My sublime padlet by Nicholas Roy

Make the font size larger

abao25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:47:27 UTC

For the context slide, include more images

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-02 08:47:32 UTC

Great engagement with audience

mbaig25 — 2024-10-02 08:47:34 UTC

your presentation skills are very good

2024-10-02 08:47:35 UTC

consider putting stats on the slide so it's more clear

2024-10-02 08:47:46 UTC

good usage of hand gestures and knowledge of information pertaining to your topic

2024-10-02 08:47:47 UTC

Specify more about how AI is connected to the medical feild

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-02 08:47:48 UTC

Good use of eye contact and hand gestures

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-02 08:47:51 UTC

cite your sources (the in-text ones)

2024-10-02 08:47:54 UTC

Needs some more visuals to make the slides easier to follow and understand.

Amazing engagement. Your slides were clear and were super helpful with guiding us through the problem.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:47:59 UTC

Easy to follow your slides

mbaig25 — 2024-10-02 08:47:59 UTC

really like the context that you put as you were able to make it very simple

mgardner25_4 — 2024-10-02 08:48:00 UTC

Good engagement with audience

bkafi25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:04 UTC

Any use of stats would be helpful, ex. a percentage of AI use in hospitals

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:12 UTC

maybe talk about AI within the context of the UAE in establishing the context

2024-10-02 08:48:14 UTC

2024-10-02 08:48:18 UTC

Good explanation and presentation skills which emphasize the slides.

Your research question is amazing!

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:29 UTC

2024-10-02 08:48:32 UTC

Slow down when speaking and be sure to enunciate and project your voice

Good audience engagement via signposting!

2024-10-02 08:48:33 UTC

Good explanation of the gap

mbaig25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:36 UTC

More visual representation please!!

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:48 UTC

Try to add more images to ensure that you have supporting visuals

mkashef_25 — 2024-10-02 08:48:52 UTC

It feels like your transition from your background information doesn't mesh well with the research question as the surgery hasnt been a part of it yet.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:48:54 UTC

2024-10-02 08:49:00 UTC

What is the gap? It seems you found one but it should be elaborated on.

Colors do not fit well, make the slides pleasing to the audience

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-02 08:49:05 UTC

Due to the privacy of medical documents, how would this be feasible? DO you think you can reach a conclusive, or fair answer based on the other sources? I love the qualitative idea and think it is a great aspect.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:49:06 UTC

Your research question is well thought out and shows the connection between AI and the medical field. How is your research question acknowledging a gap in research?

zramjoo_25 — 2024-10-02 08:49:07 UTC

Maybe you could add more visuals in your slides in order to reduce the weight of text?

2024-10-02 08:49:07 UTC

Methodology is clear and really good.

rsaboor25 — 2024-10-02 08:49:08 UTC

You have a really clear plan of future

2024-10-02 08:49:14 UTC

2024-10-02 08:49:17 UTC

Good that you have considered your methodology.

do you have access to the people you want to interview?

2024-10-02 08:49:18 UTC

mmousbah25_2 — 2024-10-02 08:49:22 UTC

really good methodology, an interview with doctors is a great primary source

No backing up on the claim that AI has been a vital part of the medical community

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-02 08:49:26 UTC

Your entire topic is very clear - great job.

selsaadany25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:49:29 UTC

less text- make it more visually engaging

2024-10-02 08:49:51 UTC

Is this even a feasible question?

mkremers0808 — 2024-10-02 08:49:52 UTC

I feel like the colors in the presentation do not go well together, this makes some things unclear

bkafi25 — 2024-10-02 08:49:53 UTC

How feasible is the survey - how will you select + gather participants?

2024-10-02 08:50:21 UTC

use more visuals to inform your line of reasoning

2024-10-02 08:50:22 UTC

A "feeling" study feels generally disingenuous as it doesn't account for the participants fully understanding the context of the situation. Where some may be misinformed or biased due to where they are located.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:50:26 UTC

Considering the Harvard course - is there a chance of bias? Will you be asking people from a specific geographic range/wealth range? The results could change a lot based on that.

mburney25 — 2024-10-02 08:50:26 UTC

How can you actually accomplish what you are doing, I don't exactly see what the paper in the end will accomplish as I assume the large data bank was a theory for the future, would something like proving the effectiveness of this on a smaller scale be more effective.

abao25_1 — 2024-10-02 08:52:07 UTC