want to strengthen my paper and add more detail.

Accomplishments:
1. I've done more research for my reform
2. I have made adjustments based on the feedback I have received from Dr. Harris.
3. I have worked on my format and have revised my sections of the paper. ]]> 2020-10-22 00:36:29 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850786899 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850797354 Makayla Ball
1st portion.
My plans for strengthening my writing are to create outlines before writing. Outlining would help me understand more what topics to focus on. Another way is to not express more than I need to. Point out the facts and statements followed by the evidence and nothing more. I need to focus on focusing on the topics and not expressing more than needed. Once finished writing to read back through and add or drop things if needed and to make sure each sentence is spoken upon the topic. So my plan is to do the following, create and outline, write the paper based on the topic and then reread through it and edit from there.

]]> 2020-10-22 00:41:46 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850797354 Casey Lambert https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850817494 Plan:
1. Strengthen my essay by adding additional sources to support statements made in my essay.
2. I will elaborate more on the relevance of my topic and the range of placements of students with disabilities.

Accomplishments:
1. I added 4 sources, to strengthen the claims I made within my paper. I also added additional support from our textbook in various sections.
2. I added more development in my explanation of my reform and the relevance of my topic.
3. I also revised my sources to have more current sources. One of my sources was almost 30 years old. I removed that source and replaced it with a more current source in order to have more current and relevant support.

]]> 2020-10-22 00:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850817494 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850874954 Elizabeth Craig 
Plan:
1. Add more in text citations from the textbook to support my reform for universal free school lunches
2. Be more specific in my points and make sure everything is much clearer and not just brushed on
3. Add more detail to my section 2 (that I scored lower on)

Accomplishments:
1. I have lots of outside credible sources with points made from doctors that back up my reform (but I want to add more)
2. I have made strong points with information considering my reform is not a direct educational reform (but does effect the education of children)
3. I have a good outline of the paper and it is organized

]]> 2020-10-22 01:21:33 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/850874954 Sydney Jenkins https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/851009405 Plan:
1. Work on making sure each section flows together well.
2. Be more specific on why I am choosing to advocate for free lunch for all students.
3. Fix my citations to meet requirements. 
4. Explain how free lunch is equitable to all students in a more detailed manner.

Accomplishments:
1. I have great sources for my research.
2. I have taken Dr. Harris suggestions to make my paper better.

]]> 2020-10-22 02:36:06 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/851009405 Zaria Boyd https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854102850 Plan: 
1. Further clarify the importance of my reform
2.  use in-text citations when using information learned from outside sources
3.  Gather more research to further support my reform

Accomplishments:

1. I have several credible sources to draw information form 
2. Added in text citations
3. I have made  the adjustments that Dr. Harris has suggested ]]> 2020-10-22 20:00:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854102850 Abigail Beaman beamana19 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854390329 Plan
1. To go more in depth about what the reform I am advocating for is and how it ties into every single element I talk about throughout my paper.
2. Better my paper by making sure I am properly quoting every single article and website I am referencing to. 
3. To really focus more on the goal of my paper, which is to express the reform I am advocating for. I want to put as much passion into it as I can.

Accomplishments
1. I have really done my best to use what material we have learned in class, and apply it to my paper and the reform I am advocating for.
2. I have just enjoyed myself while writing this paper. I am passionate about the topic and I have honestly loved learning about the philosophy and goal of education. This paper has been rewarding to me.
3. I have taken what we have learned in our "Learning Team" discussions and I have applied it to my paper. ]]> 2020-10-22 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854390329 https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854939103 2020-10-23 03:47:10 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/854939103 Jaclyn Carr- Accomplishments https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/858508880 1. I now have multiple credible sources to support my reform. 
2. I revised each section to the best it could be.
3. My reform has more support from the book. ]]> 2020-10-24 23:25:40 UTC https://padlet.com/dr_rebeccalharris/WritingWeek605/wish/858508880