https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv en-us 2022-10-26 15:29:50 UTC 2022-10-27 15:57:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359312831 Student, I appreciate the work you put into response. Make sure that your supporting details match your topic sentence. ]]> 2022-10-27 15:53:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359312831 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359314420 I appreciate you putting in the effort on the length and topic of the assignment. To further improve the quality, I'd like you to provide more evidence to support what you've written about. ]]> 2022-10-27 15:54:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359314420 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359314826 You have met the minimum length of the writing assignment, so good job!  Be sure that each sentence serves a purpose- you should have a main idea followed by sentences that have supporting details.  ]]> 2022-10-27 15:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359314826 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359315105 I see that you’ve met the requirements for the number of sentences required, which satisfies that element of the rubric. Unfortunately, you did not provide details to support your thesis, which is a larger portion of the rubric and a more important skill to master. I appreciate your effort in getting this assignment done on time, but I encourage you to go back and find supporting details and resubmit your essay so that I can regrade it. ]]> 2022-10-27 15:54:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359315105 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359315996 Your essay is very interesting, and I’m loving the figurative language you chose even though you are missing some supporting details. Don’t forget the about the minimum number of sentences required. Overall, quite good. ]]> 2022-10-27 15:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359315996 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359316033 Student, I'm so proud of you for figuring out the right answer! I'd love to see the steps you took to solve this problem. Can you sit with me and help me get on the same page?]]> 2022-10-27 15:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359316033 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359317002 2022-10-27 15:55:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359317002 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359317036 Great job solving this problem- I'm noticing that the work you showed is incorrect, however, and the method you used will not always get you to the correct answer. Be sure to use the method we learned in the unit- let me know if you need help!]]> 2022-10-27 15:55:47 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359317036 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359318781 I see that you’ve arrived at the correct answer. There are times in math where you can get the correct answer out of coincidence. Unfortunately, you can’t count on the method that you used for solving these kinds of problems and arriving at the correct answer. Let’s sit down and review the correct prices so that you’ll get these problems correct in the future. ]]> 2022-10-27 15:56:51 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359318781 https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359319917 2022-10-27 15:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/rh18824/hbbzhhzyr3peovwv/wish/2359319917