Yr 7 XAVIER- Doc Analysis- Written response and Peer Feedback by scott https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k Once you have written a response in your doc analysis, cut and paste it here and then select another peer's work and using the framework below, provide them with some feedback they can use to improve their writing. en-us 2017-08-16 02:44:05 UTC 2025-10-22 10:19:22 UTC hello@padlet.com Peer feedback- Use the feedback chart/checklist to provide feedback on certain written responses (KHS Framework for buddy comments below)1. Be KindI really liked this part because...The most successful thing about this was...Your best idea is... because...2. Be HelpfulTo improve your response use....so thatI would suggest using more.... so that....Maybe you could take away.... so that....3. Be SpecificUse another quotation to...Your first/second paragraph needs more/lessI think..... could be better explained....try....Once you have received feedback, use a different font colour to apply the recommendations and re-write your responses using the tips from your peers remember that you need a document of the secret to write ha it's running at the bottom is big sbrechany1 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181361011 2017-08-17 01:49:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181361011 Bent milleb22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362893 The source is useful because it shows how they made harpoons, the different styles of harpoons And the serrated edges, different styles, some are more weathered , some have blood on them it shows that people knew how to sharpen bones

]]> 2017-08-17 02:09:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362893 Jacob Whale Harpoons https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362909  The source is useful because we can make some assumptions on how people used to hunt or catch prey/animals. It also shows that people had the skills/knowledge to make and use harpoons. The source shows that they were used because there is blood on the ends which lets us make assumptions. The harpoons are also sharp and are jagged which means the prey were easier to catch However this source is limited because there isn't a caption to help introduce the source or to give us extra information. There also aren't examples of how the harpoons were used. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it shows what they used to hunt or catch prey.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:09:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362909 Harry 🐳☠️ dunlh22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362933  This source is useful because it shows what they are and the different types they used. 
However this source is limited as it does not show many things they just have a few
Harpoons with no people. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it does not
Have much description and they just show a few different styles. They have blood on them to show
That they used them to hunt and serrated edges.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:09:31 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362933 Benton milleb22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362952 The source is useful because it shows how they made harpoons, the different styles of harpoons And the serrated edges, different styles, some are more weathered , some have blood on them it shows that people knew how to sharpen bones

]]> 2017-08-17 02:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362952 Ella quine22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362967 This source is useful because it shows that the early man used whale Bone harpoons to hunt for food. However this source is limited as it  Doesn't show what year it was created and who used it.Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because then we don't know what size it is, what year this photo was taken [ect].]]> 2017-08-17 02:09:55 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181362967 Sarah https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363009 The source is useful because it shows that early man had the technology to sharpen and create weapons, and take inspiration from other things. Example sharks; they saw how the shark could kill there prey, and saw that they have serrated edges on their teeth, and it was very effective. However this source is limited as it doesn't show the age of the whale bones, the size and so forth. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because we only have the photo which we can visually see, but there is no further information.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:10:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363009 Samuel whale harpoons bours22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363039 The source is useful because it shows that early man were smart enough to carve and make sharp tools to hunt and use in various ways however this source is limited as it dosent show how old the tools are because they might be much more recent so the people at that time would Have a much better understanding than as early man. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because there is altot of questions that they haven't cleared out or shown

]]> 2017-08-17 02:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363039 🔎Whale Bone Harpoons🔎 delil22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363040 By Lara ✨✨
The source is useful, because it shows many conclusions that early man had the intelligence and the skills to hunt animals. For example: the serrated edges for the harpoon heads show that they knew that the style is easier to spear animals with. Another conclusion that you can assume is that the people who used these harpoons had cutting tools. How would you be able to create sharp tools if don't have something sharp to carve it with in the first place? 
However, this source provides limited information as it doesn't show how who used it or when people used it.
Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it does not show complete information on the harpoon heads. 
]]> 2017-08-17 02:10:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363040 Elke https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363095 The source is useful because it shows what people from the past used to hunt. However this source is limited as it doesn't show when this source is from, how big they are our what they were used to hunt. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because we cannot make very many conclusions about the harpoons based on the evidence given.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363095 Whale Harpoons marst22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363096 The source is useful because it shows the weapons that early man had the technology and knowledge to create weapons. However this source is limited as it doesn't show how they used these weapons. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because the source shows what they used to hunt and we can get an idea of the weapons they used to hunt.]]> 2017-08-17 02:11:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363096 Taj lomat22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363125 The source is useful because it shows how the early man might of hunted. However this source is limited as it doesn't show how they used the weapon to hunt the animals. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it shows what it looks like and how sharp it is.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:11:14 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363125 Harpoon wale hunting westd22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363200 The source is useful because it shows that there was more than one animal that they hunted and there was more than one method that they used for the hunting because there where different types of hunting weapons like the ones you could hold or the ones you could throw. However this source is limited as it doesn't show what animals were used for what type of weapon. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it shows what they used to hunt and the type of weapons they had back in that day]]> 2017-08-17 02:11:40 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363200 Sinead - Whale bone Harpoons regos22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363221 This source is useful because it shows us different types of Whale bone  harpoons. It shows us the different sizes, shape and colours.  By looking at source B, can see that the harpoons were old and assume that the bones were carved to a specific shape. However this source is limited because this source does not have a caption explaining the image. Therefore, this source is useful to a limited extent because is shows us a variety of Whale bone harpoons and examples of how they looked like.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:11:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363221 🔎Whale Bone Harpoons🔎 delil22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363409 ✨By Lara✨
The source is useful, because it shows many conclusions that early man had the intelligence and the skills to hunt animals. For example: the serrated edges for the harpoon heads show that they knew that the style is easier to spear animals with. Another conclusion that you can assume is that the people who used these harpoons had cutting tools. How would you be able to create sharp tools if don't have something sharp to carve it with in the first place? 
However, this source provides limited information as it doesn't show how who used it or when people used it.
Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it does not show complete information on the harpoon heads. 
]]> 2017-08-17 02:13:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363409 Alyssa's Whale Harpoons salia22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363708 The source is useful because it shows the different types of whale harpoons. However this source is limited as it doesn't show a caption giving an explanation of the whale harpoons. We can only make assumptions that the whale bones were carved and modified to be used as a weapon or tool. By making this assumption it shows that early man had the knowledge and technology to do so. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because we only have a visual aid, but no further information on the whale harpoons.]]> 2017-08-17 02:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363708 Joshua https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363888 2017-08-17 02:18:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363888 Bella🌹Cross - 🐳Harpoons Assumption🐳 crosi22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363924 The source is useful because it shows that people in the past had the technology to sharpen, shape and locate whale bones. However, this source is limited as it doesn't show a strong caption to fully understand what the image/source is showing us, therefore, this source is useful to a limited extent because we can't exactly fully understand what the image is trying to tell us. We don't necessarily know what tools they used to make these harpoons and we don't know when or where they were made, but we can conclude that they were definitely made of whale bone and that they had the tools to create the harpoons.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363924 Abi (Source A https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363991 Source A reveals that for this  site the archaeologists posses a lying posture,
From this the reader can tell; that the site is delicate and artefacts and/ or fossils must be excavated from the outside of the site, without damaging the objects.
From source A the reader can learn that the posture of the archaeologists is different from common sites.
One other thing about the digging, is that the archaeologists; as you would imagine are using tools that are gentle, so they won't disrupt the artefacts and/ or fossils.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:19:05 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181363991 SOURCE B cokcz22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364113 The source is useful because it shows the diversity in the styles the ancient people carved the bones. From the source we can see that each device"is different from another, this shows us that each carving is different to another carving to fit the animal they are attacking/hunting for their food . By looking at the source we can see that the two end sides are different for the hunters use so it makes their catching food journey easier . 

]]> 2017-08-17 02:20:21 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364113 Emily robee22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364132 The source is useful because it shows the designs that the people used to make harpoons.
Some had spikes that resembled shark teeth and others had a smooth edge
And a handle. However this source is limited as it doesn't show how they 
Made the harpoon or if everyone back then made these harpoons.
Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it show the different 
Designs used, but not how they were made.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:20:36 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364132 Sarah Whale Harpoons scarsa22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364194 The source is useful because it shows that early man had the technology to sharpen and create weapons, and take inspiration from other things. Example sharks; they saw how the shark could kill there prey, and saw that they have serrated edges on their teeth, and it was very effective. However this source is limited as it doesn't show the age of the whale bones, the size and so forth. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because we only have the photo which we can visually see, but there is no further information.

]]> 2017-08-17 02:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364194 Joshua Duckworth 2 duckj22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364450 Whale harpoons 

The source is useful because it shows that early man knew or learned that sharp serrated textures were useful for cutting and spearing into animals. However this source is limited as it doesn't show when the harpoons were made of where the resources were found. Therefore this source is useful to a limited extent because it says that they were made of whale bones and therefor early man hade to hunt or find dead whales and then get there bones. 

]]> 2017-08-17 02:23:13 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364450 Whale harpoon: by Maisy metcm22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364644 The source is useful because it shows that the whale bone harpoons have all been carved and  shaped differently, so that when they're hunting or attacking different animals they can use the different types for the specific animal. From this source we can see that each of the weapons is a different colour and shape, this could be because they have been used already to kill animals or they are just older compared to some of the other harpoons. However this source is limited as it doesn't show us how they can be used and what animals then can hunt them with which gives us a disadvantage to find out lots more important information for our explanation of this source therefore this source can be useful to a limited extent because it shows us how it looks like and how old or new it is, also showing us if it has been used and if it's good. 

]]> 2017-08-17 02:24:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364644 🔎SOURCE A🔎 delil22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364717 ✨By Lar✨
Source A reveals that archeologists use many different type of equipment when digging. For example, a bucket to collect items. A brush to clear away the dirt.
Archeologists also use different techniques when trying to find pieces of history. for example, you can see that the two men position themselves on their stomachs, while balancing . From this source we can tell that the archeologists are really careful not to break any artefacts  
]]> 2017-08-17 02:25:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181364717 Carlos https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181365368 The source is useful because it show how the whale bone they used was need to hunt. The thing that was interesting about the whale bone was that is was carved so in means that they has the technology to carved wepons. The other thing that I like is that it has a grip at the back of the whate bone and how it's spikes at the at the front and a stain of blood on it which mean it was useful at hunting animals and which mean that people in the past were really good hunters

]]> 2017-08-17 02:29:14 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181365368 Source A westd22 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181401302 Source A revealed that archeologists use a lot of equipment that is small to prevent them from digging up the find of the century. They always work in teams to make the job easier and if they need help they can ask one another for help so what they are doing does not fail. They don't walk in the hole because that prevents them from stepping on the artefacts or fossils. From source A the reader can learn how archeologists can do there job and what not to do ]]> 2017-08-17 08:47:56 UTC https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/h2y83ap2sr6k/wish/181401302