Wise Feedback? by Clarissa Barnett https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs Did the teacher provide Wise Feedback? If not, what was missing? What else might the teacher do? How else might the teacher have said it? en-us 2020-08-11 21:05:31 UTC 2020-08-12 16:58:30 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677448458 Teacher might have said, i know you can do it

]]> 2020-08-12 16:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677448458 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449020 be more specific and have direction.

start of with " hey i am having trouble understanding the how and why, can you help me out :)]]> 2020-08-12 16:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449020 I see that you didn't cite evidence, is there a part of citing evidence that feels confusing to you or that we can think through together? https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449336 2020-08-12 16:55:00 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449336 Give student the next step. https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449385 2020-08-12 16:55:02 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449385 Positive Words https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449545 The teacher could have used positive words letting the student know that they are capable and then provide the next step to move forward with the assignment. The student may have needed more chunking.]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449545 Teacher could have led with a conversation that starts with a question. Ex. "Hey Jose, can we talk through your writing for a minute? Can you tell me what your bid idea is? Great, strong idea! Now can you tell me what evidence you have to support this?" https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449586 Once they tell you, because often times that is easier, you respond with something like - YES!  Great details that give more evidence for others to make the mental model in their minds.  Now, write it and I'll be back to see how the movie plays out when I read it!"]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449586 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449608 Teacher might have provided positive reinforcement and specific expectations or provided an example of how to proceed. 

]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:08 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449608 can you please show me your evidence? we are giving evidence b/c...and some examples from the m.lesson https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449856 2020-08-12 16:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449856 "Your writing is good. To add power to your argument, let's try adding some evidence to prove your point." https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449864 2020-08-12 16:55:10 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449864 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449904 Ask for the student to show  where they got the their info from

]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449904 the teacher could have checked for understanding of the assignment then retaught in-the-moment https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449912 2020-08-12 16:55:11 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677449912 What Might Teacher Do? https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450026 It sounds like this is a persuasive piece. The teacher could have a verbal pursausioin discussion to help the student understand why it's important to back up his work with evidence. For example "I see you said apples are the best fruit. I think oranges are. Why do you think apples are the best?"

]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450026 Teacher could have provided more specific examples of where student needed citations https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450080 2020-08-12 16:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450080 "That's very interesting, can you show me where you found that information?" https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450097 2020-08-12 16:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450097 The teacher may have showed the student examples of citing evidence with in the article. https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450117 2020-08-12 16:55:18 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450117 You have a strong point, how can the reader know their is evidence to support your point? https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450158 2020-08-12 16:55:20 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450158 I notice you don't have any cited evidence. Remember that evidence is like words from other authors or texts. Where did you get ideas for this statement you wrote? Find that part and I will come back to check on you. https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450299 2020-08-12 16:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450299 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450432 I notices that you are well on your way to your argument. Remember to cite your sources.]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450432 "I see you wrote _______ what evidence do you have to show that?" Listen and help write one response together if needed. https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450451 2020-08-12 16:55:28 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450451 The teacher could have said "I would like for you to cite evidence, let's take a look at your sources and how you might move forward..." https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450493 2020-08-12 16:55:30 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450493 The teacher could have said, "Great start. It looks like the next step is adding evidence. do you need me to meet with you one-on-one." https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450806 2020-08-12 16:55:40 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450806 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450873 "Is there something in the text that made you think that?"

]]> 2020-08-12 16:55:42 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677450873 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677451126 'I like how you....now let's try the skill of citing evidence. Watch as I model how...']]> 2020-08-12 16:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677451126 re-ask the question in a different way https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677451762 2020-08-12 16:56:10 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677451762 https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677453103 The teacher might have asked the student to read their section of writing and asked if they feel if something is missing or could add more depth to their writing.]]> 2020-08-12 16:56:48 UTC https://padlet.com/clarissabarnett/gue8f0xkqqto2ejs/wish/677453103