Mia by

Aurora

22aurorarobinson — 2020-06-22 14:43:32 UTC

Mia! I loved it! I really liked all the dialogue and the thoughts of the characters. I love how its funny and it has amazing action scenes! you can really feel the characters emotions and feelings. I like the name of the group and I love the ending!

Laila

2020-06-22 15:37:43 UTC

I loved your story it was amazing. The dialogue and the thoughts of the characters pair up perfectly. You had a lot of action scenes which is really good. In my story the main character is also named Rebecca.

Laura Zhong

22laurazhong — 2020-06-23 20:29:44 UTC

I really liked your story! I liked how you included many details and included interactions between the characters. I also love the ending! You did a great job.

Kailee Xu

2020-06-23 20:53:20 UTC

I enjoyed the story a lot! I like how you made her half telekinesis which is a power that it not often used in superhero stories. I really like the dialogue and variety of words you have in there.

Carolina Badamo

22carolinabadamo — 2020-06-24 13:17:43 UTC

I love how many twists are in your story they really keep me excited and wanting to read more. I also love how you created the "Becca" character. amazing job :)

Zuzanna

zuzannawasik — 2020-06-24 13:26:04 UTC

I really like how there is a lot of adventure in it. I would recommend this story to somebody else :)

Eleonora

22eleonoragiusto — 2020-06-24 13:58:24 UTC

This was sooooooo good!!! I loved it sm. I liked that you gave Rebecca such a unique power! :)

Daniela

22danieladiaz — 2020-06-24 15:48:19 UTC

Your book is amazing! It's funny and it has a lot of mystery. Also it's full of action and I love the ending! I also like your cover. You should be a writer!

Delilah

2020-06-24 23:10:27 UTC

I LOVE IT! I really like how they all have different powers, but they can each use their individual powers to escape danger by themselves. I feel like this would actually happen if superpowers were real. It kind of reminds me of my own story and Emma reminds me of two of my favorite series.

Mia

2020-06-25 13:46:56 UTC

Thank you guys for all the nice comments <3. I miss you guys :(

Eleanor

22eleanormcconville — 2020-06-25 14:07:37 UTC

i like that there is an adventure and search and i love all the powers

Genesis

22genesisespinoza — 2020-06-26 03:26:17 UTC

I love your creativity with your story! My favorite part was when Rebecca finds out the reason why Britney was mean to her. :)