https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii Made with no regrets, whatsoever en-us 2021-04-14 09:55:48 UTC 2021-04-19 09:53:01 UTC hello@padlet.com yqin24 https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1428387177 From the feedback, the following information was obtained. The thesis statement is not clear enough, and in the second part of the assignment, the introduction, there is no clear main argument.]]> 2021-04-17 15:50:21 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1428387177 https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1428967661 thinking carefully to organize each points in order, to make the structure more clear. Using different sources of evidence to support my views. ]]> 2021-04-18 01:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1428967661 szhang137 https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1430279601 According to the previous feedback, I think what I need to improve most is my time management. In my future work, I will submit my homework on time. Secondly, I should pay attention to the format of references. Finally, I should write the sentences in the last paragraph more clearly.]]> 2021-04-18 17:31:44 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1430279601 mbi41 https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1432126824 According to my feedback, there are so many problems I need to improve, for example the details and structure. When I want to explain something, I lack the specific examples to support them, and I did not follow the PEE structure in some paragraphs. ]]> 2021-04-19 08:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1432126824 https://padlet.com/usictech/gtp6pbjrnw9a33ii/wish/1432305411 According to my feedback, I need to learn a lot. In writing, I should pay attention to my structure arrangement, be clear and accurate. Secondly, when writing, I should use the structure of pee, as well as the accuracy of details and the clarity of views.

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