G6 Ms. E's I&S FORMATIVE - Peer Review by Erin Park

G6 Ms. E's I&S FORMATIVE - Peer Review by Erin Park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1 Find your section (1B or 3A) and your name. en-us 2020-09-07 03:20:13 UTC 2026-03-02 06:03:53 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f601.png TEACHER EXAMPLE erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/724042501 Ms. E's My Map link: https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=10mtfKd-qDSKzqjaFGcJGYw_UxiNA7fIm&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-07 03:20:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/724042501 Gilad cool Israel map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/726032729 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?hl=en&mid=1HayY03Y4PZTBolXX0zms-RYwIwjxeH4J&ll=31.766813531144237%2C35.20383989999999&z=18]]> 2020-09-08 04:16:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/726032729 Tanu's Ubon Rachathani 27tanul3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730116482 Map link: https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1BjN16EHnCZxA5sGeXcTFuexVnk7ML-7c&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-09 06:09:34 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730116482 BONNIE'S MAP OF GUANGZHOU 27baoyil3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730148570 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1O3H_JDU3E35yQRmuQBIrcXL3PpGZQKQj&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-09 06:29:30 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730148570 Akari's NewZeaLand map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730415823 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1kRAsAtOoDVBFh1fQIKJGd1tHT6tE-QAl&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-09 09:29:19 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730415823 Damla's Map of Istanbul,Turkey 27damlat2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730514672 2020-09-09 11:05:21 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730514672 Krish https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730572801 Krish's Bangkok Map
https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=198fiKro4QKWyUKPgnIshBlu-ip6MDoXH&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-09 11:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730572801 Yuna's Beautiful Jeju Map 27yunac3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730596159 https://www.google.com/maps/d/u/0/edit?mid=1ceFXzvGFiV5yh_hGSK2UDemxOc2z-nwI&ll=33.39520787943165%2C126.61641675000001&z=11 ]]> 2020-09-09 12:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730596159 Maria`s Norway https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730651073 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1Xa8m0XfphiLCb6BwiroTXGgs_ulNCaEl&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-09 12:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730651073 Mia Israel https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730809038 My maps map

]]> 2020-09-09 13:07:17 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730809038 𝔸𝕝𝕧𝕚𝕟'𝕤 𝕄𝕒𝕡 𝕆𝕗 𝔾𝕦𝕒𝕟𝕘𝕫𝕙𝕠𝕦 27haojuny3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730960195 ⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲
sources link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/165kUSBKRA7V7vagCe3uea_4DVmL1vLonBpZHcZMDhMc/edit?usp=sharing

(If this map link doesn't work, there is also a link the the sources doc)

map link: https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1BV8sAdI3wbPPXVkexaEf39JNtu8TQrHF&usp=sharing
⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲⌲]]> 2020-09-09 13:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/730960195 Roy's Sydney 27boxiangt2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733490454 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1Z0-WPHEWPjslbGyQA3SOOqgWf_OhTX2c&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-10 01:17:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733490454 oskars amazing berlin 27oskare2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733491733

https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1AgdWkNJ7pUZ4cmtzJpIWPlZdWkV1HtV0&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-10 01:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733491733 Alp's Turkey map 27alpa3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733494495 click this image for the link ▽]]> 2020-09-10 01:19:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733494495 Tanaya's talented tour map. https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733498661 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=15NQASzF4CRSZL8qZSYAFakBFsXzunT9H&ll=21.286064887838357%2C78.37731415&z=6]]> 2020-09-10 01:21:38 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733498661 27alpa3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733501991 2020-09-10 01:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733501991 Riley's Map Of Australia!(Sydney) 27rileyd2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733514366 My Link To My Map]]> 2020-09-10 01:29:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733514366 Ali's amazing map of Dubai 27aliu2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733515250 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1sod97zyd9l41uhpkKch2WZ37PoPy80rz&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-10 01:29:36 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733515250 Aniruddh 27aniruddhs https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733522791 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1T1n_tL0OSG9Yoy_jZruiR-_iAxiSSQWz&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-10 01:33:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733522791 Roch's MyMap 27rochb2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733542836 2020-09-10 01:42:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733542836 Albert's Seoul Map 27jaehyungl https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733551221 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1wUh80j1xSXvXOiPsKbscXxWpFo09f_X8&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-10 01:46:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733551221 27giladf1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733563517 For criterion c, i give you 6 because you don't have source on your website.]]> 2020-09-10 01:52:09 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733563517 Armaan's best map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733574209 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1aZaR8XMmA3KCZWRz_UkiJ3sGEJVLXdK5&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-10 01:57:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/733574209 Julia's Map of Noteworthy New York 27juliat3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734348881 2020-09-10 09:32:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734348881 Mia's Map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734359058 2020-09-10 09:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734359058 James' Tokyo, Japan Map 27jamesw https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734385253 Map Link: https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=14ZJaaMGwEvJT8u20OnA7niaqx2hxjYzl&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-10 10:06:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734385253 27juliat3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734395155 https://www.google.com/maps/d/u/0/viewer?mid=1QKR81oW3A2rdd8XNHrthlYCSlearzQGV&ll=42.662492225903655%2C-74.27831155&z=7

]]> 2020-09-10 10:16:21 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734395155 𝙽𝚊𝚘𝚖𝚒'𝚜 𝙻𝚘𝚗𝚍𝚘𝚗 𝚊𝚍𝚟𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚞𝚛𝚎 27naomim2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734402394 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=17CIYMR2YwPRu3DoeFFv9obBXoPcaj2Nf&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-10 10:22:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734402394 Michael's Mymap 27haoyuanz https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734418455 Michael's Shanghai Mymap]]> 2020-09-10 10:38:35 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734418455 Amaani's Map of India https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734464478 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1hMbNFHxKUvvVVaiqpctgCBdRMWMCYwP4&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-10 11:20:17 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734464478 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734474796 2020-09-10 11:28:47 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734474796 Filippa's map 27filippaz2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734507106 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1NXILqrkmKzQAqPv6EURWCj3wlbYQyzA2&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-10 11:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734507106 My Map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734546595 my map]]> 2020-09-10 12:09:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734546595 Ada's home country map 27chengl3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734706533 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=19Y5jcdMUGOoIaLkf2HWCvVibV6rTQG_d&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-10 12:57:18 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/734706533 Sanne's Map Of: Heemstede, The Netherlands 27sanneo2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737136727 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1kdNfA2hgwQ8H8SWU2OvHQsQAVY2NFm3b&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-10 22:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737136727 Junren's My Map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737567035 2020-09-11 02:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737567035 Ellie (Eunchae)'s Map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737578930 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1Mq0FJc1_xNUQWXRGvoQe9uiIB9bHI3jN&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 02:34:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737578930 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737589827 2020-09-11 02:39:45 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737589827 Lily's Marvellous Melbourne 27lilys1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737593767 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=15HuzrzpMDyUMhcCaiLHEFWzwokg4DMoz&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 02:41:53 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737593767 Aiden's map 27aidenj2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737598251 My Map: https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=13Q4hx8B3eCzBO7urwCVOKrZ3rIbzuJxo&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-11 02:44:17 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737598251 27rowanb1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737611241 2020-09-11 02:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737611241 Riina's Tokyo Map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737615277 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1wlsag0_YQJYBqT5VPdXyvshz5Z7ZhJ22&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 02:53:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737615277 Khoi's Ho Chi Minh City Map 27gian2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737617171 Map Link:
https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1UoqaatDPzbJqE1TtzKWh3PFatOCj54iX&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 02:54:07 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737617171 Irenes pretty cool map of Goyang-si (Korea) 27irenej https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737617332 mymaps link:

https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1wRMcEYGaxxbfpPhPehE-hBLNFb1hX6Lk&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 02:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737617332 MAP 27samairaj3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737618618 2020-09-11 02:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737618618 Alvey's My Map 27alveyp1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737691136 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=13UzR37WGYUIWLL8uvkFv1w4or_JINBBe&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-11 03:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737691136 huangxin https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737723906 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1cER37hz7gYXGPyEPi6rhrw82h0NR0dBO&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 04:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737723906 27giladf1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737735558 For criterion A, I will give you 6 because you only write one sentence. Except for that, the rest are good. ]]> 2020-09-11 04:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737735558 Riina's Tokyo map https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737743607 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1wlsag0_YQJYBqT5VPdXyvshz5Z7ZhJ22&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 04:16:03 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737743607 shravans mymap 27shravang2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737923397 2020-09-11 06:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737923397 link 27shravang2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737928741 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1UzfxhIQzaHKwDzBzodNSua5P-WJt2pVh&usp=sharing

]]> 2020-09-11 06:45:44 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/737928741 Cici 27yukez https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738066279 https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1PfGZvL1uNcSNb0nU2FZikA5GKHEcARfm&usp=sharing]]> 2020-09-11 08:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738066279 Safoorahs map of London 27safoorahm1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738165769
my maps link

https://www.google.com/maps/d/edit?mid=1rwDWaWXDb5lwSN5d7aQz9f3Eda5oTivJ&usp=sharing ]]> 2020-09-11 10:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738165769 Irene 27irenej https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738237557 The score I give for this post for Criterion A Knowledge and Understanding is 4-5 because i think you did really well with the BOLTSS features, they were clear and it looked really cool! The score I give for this for Criterion C Communicating is 5-6 because i saw your descriptions and they were really clear, but i think you couldve added more detail. like i said, next time you should add more details, but overall, great job!

]]> 2020-09-11 11:57:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738237557 Juyoun's Seoul Map 27juyouns2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738807943 I am very sorry for posting my assignment late, I had a huge technical problem which was my computer not working properly. I am VERY SORRY.
Map link: https://www.google.com.sg/maps/d/u/0/viewer?mid=1RHciUVLTJ_iHgk-5h7lzrheb3mNauFhP&ll=37.539928049267225%2C127.03749135&z=12

]]> 2020-09-11 14:25:52 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/738807943 Syd's MyMap 27sydneyc2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/742770791

https://www.google.com.sg/maps/d/edit?mid=1cdvM6xRFOtCIkIXZtFVAfTuPkDpgejuH&ll=-22.228392727459543%2C138.14532374060377&z=5

]]> 2020-09-14 04:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/742770791 Unit 1 Formative 2: Writing Skills (Travel) Blog - Peer Review erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/766817490

Step1:

Here are the Peer Evaluation Assignments. There's only 1 criterion this time, Criterion C:

Upload your travel blog PDF to your column.
Copy the peer review Criterion Sentence Starter into the column for Review, and add your evaluation + reasoning. High quality reasoning may require 2-3 sentences to be clear!
Reference the attached Criterion descriptors in your reasoning! That's how we know we're all on the same page!

Step 2
If you finish early, you can start replying to the reviews you've received!

Step 3
When you are done with peer review, edit your travel blog by applying the feedback given by your peer evaluator.

Step 4
Once you are done with editing your work, complete the self assessment once again on the task sheet itself, save your work as PDF and upload it on UC again. Be sure to upload a comment that compares your self-assessment and peer's comments into your column.

Step 5
Don't forget to click on submit on UC.

]]> 2020-09-22 04:00:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/766817490 Criterion C for Travel Blog erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/766821793 2020-09-22 04:03:39 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/766821793 Peer Review (Travel Blog) erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767214057 The best-fit evaluation for this travel blog is # because...]]> 2020-09-22 07:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767214057 once you are done editting.... Self-Asessment (Travel Blog) erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767216099 I think the best-fit rating for my Travel Blog is # because....

Specifically, I did well on . . . .

On the summative task, I can do better on . . . .

]]> 2020-09-22 07:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767216099 Travel Blog Peer (3A) erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767333846 2020-09-22 08:31:22 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767333846 Peer Review & Self Assessment - Writing Skills erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767339926 Peers - Criterion C:
Self - Criterion C: ]]> 2020-09-22 08:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/767339926 My travel blog https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770960967 2020-09-23 05:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770960967 Tanu's travel blog! 27tanul3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961007 2020-09-23 05:32:29 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961007 Yuna's Travel blog~~~! https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961471 2020-09-23 05:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961471 Mia's travel blog https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961624 2020-09-23 05:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770961624 Khoi's Travel Blog 27gian2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770963700 2020-09-23 05:33:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770963700 Travel Blog 27haoyuanz https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770964315 2020-09-23 05:34:13 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770964315 My Travel Blog 27krishp2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770966438 2020-09-23 05:35:21 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770966438 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770967187 2020-09-23 05:35:45 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770967187 ♤Saƒoorah Travel Blog♤ 27safoorahm1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770968461 2020-09-23 05:36:24 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770968461 27akarih2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770968519 2020-09-23 05:36:26 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770968519 Irenes travel blog 27irenej https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770969312 2020-09-23 05:36:50 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770969312 Travel Blog 27aidenj2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770969355 2020-09-23 05:36:52 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770969355 Travel Blog 27jamesw https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/770971994 You have to travel to learn
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Self - Criterion C: i was very nervous that i did it wrong and was second guess but after i read my peer review and reread my story i felt a lot better that it turned out ok, even though i had a little bit of mistakes.]]> 2020-09-23 06:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/771050612 shravans travel blog 27shravang2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774224900 2020-09-24 01:08:31 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774224900 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774226118 2020-09-24 01:09:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774226118 Gilad's travel blog 27giladf1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774226312 2020-09-24 01:09:11 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774226312 Travel Blog Of Sydney (Australia) 27rileyd2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774227091 2020-09-24 01:09:37 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774227091 My Travel Blog 27aliu2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774228181 2020-09-24 01:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774228181 My travel blog 27filippaz2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774228824 2020-09-24 01:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774228824 Sydney 27sydneyc2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774229951 2020-09-24 01:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774229951 27rochb2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774230287 2020-09-24 01:11:15 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774230287 27amaanij2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774230413 2020-09-24 01:11:19 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774230413 Armaan's blog 27armaans3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774231233 The best-fit evaluation for this travel blog is # because...]]> 2020-09-24 01:11:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774231233 27chengl3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774231816 2020-09-24 01:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774231816 Albert Travel Blog 27jaehyungl https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774232497 2020-09-24 01:12:20 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774232497 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774232596 2020-09-24 01:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774232596 Aniruddh's map of Vadodara, India 27aniruddhs https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774234554 2020-09-24 01:13:23 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774234554 27juliat3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774237399 2020-09-24 01:14:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774237399 27alpa3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774239377 2020-09-24 01:15:45 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774239377 27boxiangt2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774243945 2020-09-24 01:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774243945 1B Peer Review erin_park https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774246009 2020-09-24 01:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774246009 my self review 27sydneyc2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774252013 I think the best-fit rating for my Travel Blog is a 5 because.... I was able to write
clearly and I wrote in a tour guide voice The cultural importance and personal
significance of each location is well explained and elaborated.
Specifically, I did well on my first E of the TEEL paragraph because I put a lot of detail,
time and effort into it.
On the summative task, I can do better on putting more detail into my evidence/ 2nd
E of the TEEL paragraph next time I do a TEEL paragraph.]]> 2020-09-24 01:21:51 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774252013 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774262796 2020-09-24 01:26:54 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774262796 Peer Review (Travel Blog) 27giladf1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774272263 The best-fit evaluation for this travel blog is 8 because you have 3 paragraphs. And your paragraphs are clear. And there no mistakes in your writing.]]> 2020-09-24 01:31:03 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774272263 27naomim2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774282575 2020-09-24 01:35:42 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774282575 Peer Review & Self Assessment - Writing Skills 27rileyd2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774922173 Peers - Criterion C: 5
Self - Criterion C: 5]]> 2020-09-24 07:27:59 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/774922173 Peer Review & Self Assessment - Writing SkillsPeers 27aniruddhs https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/775435502 - Criterion C: Self: I think the best-fit rating for my Travel Blog is 7 because it uses a tour guide’s voice and has a TEEL paragraph. Specifically, I did well on having a tour guide’s voice and following the TEEL structure.

On the summative task, I can do better on using all the words because I only used 3 words.

- Criterion C: Peer

]]> 2020-09-24 12:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/775435502 Comments/Feedback 27amaanij2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/775846135 I think the best-fit rating for my Travel Blog is 6 because I used a tour guide voice. I used TEEL structure on all my paragraphs. I listed at least 2 useful sources that I used while writing this.

Specifically, I did well on writing my formative by following the TEEL structure. I was a bit nervous until I got the hang of it. I also did well on my punctuation. Most oif it was good.

On the summative task, I can do better on elaborating more. I didn’t elaborate a lot, I can do better. I can stretch out some parts more.

Gilad's Feedback
The best-fit evaluation for this travel blog is 8 because you have 3 paragraphs. And your paragraphs are clear. And there no mistakes in your writing.

]]> 2020-09-24 14:06:03 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/775846135 Peer review comparing 27jaehyungl https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783246694 Peer review: 7
Self review: 7

I think the best-fit rating for my Travel Blog is 7 because I use a good tour guide voice and describe what that place has or some histories about the place. Also using well structured TEEL paragraphs. And I also tried to make the travelers interested in this travel blog.

Specifically, I did well on details how to go there and some histories and describe the fun part about the places.

]]> 2020-09-28 03:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783246694 What I can do Better 27jamesw https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783385475 What I can do better is to add multiple sources to where I got my information from and continue on going beyond 2 pins for my summative assessment. I also don't want to forget the title this time so that readers know what I am talking about.]]> 2020-09-28 05:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783385475 BETTER NEXT TIME 27sanneo2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389676 TEEL:
I need to improve on elaborating more on each collum. This will help me reach for a higher score. I will also add interesting facts and a bit of what I PERSONALLY think of the place. I can also work on putting more time in it. I did well on my topic and the main idea.

BOLTTS:
I need it work on talking more in tour guid voice. I also need to work on elaboration in each point. I did well on my BOLTSS elements.
♡Sanne♡]]> 2020-09-28 05:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389676 What i can do better next time 27irenej https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389683 next time i have to be more descriptive and i will have to insert the 5 words which is Physical, Personal, Cultural, and the other words. i also be more persuading so it could actually attract the people who are reading the paragraph so it can make them want to go to the place i chose. i also need to work on my grammar.]]> 2020-09-28 05:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389683 Riina https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389687 Next time I think I can include more details in the My Maps. For the blog, I could also include more information. I could search about the place more deeply and make more details about the place I chose. ]]> 2020-09-28 05:20:47 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783389687 l will do different next time is to https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783390281 First l will put interesting facts on my maps also l will add some personal ideas

And on blog writing l will put more details and describe more about the place that am talking about.]]> 2020-09-28 05:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783390281 What I can do differently in my summative task https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783391309 I need to make my description more clear and I need to add more descriptions to improve my writing. I will need to find more information.]]> 2020-09-28 05:21:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783391309 What could I do better 27haoyuanz https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783392645 I need to add more details and interesting facts to my travel blog. I can also put on more personal features and physical features on the blog and the mymap. In my mymap I can make more than 2 pins and give them detailed in formation. The places I choose on the map should also be famous and fun to go.]]> 2020-09-28 05:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783392645 Comparing feedback 😀 27tanul3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783393101 Next time I will try to elaborate more on each of my pins including putting more facts. Next time I will also try to put maybe one to two more pins for each layer. On my travel blog I will try to have more detail and elaborate more so I will work on elaboration on all my work.]]> 2020-09-28 05:22:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783393101 Areas of improvement 27aidenj2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783393716 My Maps: I think i should add more features, Also make them more descriptive than before
Travel Blog: I also think that my writing Should be better for grammar and to make it easier to understand. ]]> 2020-09-28 05:23:12 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783393716 What Am I Going To Do Differently On The Summative? 27samairaj3_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394487 I got a 5 in both criterions but based on my feedback, I should be more alert on my descriptions because even I agree that I didn't do a great job on them. The same thing for my pins.

For my travel blog, I will use the keywords next time and try to not sound so rushed in this. ]]> 2020-09-28 05:23:38 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394487 What I can do better next time 27yukez https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394533 I need to write my description more clearer, in tour-guide voice and I need to write more information to let the reader easier to understand.]]> 2020-09-28 05:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394533 For Criterion C 27baoyil3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394552 I need to add more detail and write more to tell that place is good to travel.]]> 2020-09-28 05:23:41 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783394552 What I can do better 27akarih2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783395686 I think on summative I can add a little bit of more interesting facts and a little bit more description of a place. Also when I think I can add the name of the place because for some part I didn't know the name of the place. In TEEL and in BOLTSS too. I think I can improve these things.]]> 2020-09-28 05:24:21 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783395686 Improvement! 27damlat2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783395855 Next time i think i will elaborate a lot more, i also think i need to fix some grammar mistakes as well although i still need to add some more of my personnel ideas to my writing i feel like my map also should have been a bit more indepth i also think i could have added more of a tour guide voice.]]> 2020-09-28 05:24:29 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783395855 Yuna-What could I improve on https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783396608 I will add more interesting facts on each column like the meaning of the place in My Map.

I will add a description about the pictures I put in ]]> 2020-09-28 05:24:58 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783396608 Juyoun 27juyouns2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783396655 In the summative, I can give some interesting facts and some personal touches in my my maps. In the travel blog, I think I could add some details and interesting facts. ]]> 2020-09-28 05:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783396655 𝔸𝕝𝕧𝕚𝕟 27haojuny3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783397327 MyMaps:
In the summative, I can improve on some descriptions, and do 5 pins for each layer. Also include some more interesting facts.

Travel blog:
Next time I should include all the words, (which I forgot to add any) and maybe have better facts.]]> 2020-09-28 05:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783397327 What I could do better 27lilys1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783399062 For the MyMaps formative, I would add better and more detailed descriptions to my locations. I would also add some sources to my pins. For the writing formative ]]> 2020-09-28 05:26:25 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783399062 For Criterion A 27baoyil3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783399747 I think I need to make my location descriptions are complete and maker sure to write in tour-guide voice.]]> 2020-09-28 05:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783399747 What I can do better next time 27gian2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783403238 I should work on my descriptions when working on my summative MyMaps, I should also make my descriptions more informative, and give more fun and easy to read facts. I also want to include more detailed facts about my place. I can elaborate more on my facts and details to make my descriptions, easy to relate to when reading. For my travel blog, I can work on including the vocabulary, except for just describing the words out in my travel blog. Grammar and spelling, something that I need to constantly check. I should work on paying more attention to when I'm writing, because, I just write but don't pay attention to the grammar. Next time I should pay attention more and double check, my grammar and spelling.]]> 2020-09-28 05:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783403238 Feedback to Summative 27mariar3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405242 1. More details description on location.
2. Add personal touches and fun/interesting facts.
3. Recommend my favourite places better and recommend places that are also good close to the area I am talking about
]]> 2020-09-28 05:30:02 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405242 Summative assessment 27miae2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405586 For our summative assessment, I could definitely add more pins for mymap of Singapore and have a bit more facts for the description part. For my TEEL blog I should fix my grammar and spelling so then I reread my TEEL blog ( and others read it ) it can be clear to understand.]]> 2020-09-28 05:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405586 Rowan 27rowanb1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405858 i need more detail links sentences
and information to back up my evidence

]]> 2020-09-28 05:30:25 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405858 27yunac3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405987 I will add more interesting facts on each column like the meaning of the place in My Map.

I will add a description about the pictures I put in my Travel Blog and describe more details about each places. ]]> 2020-09-28 05:30:29 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783405987 l will do different next time is to 27junrenj1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783407261 First l will put interesting facts on my maps also l will add some personal ideas.

And on blog writing l will put more details and describe more about the place that am talking about.]]> 2020-09-28 05:31:15 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783407261 Feedback for Summative 27krishp2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783407652 I will fix my grammar mistakes and will ensure that doesn't happen again. I will also elaborate more for my summative and add extra details. For my, my maps I will add more pins and write much more details in each of my pins.

]]> 2020-09-28 05:31:27 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783407652 Riina Next time I think I can include more details in the My Maps. For the blog, I could also include more information. I could search about the place more deeply and make more details about the place I chose. 27riinam3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783408008 2020-09-28 05:31:41 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783408008 27eunchael2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783409211 For my mymaps I also need to write more information, and description.]]> 2020-09-28 05:32:25 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/783409211 MyMaps and Travel Blog 27aniruddhs https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786305024 fo mymaps i could improve on elaborating my pinas and for my travel blog i need to improve on flowing the TEEl paragraph.

]]> 2020-09-29 00:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786305024 shravan 27shravang2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786308347 I can put more information on my my maps and put a better personal touch.i think i can place more info on my trvel blog and ]]> 2020-09-29 00:50:57 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786308347 what I will do different 27aliu2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786308773 I will start working on having more info and detail/ description on my pins, like at least 1-2 well elaborated paragraphs. I can also do better on adding a personal touch for my descriptions. what I did good on was being able to have a tour guide voice and having more then 2 pins per layer.]]> 2020-09-29 00:51:10 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786308773 27rochb2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786310457 In my summative I will try to put more description on each pin and add a personal touch.]]> 2020-09-29 00:51:58 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786310457 Riley 27rileyd2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786313719 I think I could differently on writing maybe one or 2 more TEEL paragraphs and to check my grammar more.]]> 2020-09-29 00:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786313719 I can work on my MyMaps and travel blog summative by going over 2-3 paragraphs and elaborating and extending it by adding many interesting facts and ideas . I should also use many different sources and sites to find out more information and add many pins so I have more to write about . I should also write more about my identity and personality . 27tanayan2_2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786313805 2020-09-29 00:53:39 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786313805 Self reflection (Improving) 27jaehyungl https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786314479 For my map, I did well at writing by using tour guide voice. However, my my maps might be more improved when I put more pins.

For travel blog, I my travel bog will improve much more when I structure my TEEL paragraphs well.
Also spelling and grammar.]]> 2020-09-29 00:53:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786314479 what are you going to do differently on the summative assessment, based on the feedback you got? 27naomim2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315355 Well, I will try to use all the key words and keep my TEEL structure throughout my writing. ]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315355 27huangxinw2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315774 I can do well on doing the 6 BOLTSS

]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315774 Sydney 27sydneyc2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315964 I can do better by making my examples of the pins clearer so that my readers can understand.

]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:43 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786315964 27juliat3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316115 In my MyMap and travel blog summative I will elaborate my pins more and I will add more culture and identity.]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:47 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316115 what can I do different 27chengl3 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316182 I can get more pins for Mymap, and for the TEEL paragraph I can add a little bit more.]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316182 to improve 27giladf1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316439 write more then 2 pins, write in tour guide voice]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:56 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316439 Amaani 27amaanij2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316588 What I can do better on the travel blog is my punctuation and my sentences. Because when we had to edit out travel blog, not a lot of my sentences made sense. On my MyMap Pins, I can do better on putting in more descriptions, and include more of a personal description. I should try aiming for a 7-8, by following the rubric.

]]> 2020-09-29 00:54:59 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786316588 Reflection 27boxiangt2 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786320255 I think I can do better by adding more personal detailed connection to locations and also the history of the places I'm describing.]]> 2020-09-29 00:56:49 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786320255 Alvey 27alveyp1 https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786320805 For my my-maps I can do better adding more detail to my pins and keeping a personal touch with all of the pins.]]> 2020-09-29 00:57:04 UTC https://padlet.com/erin_park/h3q00m5ayni9we1/wish/786320805