Analysis of Pages 70-77.Per3Tues by Colleen McCullough https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka 1. Identify important lines and moments. 2. EXPLAIN THEIR SIGNIFICANCE (WHY DID THE AUTHOR INCLUDE THIS? WHAT PURPOSE DOES IT SERVE?). en-us 2020-10-06 02:46:30 UTC 2020-10-06 14:32:42 UTC hello@padlet.com brishauna- https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806764016 I think an important moment in this book is when Ms. carmen turns to the main charcter and says "irritated" and "disgusted" "no adoption for you baby". I think this moment is important cause it backs up what she has said earlier about feeling unwanted. People are obviously trying to make her feel this way. Which is also why she is feeling mistreated.]]> 2020-10-06 14:06:34 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806764016 I think an important moment is when Mary finds out that she can't keep her baby. " Mary you are still a ward of the state... and given your crime... we cannot in good conscience put another life at risk." I think the author includes this because everything that has to do with Mary's future is being taken away due to the murder are Alyssa. mp117900 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806771791 2020-10-06 14:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806771791 I think a important quote is on pg76 "Momma dont do this to me! I've done enough for you. you have to!" this quote is significant because this is gonna cause conflict in the book because mary is admitting she didn't kill the baby her mom did and see needs her mom to come clean so she can keep her baby md130366 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806773549 2020-10-06 14:08:35 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806773549 ar127431 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806776435 I think  one of the most important moments in these pages is on page 71 "im dizzy from holding my breath for so long,maybe for years and something ugly,hidden deep inside me in threatening to erupt." This give us a chance to think about what marry is hiding. ]]> 2020-10-06 14:09:14 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806776435 biak- https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806777486 i think one of the most important lines on page 70 is, "there is a brief pause as the world comes crashing around me. Windows break, building collapse, people screaming and drowning in the rising sea..." this is important because the words " pause" , "crashing" , "break" ,"collapse" , and "screaming" all shows the emotions she's feeling which will probably cause a conflict between 2 characters. ]]> 2020-10-06 14:09:27 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806777486 I think the most important moment is when ms. carmen talks about giving away mary child . Making mary feel more abandoned and a total outcast " ms carmen momentarlity shocked by the sound of my voice , turns my way irritated and disgusted as if she forgot i was still in the room " no , no adoption for your baby" There is a brief pause as the world comes crashes down" The authour did this to show us the reader what she been through and how much stress and by her self time she dealt with for so long at a totally young age . ar119737 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806780549 2020-10-06 14:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806780549 mm115083 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806781605 one important moment was on page 70 stating " windows break, buildings collapse, people screaming and drowning in the rising sea". these are the images that Mary describes when told shell have to give up her baby. the strong diction of "collapsing" and " break" emphasizes how her world has come crashing down. 

]]> 2020-10-06 14:10:23 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806781605 1. I think an important moment was when winter said, “She ain’t like the others, Judy.She ain’t stupid.” 2.This is important because, although she got pregnant a little to fast she is a good girl compared to the other girls in the group home. The only thing that ruins her profile is her killing the baby. tj112682 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806782068 2020-10-06 14:10:29 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806782068 Devyn dm118519 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806785539 I think an important moment on these pages is when Mary is using her voice to try and tell them she's innocent and showing her inner frustration. "You can't! But it's MY baby. It's me and Ted's baby, NOT theirs...It's not fair.. 'I didn't do it'...' I didn't kill Alyssa.'"(page 71-72). This quote shows how Mary's feeling with her care takers on how they're treating her and running her life. I think that the author in Mary's inner thoughts shift to her actual dialogue to show a change in Mary on her actually starting to speak up for herself.]]> 2020-10-06 14:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806785539 I think the most important moment was when they took the baby and Mary was like " They're not supposed to do that....." which show that Mary has sympathy and kindness for the baby, after she was convicted for killing one and it seem as if the baby is a symbol. kp115159 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806786988 2020-10-06 14:11:35 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806786988 mf127106 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806799079 i think one of the most important lines on page 70 is, "there is a brief pause as the world comes crashing around me. Windows break,building, collapse, people screaming and drowning in the rising sea..." The words "crashing" and "break" show that Mary's world is "crashing" down.]]> 2020-10-06 14:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806799079 sanaiya sr118504 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806802681 i think one very important line is when she said "im dizzy from holding my breath for so long, maybe for years. and something ugly, hidden deep inside me is threatening to erupt" (pg 71).  i think this moment is important because this brings up the part from when she said her emotions are frozen. the ice is finally starting to crack. and everything she has been holding in is finally coming out.  ]]> 2020-10-06 14:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806802681 lr115093 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806815779 I think one of the most important line is pg 72 when Winters says "she ain't like the others, Judy. She ain't stupid. " this continues to argue on the point that Mary is an outcast in the group home. It also shows that Mary has a different reputation with the people in charge of the group home.]]> 2020-10-06 14:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806815779 Peter Chen pc127541 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806818787 A line that stood out to me is the italactic passage on page 73.", but Ms. Dawn's the sweetest lady you'd ever met. She'd never even hurt a fly." writen by Dawn's Neighbor. ]]> 2020-10-06 14:18:28 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806818787 questions fm137086 https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806818857 in the pages 70-77 i found two quotes that i thought were very important. in page 71 it says "Im dizzy from holding my breathe for so long, maybe for years." the other quote is stated in page 74, it says " but that was the scariest part, they CAN just do that." i think these two quotes are important bceause they both use a few words that could indicate how Mary, and the other girls mental state has developed since the years. the author included this to show how the girls' mind motives have changed. meaning the girls hvae lost hope, and mental strength.]]> 2020-10-06 14:18:29 UTC https://padlet.com/masterythomasmccullough/gyri3jdrvr2zeka/wish/806818857