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2) Complete the Show, Don’t Tell Challenge with 1–2 sentences.

3) Finally, read one classmate’s post and leave a like 👍 or a short comment 💬.

If you met my character you would notice his wand.

My characters actions shows that he is a student.

2.My character's actions show he is traumatised at a young age

3.If you met my character, you would notice he acts a little weirdly

2) Other people think my character is athletic because he is tall.

3) My character's actions show he is a drum man because he always listens to musics

It is very cute and it has a good personality and is very kind

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1. My character appears to be athletic, but really he is smart

2. Other people think my character is good at basketball because he is tall

3. If you met my character, you would notice his red hair

One unusual habit my character has is she cries easily which shows shes soft hearted

If you met my character you would notice that she has unusual eyes ヾ(•ω•`)o

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Other people think my character is very good at sports, because of his looks, but he likes to read books.

My character’s actions show he is careful and shy.

2.If you met my character, you Would notice she is a famous.

3. My character’s action show she is a singer

2. He would be extremely tall, and if you went up close to him, you would see big dark eyes hiding under the glasses and skin nearly as pale as a dolphin.

3. His hair would be very wavy, like a combination of straight and curly, and his dress-code will always be dark blue and black. If you see him on the streets, it is recommended to stay away from him, as he is reported to be a serial killer on the loose.

my character‘s action show she is smart.

1.My character appears to be not so smart, but really he is actually very smart

2.Other people think my character is very unreliable because he messes things up a lot

3.My characters actions show he is clumsy but knows what he is doing.

One unusual habit my character has is he like to read books which shows he like to read books

If you met my character, you would notice he is a human

1. My character's actions show he is smart and passionate

2. If you met my character, you would notice his green and white hair

3. My character appears to be rude, but really he is kind

1. My character appears to be honest and respectful but he's very poor.

2. Other people think my character is fine because he is calm and honest.

3. If you met my character, you will notice him he's poor.

2. My character's actions show that he is sad and depressed.

3. Other people think my character have no feelings because they are always moody most of the time.

2 - one unusual habit my character has in yawning, which shows he is very sleepy all the time

3 - my character appears to be really scary, but really its just really calm

1.my character appears to be mid tall, has brownish red hair and likes to eat ramen. but he is from a anime.

5.if you met my character, you would notice that he is very silly and kind.

3.one unusual habit my character has is ,helping other people more than himself. which shows he is kind and caring

1. My character appears to be scary , but really she is kind hearted

2. Other people think my character is quiet because she is soft spoken

3. my characters action show she is kind and considerate

4. one unusual habit my character has is being nervous and freezing up , which shows shows she lacks confidence but wants to connect.

5. if you met my character , you would notice her kindness even if she is quiet.

1. People think that my character is a very bad person because he was happened to be accused of murder.

2. My character is intelligent.

3. He is known as a quiet person.

other people think my character is cold, because of his menacing apperance.

my characters action shows that he cares for other people

my character appears to be cold but really he is kind

2.Other people think my character is weird because shes not a famous or well known character

3.If you met her, you will notice you died

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2.other people think my character is a general but he actually is the chairman

3.if you offend the political party or /offend the system of his nation and promote anti communist propagnda u will be send to the gulag

Other people think my character is very strong because he was very tall.

My character's action shoe he is very strong.

If you met my my character you will notice that he has curly hair.

2. Which part is hardest?

3. One thing you will try to improve in your next PEE paragraph.

2. Explanation

3. Making my explanation more detailed

Explanation

I will try to improve on explaining my evidence

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2.The hardest part is evidence

3.I will improve on finding the evidence

The easiest part of P.E.E was probably the second E ( Evidence ) since there wasn’t much to elaborate on wnd you could just insert the quote / word.

The hardest part was probably the third E ( Explanation ) because you usually write a lot and elaborate a lot.

What i would improve is definitely my explaining.

The hardest part of PEE is, (Explanation), because I have to explain the whole thing.

I would like to improve on trying to change the way I write my PEE

2.Evidence

3.give a more descriptive explanation

1.P:point.for point you just have to find a fact

2.E:evidence.just find something to back up the point you made

3.E:explanation.just explain what you have found

2. Which part is hardest?

3. One thing you will try to improve in your next PEE paragraph.

2) Explanation

3) I will try to scan through the reading text twice next time to make the answer more accurate

1. For me the easiest part of PEE is point because you think of it straight from your mind instead of taking words from the text.

2. The hardest for me is the explanation because you have to link the evidence and point together using one explanation.

3. I will try to improve my PEE explanation in preparation for the test

1.The easiest part is the point.

2.Explanation.

3.Explaning the explanation better.

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1. Point : creating an idea for yourself

2. Evidence : backing up your point

3. Explanation : explaning your reason for your evidence

2) in my opinion i think it is explanation because you have to explain and it takes quite some time

3) ill try to improve of combining my PEE sentence into 1 paragraph ><

2) Explanation because you have to take the point and evidence and explain them all together

3) i will try to improve by not putting the letter PEE

1. I think the easiest part is point.

2. I think the hardest of them all is Explanation

3. I will try to improve my PEE writing and follow how its supposed to be written

2.The most hard part for me is explaination because i need to explain why i choose that sentence

3.i need to improve on the explain part to add more words and explain more clearly

1. The easiest P.E.E for me is explanation. I genuinely do not have any problem trying to prove the point using evidence.

2. Maybe evidence because it is kind of hard for me to find good evidence to back up and support a point.

3. I will try to find good evidence to keep my point secure and strong and will also use my point and explanation to secure my point.

2) the hardest one for me is explanation because you need your own thinking opinion and think about the answer

3) I will try to improve the point to make it short and direct to the answer

I think the hardest part is expianation

I will try to improve my point in the pee writing

I learned what is a descriptive paragraph and how to do it

I learned about descriptive writing and I wrote about it also.

I learnt about descriptive writing and emotions.

I have learned better synonyms for basic emotions such as happy/sad which helps to improve my writing!

- One key takeaway from todays lesson was that it takes alot of thinking to write in a way where it describes your surroundings and how other people would imagine it

In today's lesson, i learned how to write Descriptive writing better and write a short descriptive writing about emotions

I learned about the ways I can describe my emotions.

i learned about descriptive writing and allt of emotions.

I learnt about emotions and their synonyms

I learned more synonyms for basic emotions

I learnt to use emotions in a descriptive writing

Kotler's behaviours is loud. He shouts at Pavel aggressively without actually taking meaningful control of the situation.

One word to describe Pavel is kind-hearted. His quiet act of care contrasts with Kotler’s behaviour.

I think Kotler is loud. He bosses Pavel around while shouting at him and is very rude to people. One word to describe Pavel would be kind.

Kotler’s behavior is loud, not truly strong.

When Pavel accidentally spills the wine, Lieutenant Kotler shouts at him and uses raw force and brutality to handle the situation, violently beating Pavel to his eventual, agonizing death, even when he had to option to solve the situation calmly. This shows that he uses aggression rather than real strength.

Pavel is caring. Even though he is treated badly, Pavel still rushes over to help treat Bruno when Bruno falls and hurts himself, showing kindness and compassion despite his lowly status compared to Bruno's, his state and the consequences. The system of war would eventually destroy kind people like him.

Pavel is a very soft hearted person that was silenced by the cruel world.

Kotler's behaviour is loud because he will raise his voice to try and frighten other people with his loud voice and make people be fearful around him.

Kolter is loud he uses his loud voice to intimidate/fear people round him

Pavel: Vulnerable

Kotler's behaviour is loud. He thinks he is better than everybody because he is a soldier. He uses his authority to tear down others and make them obey and fear him.

One word to describe Pavel is caring because he helps Bruno when hurt.

Kotler's behaviour is more loud that strong. Kotler raises his voice to threaten Pavel with the intention of making Pavel fear him. Pavel is caring. Despite his lowly status as a mere prisoner/worker, he still doesn't hesitate to rushe over and help treat Bruno's injury when he fell. Too bad that people like him don't survive long.

Kotler is only loud, not strong. He disrespects Pavel despite Pavel being older than him, he cannot respect the commandments son by calling him “little man”. He acts loud so people fear and respect him instead of making people respect him the right way, with kindness and honesty. One word to describe Pavel is kindness. This can be seen when he rushes to Bruno when Bruno fell off the swing, showing his gentle and kind nature.

Her room has a map with many pins

She focus on the war instead of dolls and other stuff and reads newspaper

Chihiro

Gretel became more aware of what is occuring around her instead of focusing on dolls.

She starts getting influenced by the Nazi ideology.

She becomes more mature and less gullible compared to the start.

Gretel has the Nazi mindset and is more mature

Her walls have a Nazi flag on it

-More mature content

-Behaviour change

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She puts a map of europe on her wall to track the progress of the war

She is more mature

2)Gretel’s room changed from dolls to maps and newspapers.

3)Gretel out pins on the map in her room to track the political stuff.

-Aryan

She had thrown away her dolls and put posters of maps

She has been more into the war

Gretel doesn't like dolls anymore

She is acting more mature to impress Kotler

She replaces dolls with nazi posters in her room

Gretel doesn’t play with her dolls anymore like she used too when they first moved to their new house

Gretel became more matured after seeing the fence

Gretel was getting influenced of the war and nazi ideology

Gretel starts to stray from childish dolls and is more mature

She starts talking like the Nazi

She has a Nazi flag in the room.

She replaces dolls with nazi posters

She's not childish anymore

Gretel is more matured and gets influenced with Nazi’s believes.

Gretel also removes all her dolls from her room, this is maybe because she is matured or Kotler left.

Gretel also finds out more about the Jews and the war.

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Gretel is more influenced with what the nazi believes

she removes her dolls from her room

gretel starts to find out more about the war

Gretel removes all her dolls, she is influenced with Herr Liszt's and Kotler's thinking.

Gretel is more knowlegable and able to recognize what is happening, the war, the jews and the Nazis

-She has been influenced by the Nazi ideology

-She no longer wants to play with dolls like she used to

-She is more matured

2. Gretel stopped having dolls in her room.

3. Gretel became more matured and stop pronouncing Out-With wrongly.

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2. more influenced by Nazi ideology ,

3.Gretel throws all her dolls away to show she is more mature

Gretel's influence of Nazi Ideology has completely changed her, her old self used to play with her dolls, but now she hangs up Nazi posters and Acts more like one.

1. She is influenced by the Nazi ideology, not making her innocent anymore

2. Because of the Nazi ideology, she is now more serious and doesn't play with dolls anymore

3. Because of the Nazi ideology, she is more interested into geography and probably history because of what she is influenced by

1. Gretel is influenced by Nazi propaganda as she grew up because she was exposed to more propaganda in Out-with.

2. Gretel feels that playing with dolls is super immature for her age and starts acting like a mature teenage girl.

3. When Gretel is influenced by the Nazi propaganda she is more interested in Geography and History to try to fit in with Nazi propaganda and the soldiers.

The road represent how the person in the poem felt and where he was going. It showed how lonely is was and what decision he made.

Like the road got choices to go it connect to real life because life you can go down different roads also

IT shows the difference in paths we do and the effects

It represents life choices and how one cannot go both ways

The roads mean different choices or opportunities.

Chihiro

The road represents the life choices you can make and can choose not to make

The road represents different choices you have to pick in life

Alia

Shamheerra

The roads represent different choices and paths people take

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- Annabella

On the outside, Mrs.Jones looks like shes strict, but on the inside,, her speech is kindful and respectful, proving she is actually kind and emapthizing

1. a scary woman, 2. actions, 3. kind on the inside

On the outside, Roger is a theif and a bad person, but on the inside he is a good person and does not want to steal

Roger looks like a desperate thief, but on the inside, his thoughts prove that he is actually grateful.

On the outside, Roger looks like a naughty child, but on the inside, his thoughts prove he is actually respectful.

On the outside, Mrs Jones looks like a fierce woman but on the inside, her actions prove that she is actually trying to help.