https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4 en-us 2023-02-22 14:41:45 UTC 2025-10-16 15:47:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d6.png vapanosian2 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491320611 Jot down your notes about what techniques the writer uses to create the narrative. 
Consider grammar and punctuation
Word choice
Structure ]]> 2023-02-22 15:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491320611 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491610810 In her article, I noticed that the writer tended to lean towards heavy words such as "being treated like a criminal" and other types of similes to enhance her piece. She uses Italicies to show running thought and provide depth to her writing. She capitializes parts of her writing to demonstrate important aspects in an macro sense "Thinking BIG is really what we need at this moment"]]> 2023-02-22 19:04:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491610810 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491610957 in this narrative the author uses repetition to make her point stronger, she shares a lot of details even the ugly ones to get a full understanding, it is written as a letter. she has different paragraphs that are written different ways. I like the insight she gives about her struggle.]]> 2023-02-22 19:04:47 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491610957 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491611421 - Talks about an insinuating incident that kicks everything off and how he handled
- Talks about further knowledge he gains
- Similar Problem happens to first one
- Learns from past mistakes and addresses it in a progressive manner]]> 2023-02-22 19:05:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491611421 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612477 There were images included throughout the article and story. The sentence structure is different. For example, the author used rhetorical questions for dramatic effects. The introduction to the problem and building up to the climax was a lot more dramatic and longer.]]> 2023-02-22 19:06:09 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612477 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612909 - Layshia did not consider the world as against her in a race or ethnic way, but more as a sexuality and gender way, to quote her "Is that guy staring at me because I’m holding my wife’s hand? Is it because they don’t know my gender?"
- She fears more for the lives of cis and trans women as stated in the text, "there is a deafening silence when trans and cis women suffer the same fate. It is feeling the possibility of being seen as a threat and a target at any given time."
- She was once approached by a man who was speaking in a very tense tone but it turned out to only be asking about their sweatshirt

]]> 2023-02-22 19:06:33 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612909 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612998 I like how the narrator Lauren Holiday wrote this writing to spread awareness how this can happen to anyone. She also explains how she never noticed this because she had was treated differently due to her skin color. After this happening to her and husband countless times, she knew she had to say something.]]> 2023-02-22 19:06:38 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491612998 nvesey241 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613266 I like how the writer gave an example on her perspective on life before starting her story. Also this sets the tone for her story and how she perceives her scars. She uses certain punctuation to emphasize part of her story. Her word structure really grasps the reader throughout the whole story and shows how she wants to be seen as a survivor. ]]> 2023-02-22 19:06:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613266 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613643 - the writer used alot of personal quotes 
- he described himself 
- it was more personal about him
- there is a different sentence structure

]]> 2023-02-22 19:07:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613643 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613955 Some techniques used in this narrative was emphasis and repetition on words the writer used. Writer is straight to the point when telling his story. ]]> 2023-02-22 19:07:33 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491613955 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491614469 Kyle Korver uses his emotions to tell the story. not only does he explain the story very swiftly, but he also pauses to explain his thoughts at that time and then his thoughts now. I admire the way that he looks back at the situation and realizes the things that he could've done better instead of just accepting what happened and accepting the way he reacted.]]> 2023-02-22 19:08:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491614469 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491614645 Italicizing to emphasis words
ex. you survive a scar.
Images so you can visually interpret the story.
The use of ... to express the way she wants the reader to read/ understand it. 
Ex. The scars.... they’re almost not even scars.
Short paragraphs and sentences. Some were one word while others may be a number of sentences. 
Rhetorical questions. Which adds more personality to the story.
Emphasis on important things such as highs and lows. This creates more drama and emotion. ]]> 2023-02-22 19:08:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491614645 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491619785 We see Steph Curry as this amazing basketball player that so many kids look up to. This article shows the reader how much work he put in and how much he had to learn to get to the position he is in today. The author also included a bunch of tweets from people that hated on Steph and his talents before he became the inspiration he is today. It just shows how a person like him worked so hard and went through so many challenges to get to where he is today. ]]> 2023-02-22 19:12:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491619785 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491724056 In this story we see how a girl battles everyday with scars over her body. This woman turns her scars into stories and learns to love them. The writer writes this paragraph in a letter format. She has achieved so much even though it took a lot of dedication to succeed. I like how she shares her views on what she believes is beautiful and how beauty is imperfections. ]]> 2023-02-22 20:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491724056 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491849156 - How she wrote was less formal: "No, seriously" 
- Abbreviated words like "norm". 
- wrote at the moment inner thoughts

]]> 2023-02-23 00:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491849156 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491866660 -She wrote this to spread awareness about things that can happen just like this
-Not just that they can happen to anyone but they can happen at anytime
-She never experienced this because she's not the same race as her husband and sister in law so she's had a lot of white privilege.]]> 2023-02-23 00:35:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491866660 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491939116 Lauren Holiday used an interesting title and hook to capture the audience's attention. She also used many of her own experiences to show how often her and her husband face racism. I also liked how she explained why she and her husband have been brushing off these experiences but also explained how she's had enough. ]]> 2023-02-23 02:03:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2491939116 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492066535 - The author uses quotes multiple times to directly show how he was underrated, rather than just explaining how he was portrayed. 
- He also uses a lot of repetition throughout his article, to show the importance of certain things. ]]> 2023-02-23 04:30:46 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492066535 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492079342 -The sentence structure is different
-Through the story it builds up to the climax
-personal quotes
-He worked hard and motivated himself to get where he is now.

]]> 2023-02-23 04:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492079342 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492509448 The writing goes straight to the point he talks about curry and what it took for him to get to that level. The writer drives his topic into the readers and will say in multiply times during the article. ]]> 2023-02-23 12:59:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492509448 https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492574521 The writer shows both sides on how everyone doubted Steph Curry and then shows how he proved everyone wrong.]]> 2023-02-23 13:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/vapanosian2/gwcj5wpmv8lapgz4/wish/2492574521