6E09_ Found 2 _ Writing Exam skill by Vinschool Metropolis

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

These questions may help you:
- What was he doing?
- Where was he? Why did the place look like that?

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

- Work individually.
- Write some sentences to describe what happened in the 2 pictures in your own words. Use the given questions as a guide.
- Timing: 6’

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

These questions may help you:
- What is the animal?
- Where was it? What was it doing?
- What could happen next?

Instruction

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

Work in group.
Go to Padlet and go to the google meet link for your group.
Decide your own pairs in the group. Then each person in a pair would give feedback for for your partner by writing YES / NO to complete the feedback form (below).
Timing: 12’

Feedback form

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

From: (your name)

To: (your friend’s name)

IDEAS

An interesting title →

Names for characters →

Having all three pictures →

>= 50 words →

LANGUAGE

Past simple tense →

Linking words about time sequence (first, then, next, later, finally, …) →

Adjectives and Adverbs →

No grammar & spelling errors →

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

Work individually
Go to Padlet.
Choose a set of pictures then write a story based on the given 3 pictures. You must write 50 words or more. Use the writing checklist.
Timing: 15’

No note on padlet = absence
Challenging corner: Write one more story for another set.

Writing check list for part 7

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

Model answer and questions

vinschoolmetropolis — 2021-11-23 00:58:51 UTC

MODEL ANSWER
A sunny day

Mark got up and looked outside. He was happy because it was a sunny day. He decided to play football. He then found his football and hurried outside. Next, he called his friends to ask them to come to his house. Later, his friends arrived, and they played together. They had a wonderful time!

Questions
1/ What is the title of the story?
2/ What is the name of the character?
3/ How many sentences are there? Is it >= 50 words?
4/ Does the story describe all 3 pictures?
5/ What tense is used?
6/ List some linking words (time expressions) that are used.
7/ List some adjectives and adverbs that are used.

le linh

linh024071 — 2021-11-23 01:19:03 UTC

-he is jumping
-he at some place has trash in it
+the place look like this because there have many trash there

chấn vũ

2021-11-23 01:19:47 UTC

- He try to go down to the trash
- He in the city have a lot of trash
- Because people at the city throw trash everywhere.

H Lam

lam001616 — 2021-11-23 01:20:04 UTC

1. Elephant
2. A partment . Ride a bike.
3. Elephant is died beacause air pollution.

Duy An

an025674 — 2021-11-23 01:20:07 UTC

It is elephant. The elephant was in the street. The elephant walked on the street. The happen was the people need to get out of the way for the elephant to go

Nguyễn Đức Minh

minh004191 — 2021-11-23 01:20:11 UTC

1) elephant
2) in the town, break the town
3) the town will be destroy

Châu Giang

giang026220 — 2021-11-23 01:20:19 UTC

- It is an elephant.
- An elephant was between people house and the bikes park and it detroyed the bikes.
- I think this elephant can destroy all the bikes and motorcycles in there.

Truc Nhi

nhi025507 — 2021-11-23 01:20:48 UTC

In India, the big elephants ran to the city. It was steped on and breaking objects around. I think elephant caretakers and police are going to stop the elephant.

Phuc Anh

2021-11-23 01:21:23 UTC

-elephant
-in the town,it's destructive.
-people in town will kill the elephant

DŨNG

2021-11-23 01:21:25 UTC

HE JUMPING

THE PLACE IS VERY DIRTY

Nguyễn Đức Minh

minh004191 — 2021-11-23 01:21:58 UTC

he is jumping
garbage dump

Hoang Duy

duy029911 — 2021-11-23 01:22:11 UTC

-he is jump
-he as they place has in trash it
-because in people are they city throw trash ther city

diệu thu

thu032829 — 2021-11-23 01:22:11 UTC

-elephant
-i think in a city, it walk around a city
-everythings is broken

nguyễn đăng khôi

khoi057944 — 2021-11-23 01:22:22 UTC

he is jumping
he at some place have lot of trash
because people throw trash there

H Lam

lam001616 — 2021-11-23 01:22:44 UTC

1. Jumping
2. Landfills. because people litter.

D.Linh

linh026131 — 2021-11-23 01:22:47 UTC

-elephant
-it is town, the elephant is stepping on the bicycles.
-all the bike will be broken

chấn vũ

2021-11-23 01:22:56 UTC

- That is a elephan
- It in the town, it is walking
- The people may scare because it.

ManhHoang

hoang024313 — 2021-11-23 01:23:07 UTC

1, elephant
2, the town, walking in the town
3,the elephant destroy the town

le linh

linh024071 — 2021-11-23 01:23:22 UTC

1. it an elephant
2.it in the way, it walk
3.it will destroy some thing

ha linh

2021-11-23 01:23:57 UTC

_ this is the elephants
_ it in the middle of the road, it's messing around on the road
_ that town was shattered

Moc Lan

lan075788 — 2021-11-23 01:24:10 UTC

A big elephant was on the road. Far away had some houses with so many people were scared. The happen next is zoo workers come and bring back the elephant to a zoo.

ngọc lâm

lam000129 — 2021-11-23 01:24:13 UTC

- he was jumping
- he was in a Landfills
- because there's a lot of trash here

Phuc ANH

2021-11-23 01:24:17 UTC

-He is jumping
-he in the place have too much trash
-because some people drop the trash in here

Hoang Trang

trang051507 — 2021-11-23 01:24:28 UTC

- Elephant
- In the town, break the town
- Destroy the city

minh anh

2021-11-23 01:24:35 UTC

1.elephant
2.in the town ,jump and run around town
3.the elephant was caught by the police and taken back to the forest

Phúc Tân

tan035144 — 2021-11-23 01:25:02 UTC

1, elephant.
2, street and walking.
3, the elephant will go straight to the end of the street.

Truc Nhi

nhi025507 — 2021-11-23 01:25:42 UTC

At the landfill,fhere is a lot of garbage and this place that causes pollution.There are many homeless people who have been here because they have no place to live. So, this boy is jumping over the garbage mountain. This place look like that because people do not protect the environment, they still throw plastic bags, plastic bottles, .. in public places.

Duy An

an025674 — 2021-11-23 01:25:52 UTC

He was jumping. He was in the place have a lot of trash. The place look like this because people throw garbage indiscriminately.

Khánh Phương

phuong024249 — 2021-11-23 01:25:53 UTC

- He is jumping
_ He in a place garbage disposal place
- because he want to jump out the garbage

Nhật Minh

minh000841 — 2021-11-23 01:26:15 UTC

1. Elephant
2. In the town in this. Town is polluted so the elephant makes this town cleaner.
3. The elephant died from exhaustion from cleaning up the town

ManhHoang

hoang024313 — 2021-11-23 01:26:24 UTC

1, he is jumping
2,he at some place has trash in it
3,because people at the city throw trash everywhere.

Chau Giang

giang026220 — 2021-11-23 01:26:48 UTC

- He was jumping.
-He was at thr garbage mountain.'Cause there were too much garbage and the air polution was very serious

Ng Tri Duc

duc025075 — 2021-11-23 01:27:01 UTC

- elephant
- the town will be destroy
- everything is destroyed

Phúc Tân

tan035144 — 2021-11-23 01:29:04 UTC

1, jumping
2, landfills
3, dirty

Anh minh

minh024055 — 2021-11-23 01:31:28 UTC

It is an elephant.
it's in the parking lot. it's stepping on bicycles.
the bicycles will be broken.

Khánh Phương

phuong024249 — 2021-11-23 01:45:14 UTC

- elephant
- it's in a street
- go to the market
- People go away because have elephant

Trần Nhất Châu

chau026264 — 2021-11-23 02:01:17 UTC

1, a elephan
2, in the town
3, the people is be afraid

Nguyễn Đức Minh

minh004191 — 2021-11-23 02:02:27 UTC

1) A sunny day
2) Mark
3) 7 sentences
4) yes
5) past simple
6)

Tuấn Bahcs

bach057768 — 2021-11-23 02:02:51 UTC

1. a elephant 2.Elephant walk in street

Tuấn bách

bach057768 — 2021-11-23 02:03:45 UTC

1. sunny day
2.
3.7 sen
4No
5. past simple

Tuấn bách

bach057768 — 2021-11-23 02:04:57 UTC

1 jumping
2garbage
3 dirty

Truc Nhi

nhi025507 — 2021-11-23 02:05:45 UTC

a. A sunny day
b. Mark
c. 7 sentences and 54 words
d. Yes
e. Past simple
f. Then, Next, Later,..
g. wonderful,..

Phuc Anh

2021-11-23 02:05:49 UTC

1,Sunny day
2,mark
3,it 7 sentences
4,yes
5,past simpl
6, :>

Trần Nhất Châu

chau026264 — 2021-11-23 02:05:52 UTC

1, sunny day
2, mark
3, 5 sentences
4, yes
5,

Dũng

2021-11-23 02:05:53 UTC

1. sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7
4. yes
5. past simple

Hoang Trang

trang051507 — 2021-11-23 02:06:48 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences
4. Yes
5. past simple

diệu thu

thu032829 — 2021-11-23 02:06:57 UTC

1.a sunny day
2.mark
3. 7
4. no
5.past simple

Moc Lan

lan075788 — 2021-11-23 02:07:09 UTC

1/ The title of the story is "A sunny day"
2/ The name of the character is Mark
3/ It has 7 sentences
4/ Yes
5/ The tense used is Past simple
6/
7/Happy; wonderful

linh024071 — 2021-11-23 02:07:10 UTC

1.a sunny day
2.mark
3.7
4.yes
5.past simple

Minh anh

2021-11-23 02:07:18 UTC

1.A sunny day
2.Mark
3.7
4. yes
5.past simple

Anh minh

minh024055 — 2021-11-23 02:07:23 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3.7 sentences
4.yes
5. past simple

ha linh

2021-11-23 02:07:37 UTC

1.a sunny day
2.mark
3. 7
4. no
5.past simple

ManhHoang

hoang024313 — 2021-11-23 02:07:42 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences
4. Yes
5. past simple

Diệu Linh

linh026131 — 2021-11-23 02:08:01 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences, yes
4. yes
5. past simple
6. then, next, later.
7. happy, wonderful,

Quang Dungx

dung026168 — 2021-11-23 02:08:30 UTC

Jumping
dirty

Phúc Tân

tan035144 — 2021-11-23 02:09:08 UTC

1, sunny
2, mark
3, 7
4, yes
5, past simple

Ng.Hoàng Duy

duy029911 — 2021-11-23 02:09:14 UTC

1.s sunny day
2.mark
3.7
4.yes
5.past simple

Duy An

an025674 — 2021-11-23 02:09:21 UTC

1,A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences
4. yes
5.past simple

Quang Dung

dung026168 — 2021-11-23 02:09:27 UTC

A sunny day
mark

ngọc lâm

lam000129 — 2021-11-23 02:09:27 UTC

1.s sunny day

2.mark

3.7

4.yes

5.past simple

Ng Tri Duc

duc025075 — 2021-11-23 02:09:30 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7 sentences
4. yes
5 past simple

Châu Giang

giang026220 — 2021-11-23 02:09:46 UTC

1/A sunny day
2/Mark and his friends
3/7 sentences
4/Yes
5/Past simple
6/Later,Then,..
7,Happy,wonderful..

Nhật Minh

minh000841 — 2021-11-23 02:10:31 UTC

1. A sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7
4. Yes
5. PAst simple
6> ????

H Lam

lam001616 — 2021-11-23 02:11:31 UTC

1. sunny day
2. mark
3. 7 sentences
4. yes
5. past simple
6. next, then, later,...
7. wonderful,...

Khánh Phương

phuong024249 — 2021-11-23 02:11:52 UTC

1. Sunny day
2. Mark
3. 7sentences
4. yes
5. Past simple
6. Then
7. Happy, exiting...

nguyễn đăng khôi

khoi057944 — 2021-11-23 02:34:08 UTC

1.an elephant
2.in a city
3.destro the city

Moc Lan

lan075788 — 2021-11-23 02:35:04 UTC

A funny day

A family prepared on a sunny day. They put some food, water, fruit in the bag. Then they went to the park and sat under the tree to eat, talk together. After that, two sons of this family swam in the lake. They had a funny day!

Diệu Linh

linh026131 — 2021-11-23 02:35:17 UTC

Maria's family goes camping

on a good morning Maria and her brother are helping their parents get ready for camping at the riverside. Maria was very excited for this trip. After arriving at the campsite, Maria helped her parents get the things out of the basket. Next, the maria family sat down to relax and eat food. After eating, maria went with her brother to the lake and swam.

lê linh

linh024071 — 2021-11-23 02:35:49 UTC

one day me and mark go to visit emma, in the way we see a cash on the ground .
Mark: should we pick it up?
me: i don't think so.
mark: but if we take it we can buy some food for we and emma.
me: it that so.
after mark take it we go buy some food and go to emma house.

Khánh Phương

phuong024249 — 2021-11-23 02:36:13 UTC

One day, Tom is eating snack in the living room, then he have a call by his friend. They want to go play soccer. Tom acpect and talk to them 10 minutes he is going to the park. He so happy and wear the uniform football ad run away the house. Finally he arrived in time to play soccer

2021-11-23 02:36:42 UTC

A family prepared on a sunny day. They put waterand fruit in the bag. they went to the park and sat under the tree to talk together. After that 2 sons of this family swam in the lake. They had a funny day.

Nguyễn Đức Minh

minh004191 — 2021-11-23 02:37:19 UTC

Tom's house is getting ready to go camping. They prepared a lot of fruit and food. When they arrived at the campsite they brushed a rug and put the food on it. After they finished eating, they went down to the lake to swim.

Phuc Anh :<

2021-11-23 02:37:52 UTC

-mark and maria family go camping after last week,they want to find some river to swim.and after 2 hour they can find the river.first they eat the food and talking.after that,mark and maria go to the river and swim.mom and dad not like swim so they talk.it the funny day

Duy An

an025674 — 2021-11-23 02:38:01 UTC

In the Saturday morning, I remember is it the holiday. I wake up and brush my teeth, and I quickly go to my friends home and call them. We run to the stadium to play football and we divvy ourselves into two teams. And we were very happy

Nhật Minh

minh000841 — 2021-11-23 02:38:40 UTC

Is morning, tom gets up and go out the bed. He calls some friend excersice with him. He runs and play football with friend.

Tuấn Bách

bach057768 — 2021-11-23 02:38:42 UTC

In 1 days mom get many things to home
2 brothers come to help to camping. they come to the park near the Lake and today is so hot 2 brothers jump in the lake and swimming

Chau Ginag

giang026220 — 2021-11-23 02:39:16 UTC

Picnic was very fun
Tom and Taylor are preparing for their picnic with their family."Im so excited!"said Taylor."Me too,I heard in there have a lake so we can swim together!"said Tom."Let's go ,otherwise it will be late".We done!"said Tom.Then,they go to the car and a dad drove themto Park Hill.They were carpeting under the tree and sit down to eat fruits and sandwiches.Later,Tom and Taylor swam at the lake and play together.They had a interesting picnic!

chấn vũ

2021-11-23 02:39:16 UTC

Today my friend and I are going to have a picnic. In the house, we prepared our food and drink to the lake. When we are on the picnic. The food and the drink are super good. When we done eating, some of my friend go to swim in the lake. They look fun. We have a good day.

Truc Nhi

nhi025507 — 2021-11-23 02:39:36 UTC

Mike and Nick amazing Saturday
In Saturday, Mike, and Nick went to the park to talked together. Next, they ate some ice cream and played games in the supermarket. Later, they went outside and Mike saw 100 dollars on the ground. Nick said " The police offical is near here" Mike said " Okay! Let's go there" . When they went there, Nick said " Hello! We saw this money on the ground nearly here can you keep this money and givet the owner of this bill" They accepted. When they came home, they are proud because they did the good things.

nguyễn đăng khôi

khoi057944 — 2021-11-23 02:39:42 UTC

on day,a family are prepare to go picnic.when they on the the grass,they eat all day.in the aferternoon,they swim

duy

duy029911 — 2021-11-23 02:40:15 UTC

in play football is moring,tom get they that

trần nhất châu

chau026264 — 2021-11-23 02:40:34 UTC

A family is go to the cmaping in the park.
they put a lot of food and water and put it is in the bag. then they go to the park to camping. family stay her 2 days. they have very funny in the 2 days.

Hoang Trang

trang051507 — 2021-11-23 02:41:04 UTC

That family goes camping on sunny day. They get some food, fruit, water in the basket. Then they went to the park, they sat, talk and eat together under the tree. After that, two son swam in the lake. They had a happy day!

Anh minh

minh024055 — 2021-11-23 02:41:30 UTC

First, he called his friend in the his bedroom.
He is was happy because the weather is nice today. He decided to walk in the park. Then,
he went walking with his friends on the bridge. Next, when more friends came to play, he decided to play football. Later, everyone changed their uniform and played soccer with his friend. He has a funny day.

Minh anh

2021-11-23 02:42:41 UTC

Mary and the picnic day

In the sunday, Mary's family all woke up , Mary's mom said we're going to have a picnic today.Mom brought the food, Dad brought the carpet and cooking utensils, Mary and her brother the clothes.The whole family goes to the park, mom and dad talk and Mary and her brotherplay in the pond

Ha Linh

2021-11-23 02:42:51 UTC

One day this family go picnic, the bring lots of food is bread, banana, water and many....The camp at the park, at the park have lake so the swim at the lake at that have many tree so the eat at the base of the tree. That the fun day.

diệu thu

thu032829 — 2021-11-23 02:45:54 UTC

-go camping with family
One day a family go camping on sunday.We bring many foods , water,..Next we went to the campsite, they put out foods ,toys and play toghether .Then we swim.

ManhHoang

hoang024313 — 2021-11-23 02:46:16 UTC

A funny day
Mark and Maria family go picnic on the sunny day,they put some food, water and some fruit. They drive car to the park and sat next to the lake, first they eat some food and sightseeing.After,mark and maria went to the lake and swam.
They had a funny day!

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