Processfolio Writing by Meatee ChaiDee https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc Meatee Chaidee : 18413684 : PG en-us 2018-05-07 16:31:21 UTC 2026-02-02 16:17:17 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Basketball.png Additional resources to help me kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010787  http://uefap.com/writing/feature/hedge.htm : I learnt the hedging language from this site to improve my writing.

https://www.macmillandictionary.com/ : Very useful to find the meaning and synonym of the word.

http://www.just-the-word.com/ : Many collocation show in these website.

https://cpb-eu-w2.wpmucdn.com/mypad.northampton.ac.uk/dist/d/6334/files/2018/01/HarvardRefQuickGuide-update-2016-with-updated-logo-18ld18d.pdf : Document for Harvard reference guide.

]]> 2018-08-20 10:23:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010787 Reflections kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010821 Did well + : I think in evaluation part is quite good. It is said about author, and how reliable for this source. Moreover, I always completed task instruction, and reference list is correct.

Be bad - :  I think paraphrase, and word form is always difficult to me. Also, my summarize is quite need to improve because sometimes it missed the key idea or main topic in this section.]]> 2018-08-20 10:23:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010821 Feedback from tutor kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010933 Task 1 Strengths: 
- There is a structure and appropriate academic style within your summary with evaluation. 
- Use of citations and the language is mostly formal. 

Task 2 Strengths: 
- There has been an attempt to link both articles and use some synthesising language. 
- Excellent referencing and use of integral/non-integral citations.

Task 1 Areas to improve:  
- There are some grammatical errors (missing verbs, wrong tense) and missing words from sentences. 
Please review these before submitting next time. 
- I would like to see more evaluative comments throughout your writing using adjectives and adverbs (check Lesson 2.1 in the RW booklet on criticality). 

Task 2 Areas to improve: 
- A more thorough summary of Teece needed - with specific details. Try to 'wave in each paragraph' - providing abstract and concrete writing. 
- Some awkward phrasing/sentences used. 
]]> 2018-08-20 10:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/274010933 The reflection after discuss about articles kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/276167273 Q1 : Did I talk about all 3 articles ?
A1 : It has similarity for all of 3 articles, so I talked to all of them covered by the 1 topic.

Q2 : What have I learnt ?
A2 : I have learnt about Business Model that important to create before start your own business.

Q3 : How have I learnt it ?
A3 : I think I already knew the business model since I read the first article, but I did more understanding when I finished to read article 2 and 3.

Q4 : Did talking about them help ? (Discuss with another classmate )
A4 : I found that some of classmate articles same with me, and most of them also relate with my major. So, it must give me many benefit if I read before start a major course.

]]> 2018-08-29 10:35:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/276167273 Stance kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/276169612
Q1: What is writer's stance ?
A1: I do not know the word 'stance'.
After search google : "Stance" literally refers to where you stand - your position, argument or thesis. In reviewing other work, you need to make it clear to the reader if your attitude is positive or negative. Often this decision is influenced by your ‘perspective’ (Copied from : http://www4.caes.hku.hk/acadgrammar/litrev/section2/part3.htm )

Q2 : How can you see it ?
A2 : It can be found form the author notice bias, notice personal opinions

]]> 2018-08-29 10:54:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/276169612 Abstract kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/277273196 This Padlet is made up of my own process through 3 articles. You can see my actions by using the teacher's comments or by using websites that help improve my writing skills. In addition, I also put pictures of my drafting task 1, 2 and 3 to make any reader accessible and understandable. Moreover, the reflection of my group discussion about each person article is also out in here. You can see nearly "Stance" topic that I have learnt to know the author opinion. Finally, I link many picture that I have done and it effect to my writing improvement.]]> 2018-09-03 09:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/277273196 Task 1 draft kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278090873 2018-09-05 17:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278090873 Task 2 draft kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091021 2018-09-05 17:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091021 Task 3 draft kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091137 2018-09-05 17:11:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091137 Annotate ofthe article kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091699 2018-09-05 17:12:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278091699 Article 2 colour code kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278092278 2018-09-05 17:12:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278092278 Writing Waves kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278110615 2018-09-05 17:43:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278110615 Reading martrix kpb_not https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278111343 2018-09-05 17:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kpb_not/gtny3dmk2mvc/wish/278111343