Melrose myView "More than Write More" K-2 by https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t en-us 2023-01-02 15:00:24 UTC 2025-11-17 16:35:37 UTC hello@padlet.com Add a PDF of the slide deck here hdonnelly22 https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2431683970 2023-01-02 15:12:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2431683970 Add the handout here hdonnelly22 https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2431684122 2023-01-02 15:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2431684122 Grade 2 jorlofski https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433994792 The author uses headings to organize the writing. Words in bold highlight domain specific vocabulary. The text defines words for the reader. It also includes a concluding statement.]]> 2023-01-04 20:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433994792 Unpack Mentor Text https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995245 The author writes in the first sentence: "Animals need food."  
This introduces the topic clearly.]]> 2023-01-04 20:04:26 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995245 1st Grade Roosevelt https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995661 When the author writes, the topic repeatedly and creates a clear topic for the reader, by doing this she helps the reader understand what the topic is. This would support student writers as they can see the importance. 

 
]]> 2023-01-04 20:04:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995661 Unpack the Mentor https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995957 The mentor text introduces the topic that animals need food. Each animal is grouped into their own paragraph to ask and share what they eat.

I do not think that the text includes many details or definitions for support. It simply asks a question and answers it briefly. The ideas are not linked within the text. There is no conclusion to wrap up the ideas.]]> 2023-01-04 20:05:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433995957 Kindergarten - Roosevelt https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433996173 The author introduces the topic directly at the beginning of the text. Additionally, when the author uses the repetitive pattern asking "What does it eat?" the author shows the use of precise language and vocabulary to explain the topic. ]]> 2023-01-04 20:05:42 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433996173 Grade 1 https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433997692 The author includes a concluding statement to end each paragraph. ]]> 2023-01-04 20:07:51 UTC https://padlet.com/hdonnelly22/h02p65isy3woo10t/wish/2433997692