https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj Please make comments on the strengths and areas for improvement en-us 2016-03-09 17:51:44 UTC 2016-03-10 16:25:06 UTC hello@padlet.com hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144288
Good animationStrengths - what did you like/ they do well?
The music in the background was nice 

What could we do differently to 

change or animation? Make the legs move

Needs to move faster. Was actually quite creepy when it slowly lumbered across the room.

What target audience would you say this should be for? 

Is the 

Improvements?]]> 2016-03-10 09:04:42 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144288 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144403 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?
Funny & good backgrounds 
Funny
Good 

Improvements?
Better story

Will my E book succeed in the real world? No 
No

Do the characters suit the background?
No

Was the audio loud enough?
Yes, I'm death]]> 2016-03-10 09:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144403 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144534 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?

Improvements?]]> 2016-03-10 09:06:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144534 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144587 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?
Good music
Music is fantastic

Improvements?
animation is too slow

]]> 2016-03-10 09:06:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144587 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144608 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?
Good animation

Improvements?
Speech on screen

Do you think it suits the target audience of 4-6 year olds?
Yes
No, older
How did the e-book make you feel?
Scared
We're the sound effects relevant?
Yes]]> 2016-03-10 09:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144608 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144682 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?

Funny and good.
Good animation
Best drawings and backgrounds of all of the eBooks.
Hmmmmmmmm
Hmmmmmmmm
Funny and interesting 

Improvements?

No.

What was your favourite scene?

African lion.
Lion
Lion and ka                                             
what was the moral of the story?

Don't judge people.

Favourite character?
The lion and hedgehog.

Lion.]]> 2016-03-10 09:06:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144682 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144732 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?

Great character sketches and backgrounds

Improvements?

Did you learn anything ?

Do you like the characters?

What kind of environment would you like to have seen?

If we ,add a second book what would be in it?]]> 2016-03-10 09:07:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144732 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144887 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?
Good pictures and rhyming.
Funny.


Improvements?
Make the legs move when animating
What was your favourite scene?
When her brother was telling her about school
Better animation.

]]> 2016-03-10 09:07:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144887 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144932 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?
Murry was my least favourite character
Improvements?

What was your favourite part of the book? 

What do you think the age of the target audience is? 

How was your favourite character? 

What do you think the moral is in this story? 

Do you think this story is appropriate for the target audience.


]]> 2016-03-10 09:08:14 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100144932 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100145430 Strengths - what did you like/they do well? Story was cool
Funny
Music and movements were in sync

Funny.

Improvements?


Make characters head not move about.]]> 2016-03-10 09:10:49 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100145430 hannah_bennett_ibe https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100145536 Strengths - what did you like/they do well?

Improvements?]]> 2016-03-10 09:11:27 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100145536 https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100168313 Lucy and the friendly monster - The opening titles were an exceptional touch and I loved the various use of textures and fonts that ran through the whole e-book. I feel as if the music could have been mixed within the general story a lot better, but that's one of my only issues. 

Giraffe - Some of the smoothest animation throughout the entire screening, but I felt as if it ran for too long as points and could have been condensed a little better. 

Harold - Interesting use of pictures and drawing for the backgrounds, and this included some really solid voice acting with the inclusion of accents and funny voices. Again, this ran on for quite a bit though, even if it was nicely done.

Snowman - Humourous and thoughtful, the script was coherent and nice, but I feel as if it could have benefitted from cleaner artwork. I enjoyed the music especially.

Lost teddy - The concept was well meaning and sweet and it clearly had good intentions and a nice message behind it, but the animation often felt static and awkward looking. It could have been improved with some more dynamic movement.

Poppy - The artwork was lovely, and the general aesthetic was my favourite aspect. I had a few issues with the awkward nature of the script that hit a few bumps quite often and could have been handled with a little more care.

The wizard - Again, the art was lovely and I enjoyed the drawings over the photographed backgrounds, but I had some issues with the script and found it could have been fixed with tighter statements. 

Barry the bat - Very funny and an interesting concept but I feel as if there was no real message to be found within the context.




]]> 2016-03-10 11:35:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100168313 https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100168624 Snowman: Animation was good as was the background design; improvements could have been some of the voices, as they didn't sounds very exciting.

Lost Teddy: Character design was good; improvements could be to work on the animation, as the movement was a little unimaginative.]]> 2016-03-10 11:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100168624 matthewreevearnold https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100171412 The animation was beautiful, I loved the design of the characters.]]> 2016-03-10 11:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hannah_bennett_ibe/haviiy52eiaj/wish/100171412