Yr 7 CHISHOLM- Doc Analysis- Written response and Peer Feedback by scott https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/gyo9rhrfv3m2 Once you have written a response in your doc analysis, cut and paste it here and then select another peer's work and using the framework below, provide them with some feedback they can use to improve their writing. en-us 2017-08-16 02:27:22 UTC 2025-10-07 17:24:59 UTC hello@padlet.com FRAMEWORK FOR BUDDY COMMENTS sbrechany1 https://padlet.com/sbrechany1/gyo9rhrfv3m2/wish/181185429
1. Be Kind
I really liked this part because...

The most successful thing about this was...

Your best idea is... because...

2. Be Helpful
To improve your response use....so that

I would suggest using more.... so that....

Maybe you could take away.... so that....

3. Be Specific
Use another quotation to...

Your first/second paragraph needs more/less

I think..... could be better explained....try....


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