https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g Made with eyes on the prize en-us 2021-03-08 23:51:01 UTC 2026-03-12 00:34:10 UTC hello@padlet.com rajimarafiq https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1284914348 SENSORY Descriptions]]> 2021-03-08 23:51:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1284914348 rajimarafiq https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1284920871 Expand the Following sentences using the 5 Senses to SHOW not TELL!
1. She was happy when she heard the news. 
2.I grew sad as I looked at my leg.   
3.John was angry as he called me over. ]]> 2021-03-08 23:54:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1284920871 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285729955 1.) Upon hearing the great news, she on cloud nine. For the first time, Charlie’s ninety five year old grandmother finally jumped out of his bed. Due to the fact that Charlie had found the golden ticket, it was to to miraculous to be missed.
2.)”ow”I muttered giant shards of glass pierced through my fleshy Ligaments while cracking my bones. The effect of the nuclear bomb was a horrific explosion. Wiping out almost the entire civilisation. Shattering the glass of my window.
3.)He furiously scold and shouted. Due to the fact that I broke the fence in his lawn, he had demanded for payment. However, this was not the first time]]> 2021-03-09 04:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285729955 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285733817 1.She was ecstatic when she heard the news. She started to jump excitedly as tears of joy streamed down her face        2.My lips started to quiver slowly as I looked at my leg I started to fill with regret as I saw velvety smooth fresh red blood trickle down my knees from the exposed area of my flesh. The pain was agonising I screamed my lungs out. 3.John was enraged as he called me over in a high pitched voice. My heart started to pump faster. I was covered in cold sweat.]]> 2021-03-09 04:52:35 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285733817 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285734148 1.As she heard the news ,Lisa’s eyes glittered with joy as she jumped around and hummed to her favourite tune.She could not explain how joyful she was as she ran around the room.
2.As I looked at my left leg,tears of despair rolled down my cheeks as it brought me back to the incident 2 years ago that I would never forget in a lifetime as it reprimanded me and reminded me to watch out for safety .
3.With a flash of anger in his flaming eyes,John stomped towards me and screamed as he pushed me down the floor.He stared daggers at me as he pushed his fist towards my face.I blocked my face with my hands and covered my eyes when I heard the principals voice...]]> 2021-03-09 04:52:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285734148 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285735197 1)she was enthusiastic when she headed the news and hum her favourite tune and started dancing
2) in agonising pain my body started to sob as the smell of metallic crimson blood flowed down the floor 
3)after the stressful year psle was finally over I felt relief and I thought to my self that I would do good.1 month after we had our results and John did the best in class and I almost  failed all my subjects I was sobbing and tears started to block my vision John walked passed me and said it’s ok in secondary school I can help u in jealousy I punched him in the face as crimson blood started flowing down his nose he looked furious as he clutched his fist so hard that he pointed his finger at me with a dead look on his face I felt terrified and tried to back of but his friends stopped me from leaving I curled up into a ball and a heavy punch hit my hand I squirmed in pain he started to regret his action  as as the class froze in shocked as they had not seen John this mad before.]]> 2021-03-09 04:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285735197 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285737611 1. She squealed with joy when she heard that her best friend was coming to visit her. It had been so long and just thinking about it made her dizzy with joy. Lily spun on her heels and skipped off to inform her mother. 
2. My face scrunched into an expression of pain and horror as I looked at my mangled leg. It smelt strongly of bike grease and the metallic smell of my own crimson blood. The blood slithered slowly down my knee as my dad scooped me up and called for help. Realising that he really did care for me, I finally felt safe and that I could rest..
3. I felt a chill down my spine as John called my name with an obvious flare of anger. I turned around to face him, he was so red that he looked like he would pop at any moment. Watching the sweat slide down his temples, I felt sick and I felt like I could smell the fury bubbling inside him. ]]> 2021-03-09 04:53:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285737611 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285740547 1.she was swing her arms and dance around when she saw the news ]]> 2021-03-09 04:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285740547 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285742087 1. Emma felt her hands tremble in excitement and squealed in joy as she could barely contain her overflowing excitement after hearing the astonishing news of her newfound fortune.
2. I look at my leg in sorrow. I tasted bitter defeat as I was carried to my bed. It was a big mistake to take a walk without telling my parents about it. Now I’m stuck in a hospital with a broken leg. 
3. I heard a obvious flare in John’s voice and his tone was far from calm as he told me in an enraged voice to come over immediately. I had second thoughts about telling on him and bit my lip until I could taste blood.




1. 😅😀😃😂😂😅😀😄😁😆😁😀😅😂😁😎😎😎😆😁😃
2.😰😰😨😨😰😭😭😭😢😢😭🥺🥺🥺😢😭😭😢🥺😭😢
3.🥵😡🤬😡😡😡😡😡😠😠😠😡😡😤😤😤🤬😡😠😠😡🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸🩸]]> 2021-03-09 04:55:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285742087 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285747714 1. She was delighted to hear that her grandparents were coming to visit.
2. She was  hesitating movement when she looked what’s left of her leg after the shark attack.
3. John was angry as he slam his fist on a table as he called me over.]]> 2021-03-09 04:57:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285747714 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285748864 1) Elated, Lisa skipped around the room humming her favourite tune, her parents sat bewildered, not knowing what had happened. Sheepishly, she explained to them that she had won a ticket to Canada.



2) Agonising pain swelled in my leg, I had fallen down in the most important race of my life. Crest fallen,I stared at my leg, unable to continue the race I sat, all alone with nobody to help me.



3) PSLE was over, the stressful period of examinations were done. John had done best in class and I was envious of him. During recess, I had stolen his pen out of jealousy. After recess, John saw me using his pen and he coldly stared at me. Furious, he stormed over and demanded an explanation. I gapped and hurriedly gave the pen back to him. Rage took over the kind John and he turned mad at me. Veins popped in his face and he reprimanded me. 


]]> 2021-03-09 04:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285748864 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285749917 Her face lit up as her worn eyes suddenly lost all their wrinkles and brightened up a bit. My sister had gotten in to a prestigious trashy contest only few got into. I could feel her excitement in the air and the sweet taste of success lingered on her tongue as she cradled the mould encrusted parcel which left a pongy smell that lingered in the air like lingering potions. Finally, her excited squeals echoed through the hollow walls of my apartment.]]> 2021-03-09 04:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285749917 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285749960 1. Feeling ecstatic, she punched the air in delight and there were tears of joy in her eyes. She was delirious with joy and was as happy as a lark when she heard the wonderful news that there will not be a storm that day and she wanted to play netball with her friends.

2. Feeling agonising pain, tears rolled down my cheeks as I looked at my wounded leg. Beads of perspiration trickled down my forehead. My heart was pounding and crimson blood was oozing out of the open wound. 

3. John was as angry as a bull when he called me over. I could tell by hearing his thundering voice and I saw his face which was as red as a tomato. He was shooting daggers out of his eyes. There were wrinkles on his forehead and there were bulging veins on his face. His fists were clenched tightly. I knew I was in hot water.]]> 2021-03-09 04:58:32 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285749960 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285752351 1.She jumped in joy as she listened to the information about the war ending.She kept on checking the clock hummed a cheery tune as she waited for her son to return from the war
2.Staring at  the stump of my leg, My body drooped and I had difficulty swallowing.If only I had...
3.With a flushed face,John called me to his office.He had veins in his neck and as he slammed his fist on the table,he demanded an explanation on why I was late for work

:> Have a good day (do we write down on worksheet?)
Show more...]]> 2021-03-09 04:59:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285752351 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285753860 She crinkled her eyes and nose when she heard the news]]> 2021-03-09 05:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285753860 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285757121 2.i wrap my arms around my self and started looking at my fractured leg.]]> 2021-03-09 05:01:03 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285757121 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285761171 1. She was happy when she heard the news.
-> Elated was the word to describe her. Immediately after she heard the news, she was on cloud nine. Unable to contain her imminent joy, she dashed to her room and informed her close friends about it. Never has she been so jubilant.

2. I grew sad as I looked at my leg.
-> Glancing at my leg as I lay there, I was filled with great remorse. How am I going to walk? I wondered. Would I need to use clutches instead?Forlorn, I kept telling myself that there was no point crying over spilled milk. However, I was still filled with immense guilt as I broked into sobs. My efforts were of waste.

3. John was angry as he called me over.
-> John was a livid dog as he called me over. Berserk, he clenched his fist. I sauntered over and attempted to calm his down. After a while, I felt hopeless. Retreating back to my room, I knew it was not my fault as I glanced at the mesmerising view as I reached the top of the building.  I did not want John to bother me like he did yesterday evening. Sitting down on the bench, those that were also on top were enjoying the wind. ]]> 2021-03-09 05:01:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285761171 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285761306 2.As I looked at my leg , my lip quivered ]]> 2021-03-09 05:01:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285761306 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285763586  1. She was delighted when she heard the wonderful news about the surgery.

  2. I started to tear up when I saw the condition of my leg

  3. John was furious when he called me over to his house.

]]> 2021-03-09 05:02:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285763586 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285764026 Sentence 1

As soon as i heard the news, i was in disbelief. I would never imagine that this day would come, I cried in happiness. As soon as my parents told me it was true, I believed it when i saw it for the first time. My mother said we were never gonna get one but we got two. As soon as the clock struck midnight it came, the most beautiful things i had ever seen.We had got two puppies and they were tiny so you could snuggle them. That was one of the best days in my life. I would never for get that day.]]> 2021-03-09 05:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285764026 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285764579 1) The extraordinary news brought her undeniable happiness, her head jerked up with an overjoyed look, tears of joy glinted in her eyes. Her happy sniffs filled the air. She gave him a hug and looked like she did not want to let go of him after being separated from him after a long time as he was not home at that time.
2) Looking at my bruised leg, tears filled my eyes, my nose turned sour and the tears slid down my face uncontrollably. How could I be so clumsy as I usually rode my bicycle well. Was it because there was a tree root blocking the way, but there was nothing there. This is so weird! Could someone have did that on purpose?
3) Storming into the room, he glared at me as if he was throwing daggers in my direction. Raging with anger and clenching his fists, he growled out my name and the look he gave me told me he was not pleased with something I did. I was jerked out of my seat and led towards him. Maybe it was the fact that I got first place in the class. I did not want to go or find out.]]> 2021-03-09 05:02:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285764579 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285766621 1) Jumping with joy, Lily’s face lit up and she spun loosely, hugging her father. Lily’s tears of joy streamed down her face which made her vision blurry. Overwhelmed, Lily took a deep breathe of the fresh air. Lily had been waiting for this day. Her father surprised her with a trip to the amusement park. Lily had been longing to go. Unfortunately, Lily’s father had struggled to make money as his salary was low. However, father had managed to win the lottery.

2) A sharp stabbing pain suddenly appeared. In agonising pain, I started wailing in pain as the smell of fresh metallic crimson blood flowed on the floor. As my vision blurred, I could not tell what was left of my leg after the car had ran over my leg. Hyperventilating, heads of sweat trickled down my cheeks.

3) A deep voice called my name. I refused to answer as I had recently been in an argument with John. With veins popping out, John stormed in my room and glared daggers at me. Clenching his fists and gritting his tenth, his fist flew across the room, hitting my desk. His burly body blocked the vision of my computer game. Frozen in my tracks, I reluctantly turned off my computer.

]]> 2021-03-09 05:03:29 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285766621 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285769230 3.As John was feeling throbbing veins in neck as he called me over]]> 2021-03-09 05:04:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285769230 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285769364 1.When she heard the delightful news, her eyes lit up and started jumping up and down. She had finally been accepted into Harvard as she worked hard and long for their acceptance. She ran to her family in the dining area as tears trickled down her face and told them the goal-achieving news.

2.My bottom lip was jutting out when I realised my leg was fractured after I crashed on my bicycle. Everyday I have a lack of appetite, wishing I could walk normally as other kids. I’ll always try to hide my droopy body whenever there is Psychical Education as it was my favourite period of the day, but my leg has stopped me from achieving my goals.

3. John had his veins throbbing in his neck and his clenched fists was getting ready to punch someone as he shouted my name across the hall. I knew I was done for when I heard my name getting called by the well-known school bully. My tummy was empty as I slowly dragged my feet towards him. I avoided eye contact with him but he grabbed me by my collar and threatened me.]]> 2021-03-09 05:04:28 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285769364 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285773364 I felt sad as I gazed down upon my bleeding and bandaged leg. I could hear my heartbeat slowing down and the salty smell and taste of blood lingered on the tongue and the air. I looked up and saw the streetlights and advertisements blaring and people crowding around some stupid makeup shop like moths to a flame. I sighed in depression and took another sip of milo.

Hi]]> 2021-03-09 05:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285773364 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285775561 1.She  was delighted when she heard the best news of her life that she won the lottery

2.My face scrunched when I looked at my leg full of rashes

3.Johns anger swelled up upon me for stealing his wallet


]]> 2021-03-09 05:06:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285775561 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285778503 3. John was clench his jaw and clench his fists as he call me over.]]> 2021-03-09 05:07:45 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285778503 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285782343
Sentence 2

It was only 2 weeks ago when it happened, i was in a school fight when it happened. I was one of the people fighting when i got kicked off the second floor balcony and landed on the railing of the stairs on the ground floor. The person who kicked me ran, ran as far as the eye could see. I had went into a coma and had just woke up. The docter told my mother that i may never walk again. I look at my legs and started to cry.]]> 2021-03-09 05:09:10 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285782343 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285782572 His eyes seemed like he wanted to cry when he heard about the saddening news.I also felt the large amount of sadness within him self. I heard those loud tears dropping down onto the floor. 
I was super sad when the doctor said I would not be able to walk.I wrapped myself trying to calm myself down I felt my body heating up and large sized tears came out of my eyes I tasted mucus in my mouth and I could barely breathe
I could see raging fury in Johns eyes and heated up like roasted chicken he was like a bull in a China shop when I said I told his secret to everyone    

]]> 2021-03-09 05:09:15 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285782572 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285786672 1. Upon hearing the elating news, her heart started to judder like a jackhammer out of exhilaration, her lips jerking into a toothy grin. A myriad of thoughts bombarded her mind as she wondered how she had accomplished such a great feat! The sweet taste of success lingered on her tongue, her lips quivering in joy as her eyes started to brim with tears of happiness.

2. Glaring forlornly at my broken leg wrapped in its cast, a myriad of emotions surfaced, my brows furrowed in helpless agony. Any slight movement would send a surge of excruciating pain through my leg, making me yelp vociferously.

3. Upon hearing my name called, I was soon facing John with a quick whisk at my heels. His fists were clenched as he gritted his teeth in exasperation, making him appear even more intimidating than he already was, with his burly body.]]> 2021-03-09 05:10:42 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285786672 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285787608 1.She  danced with joy when she heard that her son was coming back from london.
2.I wrapped my arms around myself as I looked at my fractured leg.
3.John called me over angrily as he clenched his fists and shook them at me.]]> 2021-03-09 05:11:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285787608 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285790221 1. She jumped for joy as tears of joy streamed down her face, now knowing that her old, grey-haired optimistic mother would survive her ordeal. “Hello? Is anyone there?” Dr John asked. I snatched the phone up excitedly and said in a high-pitched voice, “I’ll be there in ten minutes.” I looked down at my disheveled clothing and realised that I reeked of body odour, not having showered in my worry and grief for days and decided to take a bath before I left to the hospital.

2. Laying down helplessly on my four-poster bed, I wrapped my arms loosely around myself, my bottom lip jutting out as I stared shamefully at my leg— or what was left of it. I was still traumatised from the life-altering experience. Covering my head with my arms, I still regretted not heeding by my parents wise advice. I had learnt my lesson— I would never drive any car without wearing my seatbelt again...

3. His face as red as a tomato, he slammed his hand on the table, sending it shaking violently. He snatched up his phone and furiously keyed in Tim’s number. “Hello?” Tim answered cooly.”Hello! Are you kidding me? You ruin my life and all you have is hello? Come over in ten minutes and I’ll show you what hello is!” ]]> 2021-03-09 05:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285790221 operaestateprisch https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285793571
Sentence 3


John was steaming mad, he knew that i did it. He knew that i broke the toilet. That was his favourite place in the house. He called me over angrily. I could sense the anger in his eyes. He was furious as he called me over.












Not based on a true story lol 😂 




🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽🚽]]> 2021-03-09 05:13:07 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285793571 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285796785 1. Her face lit up when her father told her the news. She began jumping for joy. She finally was a big sister to her new younger brother.She was spinning loosely. She began humming a tune as she was waiting for her father to take her to the hospital to see his new little brother.

2. Tears began welling up in my eyes, blocking my vision as I looked at my leg. My lip began jutting out as I wrapped my arms around myself. Looking at the scar on my leg reminded me of my late pet dog.Tears began trickling down my cheeks, which eventually broke into a sob.I missed him very much. I just wished that I could play with him one more time and say goodbye.

3.John let out a roar of rage. His anger knew no bounds. He found out about what happened to his project. He worked so hard for the project and now it was wasted. I was in for it. I could even see his neck throbbing. His face began to turn red. Steam erupted from his nostrils.”Terence!” He bellowed. I gulped in anxiety. I began to break into a run to the front door. But when I reached there, he was blocking my only exit. He let out a battle cry and hot me with a powerful blow square on my nose. Crimson blood went down my nose as he sent me flying. When my head hit the ground, everything was black. He knocked me unconscious


 (^L^) That is my “show not tell” sentences. 

                        Hope you all enjoy! :)

                                        Have a great day! :D]]> 2021-03-09 05:14:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285796785 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285798394 1.she was happy when she heard the news when her dad tell her that they were going to Marina Bay Sands for a staycation, she burst in joy and were jumping up and down.

2.I  sob as I looked at my leg and it was bleeding out I cried and cried in pain but someone accompany  to the general office to ask the staff if they can help me for  leg.

3.John was angry as he called me over to make him a smoothie for his thirst he was furious when he snatched the cup full of strawberry smoothie I talked to him to not be angry and I will cook for him noodles.]]> 2021-03-09 05:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285798394 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285798924 1) Annie was jumping with joy when she heard that her parents were going for a vacation and she was including. She began packing her things which she never does as she was lazy and even ate the bitter vegetable which as laid out for her. She could wait to hear the ocean waves bellowing outside her hotel room next to the beach in the highly rated and best holiday paradise, Portu Galera in Philippines
2) I stared longingly at the football pitch and then stared cursing my leg. I had gone for a walk in my wheelchair as I had a fractured leg. Then I remembered that if I had a little bit less careless I would not have ended up in this horrible state of mind. My face dropped and without knowing it, I started slapping my own face, a thing which made injure myself even more.
3) “Harry, come here now!” John's voice angrily bellowed through the classroom. I was surprised and afraid that John might do something to me. “Pay me back my money which I leant you three years ago.” I tried to recall what and I anyway just gave him two dollars when even though  I was very surprised.

]]> 2021-03-09 05:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285798924 rajimarafiq https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285799823 1.she was jumping in joy and humming her favourite tune when she heard the delighting news she was so happy that she nearly walked into the table 

2. My heart dropped when i took a look at my shattered  legs, I bursted into tears I could not believe my legs were shattered   I did not know how I was going to do all my daily activity’s   


3. John looked furious as he called me over his dissed were clenched he had squint eyes and bare teeth my palms started to become very sweaty I did not know what I did wrong every one was afraid of John he was the biggest bully in the school I. When I got there i looked up at the towering bully he knew what I had done I broke his ruler i knew I was dead]]> 2021-03-09 05:15:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285799823 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285800088 See: I saw the seagulls flying down and plucking out fish from the sea. The magnificent view of the sea was mesmerising me.

Smell: The smell of the amazing pizza that was in the oven was creating water in my mouth. The cheesy smell coming out of the oven was amazing.

Taste: The rich chocolate cake melting in my mouth was making me want to take a couple of more slices of cake onto my plate. The flavour was delicious and I could savour every piece of cake I ate.

Feel: Blood was oozing out of Jack’s knee was making him sob and cry for help as the bullies were cackling their way out of the playground. The pain could not be put into words by Jack as his mother started carrying him home.

Hear: John’s screaming was so shrill that it could have deafened Dave who was standing near him. Everyone ran into the room and wanted to see what was up. On the wall, there was a big spider making a web.


]]> 2021-03-09 05:15:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285800088 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285800289 “(@$&@(#!” I slammed my fist down on my PC in rage. I had lost my game of pvp because of my sister singing like a demented howler monkey getting vaccinated by a parrot. “Shut up! Your singing sucks!” I shouted in agonising pain as my ears were wrinkling and dying. I picked up the cable to my PC and poured my beer over her head. I stomped to my room and slammed the door in enragement.]]> 2021-03-09 05:15:21 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285800289 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285801224 1. Her eyes filled with tears of joy, she could not believe the surprising news. She kept nodding her head in disbelief, and spinning around the living room humming her favourite songs, she started jumping wildly.
“I can’t believe it! I scored AL1 for each subject!”she excitedly said. Her once wide with shock eyes became one line, swinging her arms around, she cried, “I did it! I have achieved my target!”
2. Looking at my legs, I felt a pang of sadness. There was a hesitating moment before breaking into sobs. Lying on my bed, I started crying even more. “Dad! Why did you leave me?” I sobbed. It was after my father’s funeral and I had locked myself up in my room, beating the bed. I had a lost of appetite for the afternoon as I thought back on all of the sweet memories I had with my father. For the rest of the week, I had a droopy body, and I wouldn’t talk much. I would just cry in my room and talk to myself, making my mother worried, and all I could think of was my father, just looking at the photos we have taken together would make tears well up in my eyes.
3. not finished]]> 2021-03-09 05:15:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285801224 https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285802965 1. After hearing the news, she was jumping for joy. She pumped her fist in the air. Smiling from ear to ear , she ran around telling the good news to anyone she walked past. She could not believe what she heard.

2. Looking at my fractured leg, I was filled with regret. My vision was blurry as tears welled up in my eyes. I buried my face in my hands as I wished I could turn back in time.

3. John starred at me, he pointed his finger at me. “Come hear now!” I felt my stomach muscles tighten as John called me to go to him. I looked on the floor as I dragged my feet towards him. Sweat chilled my palms as I held my arms tightly.]]> 2021-03-09 05:16:17 UTC https://padlet.com/rajimarafiq/gwbyk3jrdxcidk2g/wish/1285802965