https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5 Take the sentence "This pizza is delicious" and use dialogue and/or sensory language to SHOW not tell. en-us 2022-05-05 13:20:04 UTC 2026-02-23 12:13:36 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3ad.png 2744042 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171514925 The pizza is scrumptious, the flavors are melting all over my tongue 🤤🤤]]> 2022-05-05 14:22:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171514925 2749561 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171515589 The pizza's delumptious mist filled up the entire room and, its soft doughy crust only made my mouth water over and over again.]]> 2022-05-05 14:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171515589 276823 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171515886 this pizza is like the most enjoyable thing ever. I am eating it right now and i feel like i should have another piece . ]]> 2022-05-05 14:23:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171515886 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171517320 The pizza smells so fresh like I just want to keep licking my lips and biting the outside of my tongue. Then I held the pizza in my hand and it felt so soft like a new born baby.]]> 2022-05-05 14:23:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171517320 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171519494 I am gazing at the oliy, aromatic pizza that it made my mouth drool.]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171519494 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171519794 This pizza is so delicious that the sweet taste of it made me unable to describe how amazing it tasted. i had my attention on the pizza and i was laser-focused at the amazing food right in front of me.]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171519794 274536 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520046 I walked out of my room and smelled the fresh air, It drew me in. I looked up and saw a slice of pizza on a plate for me. The stringy melted cheese slid down the rims of the pizza. The perfect triangle slice was steaming hot, steam was rising from it. I sat down on the table and slowly picked it up, watching the cheese drip down further. I slowy brought it up to my mouth, not wanting to mess up the perfect slice. My mouth watered as I slowly took a bite. The pizza flavor melted in my mouth. I looked up at my mom with a face full of food. "where did you get this?" I say, "I got it from market basket, I just cooked it in the oven." She laughed. ]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:27 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520046 268295 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520061 The pizza is so flavourfull that my taste buds are having a party]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520061 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520570 This pizza tastes like someone threw cow poop into a piece of bread and baked it with a street light and you could smell the poop from miles awhile.]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520570 2744481 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520591 This pizza is so sharp and too tangy for me. It is quite unpleasant It does not sit on my tastebuds right. Almost like you threw stuff together and called it a pizza.]]> 2022-05-05 14:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520591 2767091 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520988 I was going to get cheese pizza and it was like a train of flavors and spices were falling in my mouth.]]> 2022-05-05 14:26:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171520988 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171521894 I walked into the pizza place and see the people rolling the dough and splashing tomato sauce. I look on my left and I see people gently taking the nice cheesy pizza out of the over. I can feel my hunger grow as I look on my right and see people putting the pizza's in boxes. My mouth waters as I pay more attention to the people taking the pizza out of the oven. and seeing its all cheesy goodness. ]]> 2022-05-05 14:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171521894 2745591 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171522850 I looked at my pizza, the crust had my eyes glistening, the oil had such a glossy touch on the pizza, the aroma of it had my mouth drooling. I took my first bite of my pizza and my hands had become greasy like having baby oil on your skin. The pizza had such a peppery but flavorful taste, I could just savour this pizza for hours.]]> 2022-05-05 14:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171522850 2764211 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171523339 This pizza is so delicious. I can see the cheese all melted on the bread with the oil on the cheese and i cant imagine taking that first bite with the cheese pull and the crunch of the bread. its like finding gold under the rainbow.

]]> 2022-05-05 14:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171523339 2746763 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171523550 The sauce dripping from the pizza and the greasy cheese makes my mouth water.🤤]]> 2022-05-05 14:27:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171523550 2779561 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171524460 2022-05-05 14:28:08 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171524460 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171526846 the pizza is shiny with all of the grease and flavorful and the sauce makin my mouth water🤤]]> 2022-05-05 14:29:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171526846 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171529423 I glanced at this pizza, then bit into it. Then I thought "This pizza is delicious", the tomato sauce tastes so sweet. The crust is cheesy and crunchy.]]> 2022-05-05 14:30:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171529423 2746082 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171530073 2022-05-05 14:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171530073 2915845 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171532340 As I walked into the house the smell of pizza in the air hit me in the face, making my mouth watery. As I walked to the kitchen my mother made pizza "Came just in time, pizzas fresh out of the oven!" my mother said as she's making me a plate. I sat down and my mother gave me my plate I sat there looking at the oily cheesy pizza in front of me. As I take the first bite the flavors crash together.]]> 2022-05-05 14:32:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171532340 2894431 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727207 this pizza tasted like it had toe nails and frog puke mixed with the sauce and cheese, the crust was gooey and felt like slime in my mouth ]]> 2022-05-05 16:32:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727207 2709196 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727307 Jimmy's Pizza is like a popsicle. One bite of that pizza is like the delicious flavor is melting straight through me.]]> 2022-05-05 16:32:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727307 2767471 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727639 One glance at the cheesy oily pizza and I was already drooling.]]> 2022-05-05 16:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171727639 2745724 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171730220 The melted cheese slowly drips down my plate, along with oil. The smell of the pizza lingers around my nose. My mouth starts to water, hearts in my eyes before taking the first bite. Once I took the bite, the flavors burst in my mouth. "Yummy," I whispered.]]> 2022-05-05 16:34:42 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171730220 2802229 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171732086 The pizza in my hand was covered with grease, the smell of the cheese filled the air. The stringy cheese stretched out as I took a bite. The first thing that touched my taste buds was the saltiness of the pizza. The crust was just so perfectly baked. ]]> 2022-05-05 16:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171732086 276495 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171733103 The pizza looked like a dream. It made my mouth water up looking at the steam rise up with all the toppings drenched and glazed like a glazed donut with all the savory taste]]> 2022-05-05 16:36:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171733103 2744582 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734475 This small but overly topped pizza is turning cold slowly as the toppings fall out one by one. This pizza has that delicious cheese stretching in between it and your mouth. The slurping of the cheese is getting longer every time I pull it away.]]> 2022-05-05 16:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734475 2767501 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734575 The pizza is so enjoyable that I can see the worker making the pizza in my head. My fingers are so greasy that I can feel the pizza falling out my hand.]]> 2022-05-05 16:37:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734575 2880151 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734980 The pizza tastes too bland, I hate it so much all I can taste is cardboard. I don't wanna eat it but my stomach is screaming for food. I suck it up and eat it anyways.]]> 2022-05-05 16:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171734980 2749221 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171735270 The pizza looks watery with all the grease it has. It also looked shiny and smelt very good. I had to put the chilly flakes on the pizza to make it look good. The chilly flakes had a strong smell with the punch of the spiciness. The cheese was so melty and deleosis. My stomach was rumbling because I was very hungry. When I took a bite I was happy. But the pizza was hot. ]]> 2022-05-05 16:38:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171735270 2764684 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171735878 The pizza was perfectly prepared with a spicy stench from the pepperonies, the grease is still sizzling, the crust is rough, the pizza is soft, moist, and delicious.]]> 2022-05-05 16:38:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171735878 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171736315 My eyes drifted to the open cardboard box filled with fresh slices of pepperoni pizza, covered with cheese from the tip to the start of the crust. Saliva build up in my mouth as I imagined the gooey cheese stretching from the pizza to the rim of my teeth. My hands reached over to take a slice and immediately stuffed it in my mouth, biting into the soft bread of the pizza.]]> 2022-05-05 16:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171736315 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740069 the pizza they gave me at chuck e cheese passed by a worker to me was nasty i looked down at the plate, the pizza was small and thin the grease was spilling over the sides of the small pizza the cheese was burnt and dried almost as if somone had left the pizza out on the table then heated it up and served me it.]]> 2022-05-05 16:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740069 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740428 The reeking smell of the school pizza had me dying, the first bite was unpleasing.]]> 2022-05-05 16:41:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740428 2745272 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740846 The glisten of the melted cheese and the salty aroma of the roasted ham sitting on the cheese. The crunch as my teeth break off the top of the pizza and the gooey cheese fills my mouth and the more I chew i can taste the perfect combination of the sweet pineapple and salty ham.]]> 2022-05-05 16:41:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171740846 2830582 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171741807 This pizza had a foul-smelling cheese that looks flavourless with all the cheese slipping off the gooey soft dough.]]> 2022-05-05 16:42:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171741807 281356 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171742289 The grease from the pizza was so glossy that it made my stomach grumble. The scrumptious pizza finally touched my tongue, the powerful train of flavors kicked me. The aroma of the pizza was so luscious and strong.]]> 2022-05-05 16:42:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171742289 2767921 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171742675 The pizza I smelled made my mouth water. I walked down into the kitchen and saw the greasy and delicious meal. I grabbed a piece and took a big bite. The melted cheese and pepperoni made me feel like I was in heaven.  ]]> 2022-05-05 16:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171742675 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171745100 I get a huge whiff of the hot and buttery aroma of the pizza just as it gets passed on into my view right on the table in front of me. The grease of melted, swirled, orange and white cheese glistens in the light of the restaurant. The light hits the pizza just right so that it shows off the steam and light brown crust with a small darker browned burnt spot in the corner of the crust just to compliment the whole plate.]]> 2022-05-05 16:44:35 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171745100 2745704 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171745910 The pizza looked dryer than the sahara desert. That dark thick crust was impossible to rip off.]]> 2022-05-05 16:45:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171745910 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171748945 The minute I walked into the room I was attacked by the delicious aroma of pizza, then I saw it, the cheese was gooey and you could see how shiny it was.]]> 2022-05-05 16:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171748945 2799561 https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171757925 As my eyes shifted over the delicious, mouth-watering, dazzling pineapple pizza box. My stomach grumbled and gurgled as soon as the aroma of that tangy smell from the pineapple hit my nose. I reached for the box and opened it to find a 12-in pizza coated in pineapple and ham. I picked up the oily slice and took my first bite. Flavors upon flavors and a crunchy exquisite taste.]]> 2022-05-05 16:53:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kmmacinnis/gthz8j4d9btnrcw5/wish/2171757925