https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr en-us 2020-03-27 15:01:16 UTC 2025-12-18 00:45:04 UTC hello@padlet.com ascott24 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569605977 In many developing countries there is a growing problem with air pollution caused by industry and construction. What are the negative consequences and what measures can be taken to prevent this?

1. General background .. "These days...(paraphrase the topic)
2. Focus on the question (There are many negative effects of this)
3. Give outline (This essay will)]]> 2020-05-13 09:48:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569605977 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569722361 Rewrite this Adina ... there is too much information in your introduction - where is the punctuation? You need 3 sentences!
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Over the years there has been a large increase in air pollution this is due to the growing market and economy of countries and how countries have began to become less rural and alot more urban factories cause a large amount of air pollution which can be very harmful to the environment and not only the environment but also the residents of the environment as air pollution is casued via burning fossil fules which create co2 and soot which can be very harmful to the lungs and can be worser for people who already have breathing issues i.e asthma ]]> 2020-05-13 10:48:04 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569722361 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569726617 Good work.. much better!

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The air pollution had released (has been released)from  (for) many of years in all around the world by industries and vehicals (Sp.) by which the ozone layer is breaking down and that effect the climate change, global warming, unknown diseases in our environment etc.These toxic substances have a very bad effect on human beings as well as environment. This essay will analyse the problem from which we can prevent air pollution and change our bad environment in a pollution free environment.]]> 2020-05-13 10:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/569726617 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/570004796 Essay ]]> 2020-05-13 13:12:57 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/570004796 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/570056547 Very good background ... but don't forget the outline sentence! Also ... you should have 3 sentences ! Where is the punctuation?
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These days   more and more    air pollution release on  Earth  because alot of people use cars and  factors that  performs   very bad  effect on human  and  human  as well  as environment also negative  about air pollution   human  have  solution to  move away  from fossil and use  sun  energy ]]> 2020-05-13 13:31:40 UTC https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/570056547 https://padlet.com/ascott24/gt3upjyjbdpr/wish/570064964 Good but where is the punctuation? You need 3 sentences! Where is the outline?
Too much information for an introduction,Ehsan!

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This essay will tell about the air pollution caused by industry in developing countries.Over the  years there has been a large increase in air pollution .This is due to the growing market and economy of countries and how countries have began to become less rural and alot more urban factories cause a large number of air pollution which can be very harmful to the environment but also the residents of the environment as air pollution is caused by burning fossil fuels.We can prevent the air pollution by growing more trees.

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