https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj Narrative vs Persuasive en-us 2017-04-20 22:48:06 UTC 2025-11-03 05:04:22 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395179 Narrative-The Day I brought my phone to School
Ricky!! ,get off your phone do that at your own time. Okay miss. 
5, 4, 3, 2, 1 rrrrring. It's time to go outside now. Boom suddenly a basketball hit my head. My head was spinning I felt so dizzy, then I collapsed to the ground. Quick someone yelled get his phone and call the ambulance!!!  
The ambulance arrived and took me to the hospital. Then I woke up to the sound of the machine beeping.

Persuasive-Technology benefits school
I strongly believe that technology benefits all schools.Technology is extremely easy to access. Just a touch of a button can allow you to explore anywhere in the world.

Technology also saves paper and trees from being cut down. For an exampleIt is a very effective way of being Sustainable in our world of limited resources, this is why technology benefits all schools.


]]> 2017-04-21 00:14:17 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395179 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395200  Narative : the day I brought my phone to school (narrative)

ZZZ ZZZ ZZZ Z- what's up mum "hi son um I was wondering if your ok  the mother worriedly "don't worry mum I'm ok😅 Sighed youssef 
Oh ok son bye bye"bye mum okay bye .


]]> 2017-04-21 00:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395200 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395233 The day I bought my phone to school(Narrative) 
I just arrived at school with my phone in my pocket hiding it and making sure it doesn't fall out I turned my notifications off I think well I can't get caught or tell anyone at have time they called me to the office also my mum and dad were there "what are you doing here" I questioned shockingly they had these angry faces on we had a long talk I thought it was about the phone but no it was about a week ago a kid made me really mad so I gave him a bruised eye but at least  it's not the phone.

]]> 2017-04-21 00:15:02 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395233 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395248 Narrative_The day XD🤡🤑
Once upon a time 😴zzzzzzzzzzz I woke up and wash my face and brushed my teeth and brushed my hair. I went to the dining table and saw the yumminess on the table I ate the food/breakfast and drank tea. I wore my clothes took my phone and went in the car. As I reached my school I went to my class I was late but I didn't give I went to class and saw my friends youssef and josh they have brought there phones as well so we got em out and started playing/going on Facebook we got caught by the teacher miss Diaz  and got sent to mr Robinson/principal and he rang our parents.THE END.👾🤖🤑
 ]]> 2017-04-21 00:15:19 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395248 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395261 Narrative- The day I brought my phone to school 
I been waiting to bring my phone to school,last time someone brought their phone to school the teachers took their phone away which seemed like forever. I got my phone last year for my birthday, I been waiting to bring my phone to school so I can show all my friends and today is the day the teacher let us bring our phone's.

Persuasive-The day I brought my phone to school 

]]> 2017-04-21 00:15:33 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395261 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395303 " whahoo" i yell , I been waiting for weeks for Wednesday to arrive and here it is I get to bring my phone to school.Me and my friend Emma decided to bring our phones to school hopefully the teacher doesn't catch us texting . " Alex get in the car " shouts mum . I hop in the car , we're at school as i step in I see miss 🐽pig nose that's not her name I just like to call her that by the way she always complaining about everything. I just tip toe away and see Emma standing next to the monkey bars. "Ding ding " the bell rings time to go to class.


]]> 2017-04-21 00:16:09 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395303 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395342 I have been waiting to bring my phone to school 


Persuasive 
So we can use it for learning and online tests because we normally use iPads so we can phones the same way and the school can save money]]> 2017-04-21 00:16:41 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395342 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395455 Technology benefits at school 
Persuasive 
Phones lots and lots of lives saved because of phones people call 000 On it. For police firefighters and ambulance services. So why is it not allowed in school?
If there is a emergency in school and you have a phone you can call 000. You are less likely to get burnt. If you have a phone Think about it.

]]> 2017-04-21 00:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395455 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395484 The day I brought my phone to school narrative 
DING DING , as my alarm rang . I woke up very tired and didn't want to go to school. It was the same everyday , I wanted today to be different . While I was eating breakfast I was thinking what I should do to make today different. Suddenly the idea came to me , my phone . 'I should bring my phone to school' I whispered to my self. I went to school and I felt confident but at the same time I felt scared. After math class my friend came up to me , hi laura she said , I told her that I have to go but then my book fell , I reached down to get it , as I got it my phone fell out of my pocket]]> 2017-04-21 00:18:00 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395484 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395489 The day l brought my phone to school.     NARRITIVE                

I reached in my school bag to grab my phone. My friend Jack grabbed my hand and slid my hands away from my bag. 'Phones aren't aloud at
this school' explained Jack in a quiet voice. Behind us we could hear 
loud footsteps. 'What are you kids doing'! yelled the principal. 'Nothing Mr.Edd said Jack in fear.

]]> 2017-04-21 00:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395489 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395519 As I walk to school I feel my head fill with horrible worries about my phone, thinking if it was a good idea that I brought my phone to school or not.]]> 2017-04-21 00:18:31 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395519 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395550 As l step on the road on my way to school not trying to drop my phone on the ground my hands start to sweat l start to walk absolutely NOT aware of the crazy dog behind me l start walking OUT OF KNOW WHERE l hear BARKS! I run around like a CHICKEN with NO HEAD and the car driving not knowing l'm being chased by a CRAZY dog . I DONT know Where THE HEAK the Teacher is um HELLO lm BEING chased by A (cereal killer ) AW and that's not the worst l get poop on my head thanks a lot bird " bird your welcome" than l jump over the fence like a hood l've always wanted to do that]]> 2017-04-21 00:18:52 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395550 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395573 The day I bought my phone to school (narrative)
I had my phone in my pocket and class just started my phone started to ring and everybody looks at me and as I was going to put it on silent the teacher grabbed my phone and said you will get this back at the end of the day. I could see her puting my phone in the principals room.so I snuck in

]]> 2017-04-21 00:19:09 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395573 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395658 The school bell rings, I sneak my phone in when. 'David! What are you doing in these halls when your suppose to be in class!' Yelled Mr.Hamten, his voice echoed through the hall. I then ran to my class room, but as I was running, my phone dropped. 'Well look what we have here, a phone!' He then grabbs my phone and left, my heart sank. It was finally snack time, that was when I walked to the principals room.

 I take a deep breath and walk in. I shut the door behind me and I take a seat. 'Please Mr.hamten, can I have my.' Before I could finish my sentence he says no. 'But why?' He stands up and takes a deep breath.]]> 2017-04-21 00:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395658 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395949 Today's the day I break the rules. Today's the day we get freedom from
Rules starting by taking a phone to school. Okay we need a plan I'll hide my phone in my bag.NAVI YOUR GONNA GET LATE! Coming mum. I rushed to the bus there was a creepy guy in the bus starring at me.pssh the bus doors open I enter my school everyone's looking at me starring into my soul sundenly there faces turn into a huge smiles at that moment I wanted to get out of there. The doors slumed shut I remberd that guy that I saw in the bus he was a teacher from my school he got fired because he yelled at a stundent nearly gave him a heart attack.i pass out then wake up everything was normal today I learnt a lesson 
Never mess with your teacher]]> 2017-04-21 00:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395949 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395997 Joshua's NARRATIVE - The day I brought my phone to school
]]> 2017-04-21 00:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167395997 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167396180 Ones upon a time shimmer,shine,tabarek and zahraa were sleeping in the our rooms so in our room

]]> 2017-04-21 00:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167396180 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167396623 Persuasive

The day I brought my phone to school ]]> 2017-04-21 00:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/167396623 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168515323 The day I brought my phone to school (narrative)
One morning I was getting ready for school than I put my phone in my bag on the way out the door than when I got in class

]]> 2017-04-26 23:43:15 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168515323 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168515478 hi ]]> 2017-04-26 23:45:14 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168515478 https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168516605 As I brought my phone to school I started texting my friends in a group and in the car I got my computer and started to hack the schools password and username to the wifi so it WORKED as I screamed OMG IT WORKS :3 it was hard to get my phone in my pocket because my room was full of cameras 🎥I GOT A 💡 I will take off the cameras off boom as the signal turned off I put my phone in my pocket and went to school with my new Nike cover I started to text my friends Akram,Joshua,Sabi, my brother saw my iPhone 7 plus I said to him don't tell anyone please he said okay 👌 we got to school and I saw akram and Joshua playing on there phones in my old class room and I started to play GTR2017 there's a all cool cars I got the FAST AND Furious 7 CAR!! As the teacher hear me scream the teacher comes in the wrong room and I told my friends put there phones in the bag 💼 and they said k and we ran out phew as we run away DINGGGGGGGGGGGGG BELL WENT FOR LUNCH 🍴 I SAID TO SAY YEHAHHUHHHHHH 👶 And I started eating as I run outside and run in the geezbow 

Persuasive 
Technology benefits school because if u have to go home ereal u can call ur mum/dad to take u home ❤️❤❤️❤❤️❤❤️❤❤️❤🏳🏳🏳🏳🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶🇮🇶]]> 2017-04-27 00:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/diaz_adelaine_a/h67k37nwvjdj/wish/168516605