“A Nimbus Two Thousand!” Ron moaned enviously. “I’ve never even touched one!” by Missy Shumate https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7 Make a list of what you notice in this sentence. Don’t forget to put your name in the title line. en-us 2019-02-04 13:29:50 UTC 2020-07-19 22:15:57 UTC hello@padlet.com Chelsea https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287885 Things I noticed about this sentence: they capitalized the first letter of every word in the first sentence that shows that Nimbus Two Thousand is a type of title. there are quotation marks showing what Ron said. also instead of saying he said they use emotion by saying " Ron moaned enviously". it also show s that Ron is excited and speaking loudly because it has a exclamation mark. These sentences are in Ron's point of view you know this because it said moaned enviously. You can tell that Ron is jealous because it says Ron is envious.

]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287885 Caroline Haynes https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287896 quotation marks
Capitilization
contractions
1 verb
3 punctuations at the end of sentence(periods and exclamation marks)
it shows who is  moaning or talking (Ron) 
it show a lot of enthousiasim]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287896 Lilia https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287914 capitalization of a title (Nimbus --Two Thousand)and name (Ron)
-Lots of punctuation (!.)
-Quotation marks
-contraction I've = I have
-quotation marks stop  half way through the sentence then start again


]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287914 Eli https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287924 capitalization in a sentence to make seem as someone is talking loudly.]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287924 Annelise https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287930 They used the adjective   enviously. they capitalized all the proper nouns. They used quotation marks to show what Ron was saying. There is one verb : moaned.   ]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287930 Jordon https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287951 I notice that it have adjectives and nouns , and it have periods at the end of the sentence.]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287951 I notice two pairs of quotation marks. https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287957 2019-02-04 13:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287957 H https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287994 2019-02-04 13:50:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327287994 Carlee Deas https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288005 There are two sets of quotation marks and two explanation marks.]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288005 Hailey https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288009 the things i noticed was Ron seemed very excited to see Harry's Nimbus Two Thousand,Ron moaned enviously is the expression Ron had to seeing a Nimbus Two Thousand,the sentence starts with quotation marks and ends with quotation marks,there are two pairs of exclamation marks to show that Ron had a lot of excitement in what he was saying,you can tell how bad Ron wants the broom because what he said was full of envy ]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288009 Ava https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288033 There is an exclamation mark in the sentence.]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:38 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288033 Inseo https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288045 I noticed that it has a captial letter  for the name.It has (!).It also has ("'').]]> 2019-02-04 13:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288045 Maggie https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288250 I noticed:
-They capitalized names and starts of sentences
-abbreviation;I've 
--quotation marks

]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:03 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288250 Youssef https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288444 Capitalization of 'Nimbus Two Thousand'
Exclamation point to show how he says what he says
Quotation marks to show that Ron is saying or talking about something.
Instead of 'Ron said' the author used greater words that are more specific like enviously to also describe what the character and how the character said the sentence or phrase.
It looks like 'Two Thousand' is a specific version of a Nimbus

]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:25 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288444 Tommy https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288478 A few things that I noticed is tgere A exclamation mark at the end. Starts off with quotations ends with quotations. THe first letter if the sentence is a capital letter when they say the Nimbus Two Thousand all the first letters of each word is capital. There is no period because he is saying something and u dont need a peroid for the sentence because he is excited . The perspective is from Rons. There are more then 1 set of quotations]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:28 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288478 Cayden https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288503 The sentences are told by Ron
there are three punctuation signs and two of them are !s

]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288503 Devin dcgriffin https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288508 not a lot of verbs 1 adverb which is enviously there is a lot of emotion and also theirs a lot punctuation its 3 person because it said that Ron moaned enviously  ]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288508 Gus https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288594 The words started capitalization
2 pairs of quotation marks that Ron is talking
A period




]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:42 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288594 Toleen Almaslami https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288647 the first thing I noticed is the capitalization in the beginning of the sentence and 'A   ]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288647 Audrey Erath https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288653 I notice that there are two pairs of quotation marks, to show that Ron is talking.The fact that both of Ron's statements do not show him in the happiest mood and have exlamation points make me think that Ron could be jealous about something. It also makes me think that a Nimbus Two Thousand could be valuable. This is what I notice.]]> 2019-02-04 13:51:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327288653 Talmage https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327289284 correct punctuation]]> 2019-02-04 13:53:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327289284 Eli https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327289907 Quotation marks and periods.]]> 2019-02-04 13:54:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327289907 Jenny https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290433 I notice that they used capital letters for the name of a broomstick. The sentence is told by Ron. There is a ]]> 2019-02-04 13:55:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290433 Talmage https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290609 you can tell how badly Ron wants that broom.]]> 2019-02-04 13:55:37 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290609 Eli https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290630 Enviously describes how Ron moaned.]]> 2019-02-04 13:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327290630 Eli https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327291801 Correct punctuation's.]]> 2019-02-04 13:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327291801 Maggie https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327292268 Verbs:]]> 2019-02-04 13:58:58 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327292268 Diya https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387292 Verb - moaned
Adjective - enviously
Quotation marks
Exclamation points 
You can tell that Ron really wants that broomstick]]> 2019-02-04 16:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387292 Nyjah https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387299 Correct capitalization and punctuation. there are question marks and explanation points for the right sentences. The quotation marks let you know when and when not Ron is talking. I also noticed A is capitalized and Nimbus Two Thousand, there first words are capitalized also. "Ron moaned enviously" describes how he moaned.]]> 2019-02-04 16:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387299 Olivia https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387506 correct punctuation,capitalization,quotation marks, envious describes how Ron is moaning. moaning is a adjective.Nimbus Two Thousand is the thing Ron is moaning about. Ron is exclaiming that he has never touched a Nimbus Two Thousand. You can tell that Ron wants the Nimbus Two Thousand. ]]> 2019-02-04 16:30:34 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387506 Graham https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387520 Things I noticed is both sentence that Ron is excited when he is talking. I know this because of the exclamation point at the end of each sentence.]]> 2019-02-04 16:30:36 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387520 Daniel Beasley https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387605 Some of the things I noticed in this sentence from Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone is that it is a dialogue. That means that someone is talking, and the writing is showing it. Another thing I noticed was that it has two proper nouns: Ron and the Nimbus Two Thousand. There is lots of punctuation, like exclamation marks, punctuation marks, and a period. Itt shows that Ron is very excited about the Nimbus Two Thousand. There is a number represented as words in this sentence as well. There is a cool word that I don't use very often, and that word is 'enviously'. I think that is a cool word that I should use more often. It is two sentences, not three. There is a contraction. Ron is very surprised or shocked in this sentence. Ron sounds a little jealous.]]> 2019-02-04 16:30:44 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387605 Chandler https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387867 I noticed that "Nimbus Two Thousand" is capitalized. It has the correct punctuation. It tells us who is saying those things by saying "Ron moaned enviously." There are quotation marks to show that Ron is talking. The beginning of the sentences are capitalized. There is a contraction ( I've). Ron seems to be excited about the broom (Nimbus Two Thousand) Ron's name is capitalized. Enviously describes how Ron moans.]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:08 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387867 Sera Rahman https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387890 the sentence is told by Ron and they punctuation in the sentence and there was Ron moaning about that Nimbus Two Thousand and he never ever in his whole life touched one but he really wanted to and there are quotation marks and verbs and adverbs plus Ron's mood about the Nimbus Two Thousand it is really saying that he is jealous about it and the adverb really was enviously because there emotion and I've is a contrast]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387890 Jake dcgriffin https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387965 I noticed that there has correct punctuation, and quotation mark.]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327387965 Carson Fuller P. https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388008 The quotation marks show what Ron is saying. Enviously means to show sadness. The puncuation was showing that ron was exited or freaked out about the Nimbus 2000. their are two sets of quotation mark telling the reader that Ron was saying. there are two sentences in because Ron is showing amotion. Nimbus Two Thousand is capitalized because its a Proper Noun.]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388008 Stuart Ron is talking, the broom stick name is capitalized in the sentence and Ron was talking about a broom stick. https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388050 2019-02-04 16:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388050 Gianna https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388270 I noticed that there are quotation mark to show that Ron is talking, an adjective that describes a broomstick, an adverb that describes how Ron moaned, capital letters for Ron's name and for the beginning of the sentence,  there are exclamation marks to show that Ron is surprised or/and shocked, and there is also an contraction, which is I've (I have)]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:35 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388270 Jessica G https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388450 Ron must really want the broom. The author described how Ron was a bit jealous because of the adverb moaned and the adjective enviously. ]]> 2019-02-04 16:31:49 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388450 Campbell https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388971 I noticed that the author made the sentece sound like Ron was whinning about Harry's new broom stick and that he would like to have the Nimbus two Thousand. and when the author used the word enviously it tells us that Ron is kind of jealouse of Harry and his broomstick. Also when the author used explamation marks it tells us that Ron is supriesd.]]> 2019-02-04 16:32:23 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327388971 Jaya https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389036 I noticed that they really show how Ron has never actually seen, or touched  the Nimbus Two Thousand. I also noticed how they paused and expressed how Ron said it then he continued. Another thing i noticed is that the author used exclamation points to show that Ron was excited or happy when he talked. One more thing i noticed is that the author wanted to make it seem like Ron was shocked to see the Nimbus Two Thousand.

]]> 2019-02-04 16:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389036 Colman https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389345 I see that the sentences are describing how Ron is fascinated in the Nibus two thousand. I also saw three sentences.correct punctuation. I liked the sentence because it has he right punctuation. It has quotation marks.]]> 2019-02-04 16:33:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389345 James https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389648 I've noticed that Nimbus Two Thousand is capitalized. I've also noticed that "enviously" describes how Ron moans. When Ron says "A Nimbus Two Thousand!", you can see he is excited because of the exclamation point. There are quotation marks to show that Ron is talking.]]> 2019-02-04 16:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327389648 Subscribe 2 pewdiepie https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327395870 2019-02-04 16:43:07 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/327395870 Audrey and Ava https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233764 "A fluffy baby sloth!" Kate exclaimed happily"I never thought I would get one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233764 Gus, Eli https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233774 "A Fat Donkey!" Steve said loudly. "I've ever seen one in my life!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233774 Caroline and Tommy https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233795 "A baby kangaroo!" Trenity moaned delightfully. " I've never even seen one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:15 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233795 Jenny and Inseo https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233818 ''A pet fox!'' Mom said angrily. ''Where did you even get that creature?'']]> 2019-02-06 13:46:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233818 Tommy and Caroline https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233887 "A baby kangoroo!" Trinity moaned delightfully. "I've never even seen one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:27 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233887 Annelise and Toleen https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233945 "what is that?" Fox said inpacintly." I've never seen a REAL girl befor!"\]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:33 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328233945 Ava and Audrey https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234104 "A fluffy baby sloth!" Kate exclaimed happy."I never thought I would get one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234104 Hailey and Miss.Shumate https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234114 "A pair of Jordan's!" Hayden said surprisingly I would never trade them fir a new pair of shoes!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234114 Toleen and Annelise https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234737 ''What's that?!?!'' Fox said impatiently. '' I've never seen a real girl before!'' ]]> 2019-02-06 13:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328234737 Devin and jordon dcgriffin https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235173 ''A new turtle!'' Jhon screamed happily, ''I never even seen one!'']]> 2019-02-06 13:48:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235173 Talmage And Youssef https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235205 "A book!" Bobby moaned sadly." I'd never want to touch one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:48:52 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235205 Eli and Gus https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235251 " A Fat Donkey!" Steve said loudly. " I've never even seen one in my life!" ]]> 2019-02-06 13:48:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235251 Carlee and Maggie https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235364 " My waterbottle!" Jimmy cryed anoyaly. "I've had it forever!']]> 2019-02-06 13:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235364 Maggie-Carlee https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235411 "My water bottle!" Jimmy cried annoyingly. "I've had it Forever!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:49:17 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328235411 Hailey and Miss.Shumate https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236163 "A new pair of Jordan's!" Hayden said surprisingly, "I would never trade them for a new pair of shoes"]]> 2019-02-06 13:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236163 Cayden and Cayden https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236361 ''A Lamborghini!'' elled Ja'kayah jealously. I've never been near one!'']]> 2019-02-06 13:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236361 Lilia https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236385 " A big, fluffy, bunny!" Lily cried lovingly. "Can we keep it?"]]> 2019-02-06 13:51:21 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236385 Chelsea https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236404 "A cute puppy!" Hannah moaned surprisingly. "I wish I had one!"]]> 2019-02-06 13:51:24 UTC https://padlet.com/mashumate/h6xbbu1cs9d7/wish/328236404