Veterans Writing Paragraph 4th Period by Kalee Celani https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf Post your paragraphs here with your name in the subject bar en-us 2016-11-03 13:19:24 UTC 2016-11-03 21:30:07 UTC hello@padlet.com madelyn  https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120452 In November 1919, president Wilson proclaimed November 11 as the first commemoration of armistice day AKA veterans day. However, many people do not respect our vets in the appropriate way. veterans need respect because they risk there life for our life's, they fought for america, and ]]> 2016-11-03 15:27:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120452 Jose https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120572
After the WWI, president Wilson in November 1919 he made an holiday for the veterans called Veterans day but it was first call Armistice day. However the people didn't respect the veterans in a good way. The veterans are importance because they have done many good things like sacrificing their lives and families for us, helping people, and protecting us . 
Let start with the veterans sacrificing their lives and families for us . Why did they sacrifices for us , and their family it ? It was during WW1 and  
]]> 2016-11-03 15:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120572 Ms. C Reminder kalee2 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120627 Remember how to write an introduction.
-Broad Statement (hook, should be an interesting fact)
-Summarize problem
-Counterclaim (only when it's an argumentative essay, which this is not)
-Thesis: Answer, because Reason 1, Reason 2, and Reason 3.]]> 2016-11-03 15:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120627 Jadan https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120798 In the history of Veterans the most important day is Armistice Day which signifies the veterans who died and supported our country during WWI.The problem is that people are not even looking out to celebrate this day.The leaders and people should already recognize that they fought because they have risk there lives for a long time,  they leave their families, and they have fought for freedom.Starting of veterans have risk there lifes for a long time.The text states''They fought in Great War in 1918''That was almost 100 years ago.Veterans have risked there lifes for our freedom for longer than most of us have been alive.]]> 2016-11-03 15:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135120798 Quinton Melendez (0o0)   https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121048 In November 1919 president wilson announced that November 11  is a new holiday called armistice day. This is the day when you get to celebrate for the men and women who fought for our country.But  veterans are not getting the respect they deserve even though they protect us from all the horrifing things that can be a  big threat to our country. 

First of all we should be respecting the veterans. They protected our country from evil threats and they risked there lives for us.]]> 2016-11-03 15:28:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121048 Hunter Batts https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121338 Veteran's day is when people remember the people & heroes who have fought for us in battle. It was first celebrated on November 11, 1919 during WWI & WWII. Even though some people don't respect our veterans, Veteran's day is a special holiday for our war heroes. Veterans need to be respected because of their service in the army, their protection, & their love & honor to their service. ]]> 2016-11-03 15:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121338 ANNONYMOUS https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121979 On November 11, We started Honoring the veterans for their service. Veterans are very important to our country; and we need to give them our thanks and respect.]]> 2016-11-03 15:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135121979 ALI https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122020 The first Veteran's day was celebrated on Oct 25, 1971 in order to honor the men and women who have risked their lives for us. Although many people do not show much respect to veterans. Veterans are very important because they served in the military in times of war, keep our country standing, and most put our freedom above their own lives.]]> 2016-11-03 15:30:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122020 Peyton https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122107 Veterans are people who risked there life's during The great war. they fought to protect america and they're loved ones,and for freedom.
and after the great war, president Wilson declared on November 11, it shall be called veterans day.]]> 2016-11-03 15:31:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122107 Roger Vincent https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122203 During WW1 and WW2 lots of people lost there live. We honer the Veterans that fought for our country.But not a lot of people are respecting them at all. The reasons why I think we should respect them is because what they did for our country, why we respect them, and why they do it. ]]> 2016-11-03 15:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122203 Daniel https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122283 most of the people know what Veterans day is but others don't
Veterans day is where you dedicate a whole day towards the U.S military! Thesis?]]> 2016-11-03 15:31:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122283 Austin https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122561 Veterans day was originally "Armistice Day".  Veterans day is celebrated because of the people who died for our country. The veterans also left their families behind to save us. Veterans also fought for our countries freedom. Although many people don't respect the veterans as much as they deserve.

To begin with,]]> 2016-11-03 15:32:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122561 Isabela Trujillo Carvajal https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122655 Veterans are people that we have to appreciate, honor and love. Some people, however, do not show them the amount of respect they deserve.  Veterans are very important people because they protect us , they keep us safe from having a terrorist attack. These are people that are brave and strong.





]]> 2016-11-03 15:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122655 Reminder #2 kalee2 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122977 Avoid questions]]> 2016-11-03 15:33:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135122977 Android dabel0826 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123311 World War I, also known as the great war it was officially ended when the treaty of Versailles in 1919. ]]> 2016-11-03 15:33:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123311 xavier  https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123391
Veteran's Day was originally called Armistice day, and celebrated the official end of fire for WWI. Later, it became a day to celebrate and honor our veterans. We celebrate it because they have died for us and leave there family behind and leave every day. 
you have  a B IN MY CLASS ok]]> 2016-11-03 15:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123391 Isaiah #2 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123470 Veterans day was first celebrated on October 25, 1971. We created the


  
 ]]> 2016-11-03 15:34:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123470 JP =,( https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123544 veterans day is a realy important day because meany people were were fighting in World war I after a very long battle the battle ended in June 28 of 1919 also in that same year November president Wilson made the first day of Armistice









-Fact 
-Summarize the problem--some people do not respect veterans
-Thesis]]> 2016-11-03 15:34:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135123544 Olivia Nixon https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135124259 In November of 1919, President Wilson named November 11 as the first "Armistice Day." Later the United States would know this day as Veteran's Day. We should respect Veterans day because Veterans fought in a war for us, left their families, and they work really hard to protect our country.]]> 2016-11-03 15:35:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135124259  hate my life      - xavier  - AJ dabel0826 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135131782 Veterans Day originated as Armistice Day on November 11, 1919--the first anniversary of the end of World War I. During this war, our country lost some of the bravest men. However, many people do not show them the respect they deserve. Veterans are important because, they risk their life everyday, they protect this country, and they leave their families to protect ours.

]]> 2016-11-03 15:50:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135131782 Dan Urisgreat https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135133043 lots of people died in what was called the great war to end all wars,also known as World War 1
a main reason we celebrate Veterans Day to honer the people that died in ]]> 2016-11-03 15:52:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135133043 Isaiah kalee2 https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135204010 The first Veteran's day was celebrated on October 25,1971. It was a day created to honor the American veterans that have been serving our country for years. However, many younger people today do not show the correct amount of respect to these men and women. The veterans of America should be treated with respect, because they protected our country and supported it us with the care with the aid of rescuing us from natural disasters and war against other counties. ]]> 2016-11-03 18:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135204010 Isaiah #3 ms.c i had to write another one.  https://padlet.com/kalee2/gzdoxai1avbf/wish/135239135 Fire up the grills! This holiday veterans’ day was first celebrated on October 25, 1971. The solders that severed in the wars WW1, WW2, Vietnam, and Iraq risked their lives to protect our country from other treating countries. On veteran’s day, we honor these veterans for severing in these tough wars. The government closes on this holiday.

            So, some respect. Today the younger generation of America haven’t been showing much respect towards the veteran’s, because of the police shootings. Most the officers are veterans and the youth are showing no love for the veterans. The youth have been protesting the veteran’s that had nothing to do with the shootings. But still the officers and the veterans are still showing love to the youth through the thick cloud of hate. Some of the youth re interacting with the veterans by fishing, and plying sports with each other.

            Hurricane Katrina Hit Louisiana. When natural disasters hit, who was there the Vets. The vets been helping us through the toughest times in the country. When hurricane Katrina hit the vets in the area starting helping out the neighborhood by putting their old skills to work. the vets has been and still are helping us do the normal things that we need help with.



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