7E7 - W28 Writing a story *part 2* by Vinschool Metropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l Made with a little mischief en-us 2022-03-03 07:37:16 UTC 2022-03-03 08:51:35 UTC hello@padlet.com Give feedback to your friends vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289628 You can follow this:
Structure & Language
  1. The story begins with the given sentence
  2. The story has exposition, action and resolution
  3. The writer has used past tenses.
  4. The writer has used connecting words and phrases.
  5. The writer has used imagery
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]]> 2022-03-03 07:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289628 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289635 2022-03-03 07:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289635 Timing: 15' vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289636 Write your story in about 80-100 words.
Pick one of the first sentences below and write a story:
1. When An woke up, he realized he didn't remember anything.
2. Tung sat next to an F0 yesterday.
3. It was the most important day of the month for Mai.


]]> 2022-03-03 07:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289636 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289641 2022-03-03 07:37:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075289641 vinschoolmetropolis https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075292604 2022-03-03 07:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075292604 Ngọc đoẹp troai ngoc005119 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075343400 It was the most important day of the month for Mai. I was a little child without parent. But that day she was adopted, a kind women was adopted me because she can not make a baby. I feel so happy after a long time in the orphanage. Her picked me into her car and drive me to a restaurant to eat some icecream. After a few day lived with my mom, i love her so much and her was really good, she gave me anything i want. It was so diffirent between the orphanage and in a family]]> 2022-03-03 08:16:05 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075343400 mỹ uyênn https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075343721 It was the most important day of the month for Mai. That day, Mai was accepted to work at the company, which she loved and dreamed of since childhood. When she woke up very early that morning. First, she eagerly prepares everything. But then she suddenly realized, her interview papers, she left at her parents' house, because last week, she went to her parents' house to celebrate. So, after that, she rushed to her parents' house. And she got it, but, her car ran out of gas, and now the street is stuck in traffic. She worried, looked at her watch, and decided to go the other way. After a while of struggling, she reached the front door of the company. But, it is locking =)))). She finally realized, that day wasn't her working day]]> 2022-03-03 08:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075343721 Khuê khue011038 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075353356 When An woke up, he realized he didn't remember anything. He stood up and felt strange "Where is this place?". He wants to leave the room but he doesn't have the key. There's a piece of paper which is on the table, it says "Hi An, hope you have a great time here" underneath with a phone number. After reading the paper, An suddenly remembered he was a detective and he was investigating a case but for some reason, he was here. Thanks to his detective talent, An was able to crack the code, he arranged the books on the shelf so that the marks on the books were in the order of the code. An inscription was engraved on the cabinet, another line of code 0493. An found a locked box, he entered the password, inside was the key. A gladly opened the door, but it led him to a forest. There was a crow near him on a tree branch, which gave him a map. After a long time following the map the crow gave An it led him to a lake. There was a woman, when he looked into her eyes, he remembered everything. He is investigating a case about that woman and he is knocked unconscious by some mysterious force. And then he saw the same mysterious force standing next to the woman. At that moment he fainted and, when he regained consciousness, he was in that room again.]]> 2022-03-03 08:22:50 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075353356 Duc B duc010693 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075356646 Tung sat next to an F0 yesterday. After returning home Tung began to experience symptoms such as cough, sore throat and fatigue. But he just thought it was nothing but a cold. Today Tung continued to go to school and started to feel more tired than yesterday. Symptoms gradually become more obvious. Tung asked her to go to the infirmary for medical examination. The nurse tested him for covid and he was positive for covid. Before coming to the medical room, Tung played and interacted with many other people. And just now I also received a notice that the whole school will resume online learning again, and the most important announcement is that the whole school has been infected with covid, and among them is me. 😎]]> 2022-03-03 08:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075356646 Dieu anh https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075366205 Today is the most important day of Mai.she will take the test.but yesterday she didn't study for the test.Because,yesterday she spent the whole night watching the movie and now she is very tired.After entering the exam room, she had a piece of paper in her hand.She didn't understand anything, so she had to copy the question paper so that she wouldn't give it a blank.she thought 0 point but no.she got 0.2 point. Mai was very happy about that.]]> 2022-03-03 08:31:32 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075366205 Phạm Minh Nghĩa nghia004553 https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075373932 When An woke up, he realized he didn't remember anything. He woke up in a modern bed and He knew that He didn't stay at his home. When he opened the door in his room, He saw a really modern city. Suddenly, a man came into his room, that man said : " Why your clothes look ancient ? This year is 3022." An was really surprise after that man said. He wanted to travel to 2022 because his birthday was 1/9/2022. That man agreed and then An slept for an hour. At the end, An woke up and He saw his house. He thought that was a dream but He saw a paper wrote " bye - From . . . ( 3022 ) "]]> 2022-03-03 08:36:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vinschoolmetropolis/h3t6g8twr4l0ff6l/wish/2075373932