W5 - Environment & Protect Wild Animals by Hoài Ân Nguyễn Trần https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v en-us 2022-06-06 10:14:59 UTC 2023-04-08 07:34:02 UTC hello@padlet.com [READ THIS BEFORE STARTING YOUR WRITING] hoaiannguyentran1311 https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v/wish/2212128328 In this writing section, you should write an IELTS-format essay for the problem below:

Some people believe that zoos, where animals are kept in man-made environments, should no longer exist in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree?

You can find the outline right here
you can look up some fantastic vocabulary here:
Environment: http://surl.li/cdiii
Zoo: http://surl.li/cdiim

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Thank you, hope you'll enjoy your writing time.

Love. Hoài Ân
]]> 2022-06-06 12:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v/wish/2212128328 From Louis Phan *bling bling bling quynhphhg2002 https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v/wish/2217593278 2022-06-10 15:02:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v/wish/2217593278 Some people believe that zoos, where animals are kept in man-made environments, should no longer exist in the 21st century. Do you agree or disagree? nhatnguyen2156523199 https://padlet.com/hoaiannguyentran1311/guu75xmbkyuv2z5v/wish/2217841137 Some people believe that wild animals should not be kept in man-made zoos in the 21st century. I agree.  I believe that wild creatures should not be kept in zoos and there should be alternative ways to see them.
 I think in the 21 st century, humans have become aware of protecting this precious animal and the environment. They are many organizations established with the purpose of protecting animals. So, animals are going to have sustainable habitats. 
 I feel that wild animals should be free. They should not be kept in cages and tiny areas in zoos. This is cruel to the animal, and they frequently die because they are not in a natural habitat. We frequently see news story about rare animals dying in zoos or getting sick due to the fact area is not in huge abundance or suitable for wild animals like lions or polar bears. Also, these animals are unhappy and sometimes attack humans.
In conclusion, although people believe that zoos are good places to keep wild animals due to the fact they can earn money and educate people, I feel that we do not need zoos anymore. We can look at wild animals on the internet, and we can feel happy knowing that they are free. 


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