https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg What did you like and dislike about this review? en-us 2018-03-01 10:44:53 UTC 2018-03-01 18:25:25 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237089896 Sometimes feels like a toddler is speaking. Some alright words, though... sometimes]]> 2018-03-01 18:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237089896 https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237090313 - too much plot explanation?
- conclusion feels empty, doesn’t complete?]]> 2018-03-01 18:21:31 UTC https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237090313 https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237091265 The review is positive, but feels like they are explaining the plot too much. The final two paragraphs of the review are the best. I also like the second paragraph, which I thought was fine. ]]> 2018-03-01 18:22:45 UTC https://padlet.com/harryabbott76/h8yokhm3pyeg/wish/237091265