Writing a Paragraph - 3º Medio (29/9) by Italo Cornejo https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm en-us 2020-09-23 01:12:02 UTC 2023-04-07 16:53:11 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4da.png 4. Writing Stage - Example italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770479162 2020-09-23 01:04:19 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770479162 5. Writing Stage - (Student) italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493855 Topic sentence:

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Topic:

Controversy:

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Sources]]> 2020-09-23 01:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493862 2. Brainstorm - Example italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493864 2020-09-23 01:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493864 1. Brainstorm - Mind Map italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493867 2020-09-23 01:12:02 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/770493867 Ana Viveros https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784269037 Topic:  Technology in chilean children.

Controversy: The 40% of children have access to cellphone , computer , leaving their childhood games. It's increasingly dificult to separate what is real and what is not.

stance: In my opinion technology in the early age is a dangerous friend because in the future the children will leave their inocents games, they will have difficulty separating what is real and what is not, they may be overweight and they may become unsociable.


sources:
https://maiposalud.cl/blog/ninos-y-el-exceso-de-tecnologia-un-dano-silencioso/

https://www.diferenciador.com/ventajas-y-desventajas-de-la-tecnologia/amp/
]]> 2020-09-28 13:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784269037 Daniel Sepulveda https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784270876 Topic: My topic is, is technology positive or negative?

Controversy: Some people are in favor and some are against technology

Stance: I am in a neutral stance, because the tecnology has helped us and it has also hurt us, so i can´t selected a side.

Sources: 
https://latinamericanpost.com/es/19346-5-formas-en-que-la-tecnologia-afecta-tu-salud-mental#:~:text=Investigadores%20han%20demostrado%20que%20esta,reflexi%C3%B3n%20y%20retenci%C3%B3n%20de%20memoria.

https://www.larazon.es/blogs/sociedad-y-medio-ambiente/biologia-de-la-normalidad/tu-cerebro-no-distingue-entre-real-y-virtual-JM19370933/



]]> 2020-09-28 13:18:21 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784270876 Francisco Gonzalez V https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784273057 Topic: Technology, a wasted privilege

Controversy: the technology really being used well?

Stance: against

Sources:
https://larepublica.pe/tecnologia/2019/06/22/cuanto-tiempo-pasamos-en-redes-sociales/#:~:text=Con%20ello%2C%20el%20tiempo%20promedio,la%20vida%20(medio%20siglo).
https://ilifebelt.com/cuanto-tiempo-vida-pasas-las-redes-sociales/2017/04/
https://www.educaciontrespuntocero.com/noticias/tiempo-ninos-videojuegos/#:~:text=Con%20independencia%20del%20el%20debate,durante%20los%20fines%20de%20semana.


]]> 2020-09-28 13:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784273057 Lucas Padilla https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784273969 Topic: Technology and transportation

Controversy:

Stance:

Source:]]> 2020-09-28 13:19:08 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784273969 italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784350930 2020-09-28 13:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/784350930 katherine soto https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/801698469 topic:  The use of teenagers on cell pones

controversy: There is very little evidence from experimental studies regarding the effects of mobile devices on the life and development of adolescents. The strongest evidence points to the fact that the use of mobile devices negatively affects the quantity and quality of sleep and that it can worsen bullying and victimization. they also don't see what happens in real life.

stance: My opinion on this issue is that I am not in favor of using the cell phone since it is a distraction for the adolescent, for example instead of doing their homework they prefer to be on the cell phone in social networks, also not only that they do not have much communication with others by being on the phone.

sources:
https://www.neuromexico.org/2015/11/18/como-afectan-los-dispositivos-moviles-a-los-adolescentes/#:~:text=Hay%20muy%20poca%20evidencia%20de,empeorar%20el%20acoso%20y%20victimizaci%C3%B3n.]]> 2020-10-05 02:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/801698469 italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802901088 2020-10-05 13:18:53 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802901088 Final Essay - Italo Cornejo italocornejo1 https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802930828 Topic Sentence: ]]> 2020-10-05 13:26:04 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802930828 Final essay-Francisco Gonzalez https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802931049 Topic Sentence: In my opinion, technology is bringing different kinds of problems to people’s health, because of the excessive use of these.
S.D 1: People are spending a lot of time on social networks, much more than would be recommended. The same occurs with video games.

S.D 2: Using the phone instead being active can generate sedentary lifestyles, causing them to lose the habit of doing physical actions and generate obesity.

]]> 2020-10-05 13:26:07 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/802931049 Anais Ortega https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/803350272 Topic: Artificial Intelligence 

Controversy: What artificial intelligence cause in society in a some years.

Stance: I think artificial intelligence will create a future with a high percentage of unemployment, it will make humans lazy, it can get out of control having machines in the wrong hands.
We also have adventages with artificial intelligence, but we know that it is a bad for us.

Sources: https://builtin.com/artificial-intelligence

https://towardsdatascience.com/advantages-and-disadvantages-of-artificial-intelligence-182a5ef6588c]]> 2020-10-05 14:57:27 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/803350272 final essay- Ana Viveros https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/836660376  topic sentence: I think that a child is not prepared for the excesses of the "digital world."

S.D 1: According to the study "maiposalud", excess technology in children becomes a distraction for them when it comes to studying, thus hindering their learning.

S.D 2: A child who prefers to  spend much of the time in front of technological devices can become sedentary , very inactive and have weight problems over time.

S.D 3:  the same study shows that excess technology limits their ability to establish new relationships and interactions with other children.

Clossing sentence: As a result , the abuse of screens during cognitive development generates a total dependence of them.]]> 2020-10-16 18:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/836660376 Final essay- katherine soto https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/839542061 topic sentence: I believe that adolescents should not abuse their mobile phones because they can suffer negative effects.

S.D.1: there are studies that have tried to find that the use of the telephone is excessive in the majority of age, since negative psychological effects have been demonstrated.

S.D.2: The phone itself is not the problem, it is that they may have physical difficulties.

S.D.3: A University of Philadelphia study of more than 400 students between the ages of 11 and 15 found that the use of text messages had consequences for school performance.

clossing sentence: In short, of everything, occupying less the phone since that way we have a better life, for example, a more active life, communicate better with people and teach them what is best for you.]]> 2020-10-19 01:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/839542061 Final essay - Anais Ortega https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/839634451 Topic Sentence: In my opinion, artificial intelligence could lead to a high  unemployment for people and get lazy, without the desire to lead a productive life.

S.D.1: Artificial intelligence is already in our lives.  For example, the internet can be considered as an AI and it has become an adiction.

S.D.2: Studies say that artificial intelligence is a clear example of technology that advances by leaps and bounds.

S.D.3: The health industry can be fundamental in the care of patients, perhaps the cost is a sudden change so that machines are in our charge.

Clossing sentence: In conclusion, AI advances in a way that is considered fast for society.]]> 2020-10-19 02:57:05 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/839634451 sebastian villaseca https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/840929217 topic sentence : 
the automatization of things

this topic is controversial because people will always have the fear of what they do not know especially when they threaten to take away work or handle very dangerous things.

]]> 2020-10-19 13:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/840929217 Final essay - Daniel Sepulveda https://padlet.com/italocornejo1/h7zzb0tai0od3qrm/wish/860497671 Topic sentence: In my opinion, the technology is good and bad, all depends of the use and intentions of who use.

S.D.1: The technology help us every day, for example, when coking, for communicate, in the medicine, etc.

S.D.2: For other side, the technology in bad hands can be a weapon for destroying.

S.D.3: The technology can have bad or good consequences, and affects us in different ways.

Clossing sentence: (Reflection) We have to be conscious about the power to have in our hands.


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