https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou en-us 2023-03-14 09:40:02 UTC 2023-03-14 23:47:11 UTC hello@padlet.com joseph_borg001 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2515818753 2023-03-14 09:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2515818753 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516831322 lazarus

]]> 2023-03-14 23:17:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516831322 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832044 timmy was a mean boy who went around destroying everyones garden and blaming it on joe. Timmy kept on doing these bad things until he leant his lesson the hard way

]]> 2023-03-14 23:18:55 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832044 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832057 lazarus]]> 2023-03-14 23:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832057 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832213 that Timmy was a bully and that he didn't care about anyone but himself ]]> 2023-03-14 23:19:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832213 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832614 it is all about this kid who destroys others gardens that no one likes one day everything that was the colour orange slowly became the colour purple timmys hair was orange he wanted to squeeze the juice out of the last orange orange before it was too late! instead of getting his hair back to normal it changed to purple. he then decided to shave it all off. everyone made fun of him, he eventually learned his lesson.]]> 2023-03-14 23:19:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832614 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832872 it hooked me in and gave me some intrest of what was gonna happen next ]]> 2023-03-14 23:20:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516832872 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833069  I wonder if the story can make the moral more interesting like timmy was mean and he got karma by his hair turning orange so he knows now that he shouldn't be mean and bad.]]> 2023-03-14 23:20:38 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833069 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833098 timmy would destroy gardensbut when he went to squirt the orange to fix his hair it turned purple like an octopus once he squirted the orange juice in his mouth ]]> 2023-03-14 23:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833098 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833117 i liked the fact that the bully learnt his lesson

]]> 2023-03-14 23:20:43 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833117 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833329 the story is about this kid called timmy who destroys everyone's gardens and is a really bad bully to joe]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833329 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833349 i wonder why timmy was a bully ]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:07 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833349 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833369 it was very intriguing especially about how everything orange was turning purple ]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:10 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833369 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833523 lazarus]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:27 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833523 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833616 the narrator described that text and had hooks 

]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833616 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833871 so Timmy was like a bully he would go around people's gardens and destroy them and everyone thought was joe but joe wouldn't even hurt a fly, he does not like to fight with people but joe had all these complains and joe needed to do something so at school joe punched him and gave him a black eye and timmy never touched anyone's gardens]]> 2023-03-14 23:21:54 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833871 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833927 Timmy was a mean boy who destroyed everyone's gardens and blamed others, then he learned his lesson the bad hard way]]> 2023-03-14 23:22:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516833927 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834045 theres a boy name timmy and joe  timmy like destroying people gandens and blame it all joe was one of those people thant cant say no to anything so when the old man thougth he did it joe just took the blame.]]> 2023-03-14 23:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834045 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834236  it is about a kid who destroys people's gardens. But one-day oranges started to turn purple.  ]]> 2023-03-14 23:22:30 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834236 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834278 I like how the writer put in like techniques that i thought were interesting]]> 2023-03-14 23:22:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834278 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834568 Timmy was destroying everyones garden for the orange oranges that they were growing but Joe took the blame for it because Timmy was Joes friend. Joes mum said that all her oranges were turning purple but none knew why, but not only did the oranges turn purple but so did Timmy's hair because that was also orange! Timmy went to school and got bullied for having purple hair. Timmy wanted to have the last orange orange so that his hair turn purple again. It didn't work so Timmy shaved off all of his hair and kept getting bullied at school.]]> 2023-03-14 23:22:59 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834568 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834757 The story is about a kid that destroys everyones gardens and the oranges slowly became purple and his hair was orange and he wanted to squeeze the last orange orange but his hair didnt go back to normal it changed to purple then he wanted to shave his hair off so he did that and then everyone at school made fun of hime because of his hair]]> 2023-03-14 23:23:15 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834757 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834842 I look how the writer started with a hook and how he ended the story in a good way]]> 2023-03-14 23:23:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516834842 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835066 his ginger hair twirly 
octopus hair ]]> 2023-03-14 23:23:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835066 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835252 What I liked about this text was how it hooked me in.]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:03 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835252 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835337 it was interesting because of how everything changed for him]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835337 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835355 I wonder why timmy would always blame joe]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835355 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835406 i like how joe gave a lesson to timmy to never touch a garden in his life]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:18 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835406 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835620 There was a bad kid named timmy who destroyed people yards and the mailman thought it was a nice kid named Joe and soon everything orange started going purple except one orange from a tree.Timmys hair went purple to and then he got bullied like he did to other people so he tried to steal the orange from joe to make his hair purple but it didn't work and the next day at school Timmy had shaved his head bald and he was made fun of more.]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835620 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835624  onomatopoeia- "DING DONG!"
personification- "you octopus"
personification- "Timmy looked back like a tiger hunting for prey"]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835624 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835716 Timmy was a boy and he messed with people's gardens. Until he went into a garden to through out the oranges and smoosh them. Then his hair turned purple because he smashed the oranges and so all things that were orange would turn into purple and that that's what happened to Timmy    ]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:48 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835716 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835727 for example like a struggling grandfather clock]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835727 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835793 There was a naughty boy named Timmy every night he would wreck peoples gardens  and put the blame on the innocent boy named Joe. Then suddenly all the orange in the world slowly turned a ugly purple colour.In Joe's garden there was the very last orange orange and Timmy squeezed the fresh orange rom the tree.The next day Timmy came to school bald thinking he was smart because, he had no purple hair or any hair in that matter.]]> 2023-03-14 23:24:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835793 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835991 I like how the story began with action and finished with action. I was hooked as soon as I started reading the story. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:25:14 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516835991 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836015 he put his head in a deflated pillow ]]> 2023-03-14 23:25:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836015 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836046 i wonder if timmy still ruins peoples gardens]]> 2023-03-14 23:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836046 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836063 i wonder if that the reader would put figurative language more in the text]]> 2023-03-14 23:25:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836063 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836634 spiral into an uncontrollable fit of laughter]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836634 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836644 There was a kid named joe and a kid named timmy and timmy would go out at night and destroy everyones gardens.But timmy would blame joe but joe was really humble so he did not want to get timmy in trouble.But then one day joe's oranges turned purple and joe did not know what to do so he carried on and went to school and he saw timmy with different hair because his hair is usually ginger but the ginger faded away and everyone teased him.joe had one last orange orange left but timmy invited his self into joe's jouse and destroyed it and the next day he came to school with strings of and was basically bald so he learned his lesson ]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:13 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836644 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836852 i wonder if the writer could add in like some more figurative language that could be interesting to read]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:34 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836852 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836960 perhaps the author could make the purpose/moral of the story more clear if they added exactly what he was doing wrong and a more meaning full description.]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:46 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836960 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836971 it hooked me in

]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836971 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836972 There was onomatopeia-Ding dong
simile-timmy looked back like a tiger hunting prey.


]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:47 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516836972 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837059 Ilike how he hooked me in instantly and how it gets you thinking about the mystery of the purple orange.]]> 2023-03-14 23:26:53 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837059 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837193 I love how the text flowed and how the author used a good amount of dialogue and figurative language. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:08 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837193 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837274  " You  Octopus " " Who is the nerd now? "

]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837274 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837366 curly ginger hair bounce with every stride. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:23 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837366 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837398 DING DONG an onomatopeia]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:26 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837398 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837500 "Ding Dong", "twirly octopus hair" and " struggling like and old grandfather clock".]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:32 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837500 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837572  I liked the use of onomatopoeia and other figurative language.]]> 2023-03-14 23:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837572 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837760 I wonder how the oranges turned purple and why he was a bully]]> 2023-03-14 23:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837760 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837761 i wonder if the writer could of made it more interesting]]> 2023-03-14 23:28:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837761 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837804 QUESTION 1:

A friend of Joe's was a bully as he ruined everyone's gardens at night. One day Joe's mum complained about her oranges turning purple, later Joe had found out that everything orange was getting infected by purple such as Timmy's hair. Joe's Dad had warned the entire family that they had to prevent anything that could turn the last orange orange purple.  The next morning Timmy thought one thing would save his hair. He forcefully entered Joe's house and rushed straight get the last orange and squeezed the last orange onto his hair. It unfortunately didn't work and he attempted to cut all his hair off. Joe hoped he had learnt his lesson.]]> 2023-03-14 23:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516837804 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838159 "DING DONG"

]]> 2023-03-14 23:28:31 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838159 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838282 I wonder if the author could have added what happened after he walked away in the foggy distance. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:28:45 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838282 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838625 I wonder if the writer could give us a reason as to why Timmy was so cruel.]]> 2023-03-14 23:29:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838625 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838875 i wonder if the moral can be more interesting ]]> 2023-03-14 23:29:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516838875 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839042 The story is about a kid, whos name is Timmy, that destroys gardens every night and blamed it on a kid named Joe. Timmy has ginger hair, is a troublemaker, and a big bully. But one unfortunate day every orange orange is turning purple and even Timmy's hair turned purple. So Joe took the last orange oranges and if the last orange orange vanishes then the colour orange will disappear. The following day Timmy barged in Joe's house and took the last orange orange. But when he destroys it the colour orange is gone but Timmy didn't care and squashed it. The next day Timmy had no hair since he shaved it off. Now Timmy learnt his lesson not to destroy gardens, especially ones with oranges.]]> 2023-03-14 23:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839042 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839103 elie]]> 2023-03-14 23:30:03 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839103 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839857 elie]]> 2023-03-14 23:31:06 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516839857 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516840024 I liked how in paragraph 2 the author described Timmy really well using descriptive language and figurative language.]]> 2023-03-14 23:31:21 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516840024 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516840944 1st paragraph 2nd line
“You little rat!”
This figurative language is called metaphor]]> 2023-03-14 23:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516840944 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516841319 1. He was a tubby
little kid whose eyebrows slanted
towards the centre of his head, like a
slingshot was drawn between his ears
down to his chin. 
the author painted a picture in. the readers head
2. Joe tried to pull him back, but Timmy
locked onto the orange like a tiger
hunting for its prey.
smile 
3. Joe’s Dad kept barking at him that if
anyone destroyed the last orange
orange, then the colour orange would
vanish for good.
personification like instead of saying yelling the author used the word barked. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:33:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516841319 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516841920 elie]]> 2023-03-14 23:34:01 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516841920 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842181 I wonder if the writer could explain how the orange oranges turned purple.]]> 2023-03-14 23:34:24 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842181 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842475 I wonder if the author be more descriptive. and have less dialogue in the text ]]> 2023-03-14 23:34:50 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842475 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842539 2023-03-14 23:34:56 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842539 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842630 I like the start of text because the author had included onomatopoeia and had started the story with some action. An example of this would be how the mailman said " You little rat." This personally gets me hooked into the story willing to know what happens next.]]> 2023-03-14 23:35:05 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842630 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842667 simile- " eyebrows slanting towards the centre like a slingshot was drawn between his ears down to his chin" paragraph 2

onomatepoeia- "DING DONG" paragraph 1

simile-" locked onto the orange like a tiger hunting for its prey" Paragraph 8]]> 2023-03-14 23:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842667 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842757 The story is about Joe who was a innocent kid who followed the rules but Timmy was the opposite, He was a bully who would go around the neighborhood wrecking everyone's gardens and blaming it on others to get himself out the situation. Joe was about to go inside his house but the mailman stops to confront JOE about wrecking everyone's garden even though it wasn't him, But joe wasn't the type of person to rat out other people (timmy) so he took the blame. Joe steps inside his house and throws himself on to the couch only to hear his mum shout at him. "WHY ARE MY ORANGE ORANGES TURNING PURPLE!?" It took a bit of time for Joe to process what had just happened, It was like he was delayed. He focused on the orange for a few days starting to notice the changes. Timmy barged into Joes house on the hunt to squeeze the last orange orange, Joe tried to hold timmy back but it was too late... Then all of a sudden the next day at school everything that was orange turned into a dull, ugly, unappealing purple colour. All of a sudden joe saw timmy and noticed something off, his hair. All of timmys orange lushious hair was gone, he was bald. Eventually all the kids teased timmy and he learned his lesson.]]> 2023-03-14 23:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516842757 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516843811 The text hooked me in and had us on a cliffhanger and at the end of the story the bully learned his lesson which i liked.]]> 2023-03-14 23:36:42 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516843811 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516844046 i wonder if the author can use more figurative and descriptive writing. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:37:04 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516844046 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516844668 ding dong and joe struggling to process the words like a struggling grandfather clock]]> 2023-03-14 23:38:04 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516844668 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516845782 maybe make the story more humorous]]> 2023-03-14 23:39:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516845782 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516845821 they was this kid named Timmy that nobody like not even his parents because he looked weird and Joe was the kid who never got into fights and didn't like saying no but one day all the oranges started turning purple and so did anything else orange ,so when Timmy entered the school with purple hair instead of of orange everybody laughed at him even Joe than something happened after school the secret about the oranges got out and Timmy barged into Joe's house to find the last orange that was orange Joe tried to warn him that if he destroyed the last orange orange that he would erase the everything orange and he would nevver get his orange hair back ,but it was too late he had already squeezed all the juice out of the orange and than Timmy's hair never turned back orange ,so the next day at school Timmy walk in with a bald head with little strings of hair still on his head all the kids laughed and Joe even said that he deserved it after what he had done. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516845821 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847140 I like how he described the characters and how he hooked in the reader with the first sentences. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:41:31 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847140 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847179 example 1: "He buried his head into the deflated pillow."

Example 2: "A tiger hunting for it's prey."

Example 3: "He jumped onto the tattered couch."]]> 2023-03-14 23:41:33 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847179 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847838 Like a struggling grandfather clock.]]> 2023-03-14 23:42:39 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516847838 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516848876 I wonder if the author could have made a scenario that was a bit more intense.

I wonder if the author could have created an even harsher consequence for Timmy.]]> 2023-03-14 23:44:12 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516848876 https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516850801 I wonder if the writer could write what happened after Timmy walked in and I also wonder id the writer could add more figurative to their story. ]]> 2023-03-14 23:47:11 UTC https://padlet.com/joseph_borg001/gx0g4lrqd2adqtou/wish/2516850801