1. 종이로 나눠 준 위 체크리스트에 항목별로 수정 검토하면서 영어 에세이 왼성하기

2. 그리고 헤당 번호 탭에 학번 이름 쓰고 타이핑한 영어 에세이로 업로드하기

3. 체크 리스트는 자신이 작성하여 선생님께 제출하기

prompt:

Hi, Nice to meet you. I am writing an English essay about the environment. If there are any grammar mistakes in my sentences, please correct them and explain why.

A family is eatting ramen. They are useing disposable items. People poured ramen soup into the toilet. Why did people pour ramen soup into the toilet? We should recycling waste proper. There is many food waste.

I think this is a big problem. When we pollute the earth, animals get sick, and plants die. The main reason is that people do not care enough about nature. Factories and cars also make a lot of smoke, which makes the air dirty.

We should start recycling and using less plastic. We can also walk or ride bikes instead of driving cars. Together,we can make the earth a better place to live.

plastic pollution,environment,recycle,waste,life

Introduction

Not recycling waste harms the environment. It destroys natural habitats for animals and plants.

Body

I think improper waste disposal increases landfills. This makes it hard for humans, animals, and plants to live.

Conclusion

We must be vigilant about waste management issues. We should recycle more and reduce waste.

Introduction\

Plastic waste from land makes up 78% of marine debris. This harms our environment.

Body\

I think plastic waste is a big problem. It affects marine life. Fish and other sea animals eat plastic. This plastic turns into microplastics. When we eat fish, we also eat microplastics. We consume about 5 grams of microplastics every day. This is bad for our health.

Conclusion\

We should reduce plastic waste. Use reusable bags and bottles, and recycle plastic. Together, we can protect the environment.

1. Complex Recycling Systems:

   • Different rules across states and cities confuse people about proper recycling.

2. China's Import Ban:

   • Since 2018, China stopped importing U.S. recyclable waste, leading to more waste in landfills.

3. Economic Issues:

   • Recycling is not always profitable, so waste is often disposed of instead.

4. Lack of Consumer Awareness:

   • Many Americans are not well-educated about recycling.

To solve these issues, improving recycling facilities, educating the public, and reducing disposable product use are essential.

**Introduction**

1. New York City produces about 20 million tons of waste per day.

2. However, about 75% of this waste is moved to landfills without recycling.

**Body**

3. I think this is a big problem because it harms our environment.

4. When waste is not recycled, it produces methane gas, which causes global warming.

5. Many people do not properly sort their waste because they find it bothersome.

6. This makes the environment worse and wastes resources.

**Conclusion**

7. We should carefully dispose of plastics and food waste separately.

8. By doing this, we can reduce pollution and help the planet.

9. I believe everyone can make a difference if they try.

10. We should all care about the environment and encourage others to do the same.

After, 2nd

Key words: environment

Intro:

New York City produces about 20 million tons of waste per day. This waste is mostly buried in landfills without recycling. This includes food waste that produces methane gas and causes global warming.

Body:

Many people do not sort their waste properly. I think this is because they find it bothersome. This behavior makes the environment worse. Plastic and food waste need special care because they harm nature.

Conclusion:

We should carefully separate plastics and food waste. We need to make an effort to care about the environment. If we all do our part, we can make a big difference.

Introduction:

I think plastic pollution is a big problem for our environment.

Plastic pollutes our land and water.

Body:

Plastic packaging makes the land and water dirty.

This is a problem because it pollutes our land and water.

Single-use plastics waste valuable resources.

Resources are wasted because we use them once and throw them away.

Plastic harms sea animals and their habitats.

Sea animals eat plastic and get sick, which is very bad for them.

Conclusion:

We should use less plastic to protect our environment.

We can use reusable containers instead of single-use plastics.

Choosing recyclable packaging is also a good way to help the environment.

after

second draft

Key wards:Delivery waste,Environmental protection,Reusable containers,Recycling

Introduction: Our world has big problems because of pollution and trash.

Body: First, plastic makes the soil and water very dirty. Second, single-use plastics waste important resources. Third, plastic hurts sea animals a lot. Fourth, it costs more and more money to get rid of trash. Fifth, tiny plastic pieces called microplastics pollute everywhere.

Conclusion: I think we should use reusable containers to use less plastic. We should also recycle more. It is important to use eco-friendly materials. Lastly, I believe we should teach people about the importance of protecting the environment and make stronger rules and policies.

The U.S.A makes a lot of trash but doesn’t recycle.

Body:

This causes big problems. They lack good recycling policies. People don’t know much about recycling.

Conclusion:

We need nationwide recycling laws and education to prevent pollution.

Body The problem is that food waste produces methane gas, which causes global warming. Also, plastic waste in the sea turns into microplastics. These microplastics harm sea animals and eventually affect people. This happens because there is a lot of plastic waste in landfills and the sea.

Conclusion We should try to avoid using plastic as much as possible. If we do use it, it's important to separate and recycle it properly. By doing this, we can help reduce pollution and save the earth.

After 2nd draft: 10307 김태연

key words: methane gas, globl warming, plastic, recycling 등

Introduction

In New York, trash cans have both regular garbage and food waste mixed together. This makes it hard to separate. I think this situation is harmful to our environment.

Body

The problem is that food waste produces methane gas, which causes global warming. Also, plastic waste in the sea turns into microplastics. These microplastics harm sea animals and eventually affect people. This happens because there is a lot of plastic waste in landfills and the sea.

Conclusion

We should try to avoid using plastic as much as possible. If we do use it, it's important to separate and recycle it properly. By doing this, we can help reduce pollution and save the earth.

key words: methane gas, global warming, trash, recycle

Introduction:

I think our environment is in danger because people are not taking care of it. Many countries, like the United States, are not good at recycling. They build landfills to deal with trash, but these landfills produce methane gas that speeds up global warming.

Body:

The problem is that the United States makes a lot of trash but only recycles 35% of it. One reason is that recycling rules are different everywhere, so people throw recyclables in the trash or dirty items in recycling bins. This lowers the recycling rate.

Conclusion:

We should improve our recycling methods to save the Earth. Everyone needs to follow the same recycling rules. Also, we should reduce the amount of trash we make and recycle more.

Many restaurants use plastic containers for delivery. This harms the environment.

Body

I think this is a big problem because plastic takes a long time to break down. Additionally, it pollutes our oceans and harms sea animals.

Conclusion

We should encourage restaurants to use eco-friendly containers. It is not easy for all restaurants to change, but they should think of ways to be less harmful to the environment.

<Introduction> Many people are not aware that 75% of the plastic waste in our oceans comes from food-related items. This is causing serious problems for the environment.

<Body> The problem is that people order a lot of delivered food and consume many individually wrapped snacks, drinks, and bottled water, creating a lot of waste. This is because people don't think much about the environmental impact of their actions.

<Conclusion> I think we should order less delivered food and encourage companies to stop selling snacks in individual packaging. We should also make an effort to recycle bottles, caps, and containers properly

after

Introduction:Helo my name is Jin Ha Lin. Today, our environment is in danger. Many people use too many disposable products every day.

Body: This causes a lot of waste and pollution. I think this is a big problem for our planet. Plastic waste harms animals and plants. Also, burning waste pollutes the air.

One reason for this problem is that disposable products are very convenient. Another reason is that people often do not recycle properly.

Conclusion: We should try to use fewer disposable products. We can also recycle more and help clean up our neighborhoods. By doing these things, we can protect our environment.

Introduction:

Many people order food delivery and use a lot of plastic containers.

These plastic containers often cannot be recycled.

Body: The problem is that people do not clean the containers before throwing them away. I think this makes recycling very difficult. Also, using too many disposable items is bad for the environment. We should understand why this is happening. One reason is that cleaning containers takes time. Another reason is that people are not aware of the recycling rules.

Conclusion: To solve this problem, we should use more eco-friendly disposables. We should also clean our containers before recycling them.

This essay simplifies the issue of delivery and plastic waste in a way that middle school students can understand, following the structure and requirements provided.

Intro: The United States is a highly industrialized nation that generates massive amounts of waste, but has lacked comprehensive nationwide recycling policies. Instead, the country has relied heavily on landfilling and incineration, leading to severe environmental consequences.

Body: Methane gas produced by the decomposition of organic waste in landfills is a potent greenhouse gas that accelerates climate change. Incineration also releases harmful air pollutants that negatively impact human health and the environment. This reliance on landfilling and incineration over recycling has led to serious environmental issues, including methane emissions, air pollution, and soil and water contamination.

To address these problems, the U.S. needs to implement comprehensive national recycling policies and infrastructure. Multi-faceted efforts are required, such as public education, business incentives, and the development of a circular economy. Investment in these sustainable waste management strategies is crucial to reduce the country's environmental footprint.

Conclusion: The United States must prioritize recycling and shift away from the harmful practices of landfilling and incineration. By implementing comprehensive recycling policies and promoting a circular economy, the country can mitigate its environmental impact and work towards a more sustainable future.

2nd draft

Topic:America's recycling problem

Keywords:landfilling,methane gas,green house gas,pollution

Introduction: The United States makes a lot of waste but does not have good recycling policies. Instead, it relies on burying and burning trash, which harms the environment.

Body: Landfills produce methane gas, a strong greenhouse gas that speeds up climate change. Burning trash releases harmful air pollutants that hurt people and nature. To fix this, the U.S. needs to create nationwide recycling programs and educate people about recycling.

Conclusion: By doing this, the country can reduce its environmental impact and move towards a greener future

1.Many people throw away too much fppd waste without thing.

2.This creates a lot of methane gas, which makes global warming wores.

Body

3.The problem is that people find it hard to recycle waste properly

4.

Introduction:

The United States is troubled by the garbage problem. Due to the trash, the sea has become polluted and the residents' lives have become difficult.

Body:

I think this is a serious problem because trash harms both the environment and people. When people do not recycle, it increases the amount of waste. This waste pollutes the ocean and makes life harder for the residents.

Conclusion:

We should recycle properly and dispose of trash in designated areas. People need to become environmental guardians. By doing this, we can protect the environment and make life better for everyone.

A lot of food trash goes into the ocean. This trash hurts fish and later hurts us too.

Body:

I think this is a big problem because a lot of the trash is plastic from food packages. When fish eat plastic, they can die. This hurts all sea animals. Also, the plastic breaks into tiny pieces and gets into our food.This is bad for us.

Conclusion:

We should use our own cups, jars, and bowls to carry food By doing this, we can make less ocean trash. From now on, I will always use my own containers to help make less trash.

More than half of the waste we produce is food-related, and food-related waste makes up 44% of the 63% of marine debris that comes from land.

Body:

I think food-related waste is more than other types of waste because many items like plastic bottles and snack packs are individually wrapped. This results in a lot of trash.

Conclusion:

We should use personal tumblers and containers to reduce food-related waste. We should also avoid using disposable products.

Intro:

New York City collects about 12,000 tons of trash daily. About 75% of it goes to landfills without recycling. Worldwide, 1.3 billion tons of food are wasted yearly.

Body:

Restaurants throw away a lot of food. One-third of New York City's trash decomposes. I think this is a big problem because food waste releases methane gas. Methane is 21 times stronger than carbon dioxide and promotes global warming.

Conclusion:

We should order only what we can eat at restaurants. I also believe we should pack leftovers if possible. By doing this, we can help save the Earth.

After

Introduction:

New York City collects about 12,000 tons of trash every day. About 75% of it goes to landfills without recycling. Around the world, 1.3 billion tons of food are wasted each year.

Body:

Restaurants throw away a lot of food. One-third of New York City's trash is food waste. I think this is a big problem because food waste creates methane gas. Methane is 21 times stronger than carbon dioxide and makes global warming worse.

Conclusion:

We should order only what we can eat at restaurants. We should also pack leftovers if possible. By doing this, we can help save the Earth.

* 환경을 주제로 쓴 영어 에세이를 다음 조건에 따라 정리해 줘.

<조건>

1. 구조화: intro에 환경에 해를 끼치는 상황 요약, body에 앞 상황에 대한 problem을 제시, 그리고 이유와 원인 분석을 할 것,

conclusion에 problem에 대한 실천적 행동을 제안하기

2. 형식: 총 10개 이내의 문장으로, 중1 학생들이 이해하기 쉬운 영어 표현과 간단한 문장으로 표현하기

3. 구문: I think~ I /We should~를 반드시 1개씩 사용

그리고 자신의 영어 글 붙이기(예시)

The U.S.A was producing a lot of trash, but they were not recycling at all~~~

투발루(Tuvalu),해변침식(Coastal erosion),

산호초(Coral reefs),야자나무(Palm trees)

Intro:

A lot of food trash goes into the ocean. This trash hurts fish and then hurts us too.

Body:

I think this is a big problem because a lot of the trash is plastic from food packages. When fish eat plastic, they can die. This hurts all sea animals. Also, the plastic breaks into tiny pieces and gets into our food. This is bad for us.

Conclusion:

We should use our own cups, jars, and bowls for food. This way, we can make less ocean trash. From now on, I will always use my own containers to help make less trash.

Since COVID-19, people prefer takeout or delivery over dining in, leading to a huge amount of delivery trash.

Body

Even though the whole world is advocating to use fewer disposable items due to environmental issues, the use of single-use items doesn't decrease because they are much cheaper than biodegradable plastics.

Conclusion

Therefore, I think that individuals should use reusable items instead of disposables, and governments should encourage the use of reusable items by implementing laws such as imposing special taxes on single-use items. On a global scale, we need to raise awareness about the climate crisis and link it to the use of single-use items to reduce their usage.

The U.S.A is one of the world's largest waste producers but lacks effective recycling practices.

Body:

Due to inadequate federal regulations and varying recycling rules across states and cities, environmental pollution is increasing.

Conclusion:

Establishing more recycling centers with incentives for returning plastic items based on type and quantity could encourage better recycling habits and protect the environment.

1.Many people harm the environment by throwing trash everywhere.

2.They also use too much plastic and waste water.

Body:

3. I think this is a serious problem because it damages our planet.

4. Trash pollutes the land and water, hurting animals and plants.

5. Using too much plastic and wasting water leads to more pollution and scarcity.

Conclusion:

6. We should reduce our use of plastic and recycle more.

7. We should save water and not waste it.

8. Everyone can help by doing small things to protect the Earth.

서론 (Introduction)

Hello, my name is Jin Harin.

The amount of waste is increasing these days. I will talk about Zero Waste, one of the ways to reduce disposable waste.

본론 (Body)

Have you ever thought about how much waste you produce in a day?

Excessive waste significantly harms the environment.

We generate a lot of waste by using disposable products.

Frequent food delivery also increases waste.

I think Zero Waste can effectively solve this problem.

The steps for Zero Waste are: Refuse, Reduce, Reuse, Recycle, and Rot.

Following these steps can help reduce waste.

결론 (Conclusion)

We should practice Zero Waste to protect our environment!

Introduction:

Many people harm the environment by throwing trash everywhere.

They also use too much plastic and waste water.

Body:

I think this is a serious problem because it damages our planet.

Trash pollutes the land and water, hurting animals and plants.

Using too much plastic and wasting water leads to more pollution and scarcity.

Conclusion:

We should reduce our use of plastic and recycle more.

We should save water and not waste it.. Everyone can help by doing small things to protect the Earth.

요약: Many people harm the environment by throwing trash everywhere and using too much plastic. This pollution damages our planet and hurts animals and plants. Overuse of plastic and wasting water lead to more pollution and scarcity. We should reduce plastic use, recycle more, and save water. Everyone can help protect the Earth by making small changes.

Use Less Plastic: Use bags and containers you can use again.

Sort Trash: Put plastic, glass, metal, and paper in the right bins.

Don't Waste Food: Eat all your food and use leftovers.

Use Green Products: Use things that are good for the Earth.

Help the Earth: Join activities to protect the Earth and spread the word. Small actions matter. Save the ocean together

Many restaurants use plastic containers for delivery. This is bad for the environment.

Body:

I think this is a big problem because plastic takes a long time to break down. It also pollutes our oceans and harms sea animals.

Conclusion:

We should encourage restaurants to use eco-friendly containers. We should help them find ways to be less harmful to the environment.

<after>2nd draft

1. Many people throw away too much food waste without thinking.

2. This creates a lot of methane gas, which makes global warming worse.

Body

3. The problem is that people find it hard to recycle waste properly.

4. I think this is because it takes time and effort to sort the waste.

5. Instead, some people dump their waste into the ocean.

6. When waste is in the ocean, marine animals eat it, thinking it is food.

7. This can cause the animals to get sick or die.

Conclusion

8. We should not throw waste into the ocean.

9. We should put our waste in recycling bins.

10. I think if everyone helps, we can protect our planet.

This version meets the specified conditions and is easy for middle school students to understand.

<after> 2nd draft

intro

Many people throw away too much food waste without thinking. This creates a lot of methane gas, which makes global warming worse.

Body:

The problem is that people find it hard to recycle waste properly.

I think this is because it takes time and effort to sort the waste.

Instead, some people dump their waste into the ocean.

When waste is in the ocean, marine animals eat it, thinking it is food.

This can cause the animals to get sick or die.

Conclusion:

We should not throw waste into the ocean.

We should put our waste in recycling bins.

I think if everyone helps, we can protect our planet.

Key words: garbage, waste, zero waste, pollution, environmental problem, reduce, environment, effort, practice, stop

Intro

These days, a great amount of trashes cause many environmental problems and pollutions. If we don't make an effort to reduce garbage, our planet will become an irrevocable state. So today, I'm going to talk about how to solve this problem. The way to waste and solve the problem is practicing zero-waste.

Body

Our society faces a significant issue with the large amount of garbage that is thrown into nature each year, which pollutes and threatens both the environment and humans. People's attitudes need to change as they do not make efforts to reduce household trash.

Practicing zero-waste is an effective way to reduce waste. Bea Johnson, a global zero-waste advocate, managed to fit her family's yearly trash into a small glass jar by following five principles: refuse, reduce, reuse, recycle, and rot.

Conclusion

Environmental destruction is worsening due to excessive waste. To protect our planet, we must stop producing so much garbage and practice zero-waste for a better environment.

Introduction

I think one of the biggest environmental problems is the use of disposable products.

Body

Many animals die because they eat disposable products. They think it is food.

Conclusion

We should use fewer disposable products. This will help save animals and protect the environment.

Ordering delivery food creates too much plastic waste.

Body:

Plastic is bad for the environment because it takes a long time to break down and can hurt animals. Many stores are stopping the use of plastic, but it's not easy for all restaurants to use eco-friendly containers.

Conclusion:

I think we should cut down on delivery waste by using less plastic and bringing our own containers. We need to make better choices to protect the environment.

Intro:

More than half of the trash we make comes from food. Food trash makes up 44% of the 63% of marine trash that comes from land.

Body:

I think there is more food trash than other kinds of trash because many food items are wrapped in plastic bottles and snack packs. This makes a lot of trash. This trash can hurt animals and make the water dirty.

Conclusion:

We should use our own cups and containers to make less food trash. We should also stop using throwaway products. These actions can help keep our environment clean.

1. The United States generates a large amount of waste but does not recycle much of it.

2.

A. Unlike other leading countries, it often ends up being discarded without proper recycling.

B. This is because there are relatively few people who know how to recycle compared to other countries.

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Intro: The problem of plastic marine debris is very serious. Every year, millions of tons of plastic go into the sea, harming sea animals. Fish and turtles eat plastic, thinking it is food, which hurts both the animals and us.

Body: Plastic waste also damages beach tourism and fishing. Additionally, tiny pieces of plastic can pollute our drinking water and food, which is bad for our health.

Conclusion: To fix this problem, everyone needs to use less plastic, recycle more, and join in cleaning up the oceans. Governments and companies should also find better ways to do things. We should educate people about the dangers of plastic pollution and encourage them to take action. Small actions can make a big difference. Let's act now to save our oceans.

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한국어

플라스틱 해양 쓰레기 문제는 매우 심각합니다. 매년 수백만 톤의 플라스틱이 바다로 들어가 바다 동물들에게 해를 끼칩니다. 물고기와 거북이는 플라스틱을 음식으로 착각하고 먹어서 동물과 우리 모두에게 해를 줍니다.

플라스틱 쓰레기는 해변 관광과 어업에도 피해를 줍니다. 또한, 작은 플라스틱 조각들은 우리의 식수와 음식을 오염시켜 건강에 해롭습니다.

이 문제를 해결하려면 모두가 플라스틱 사용을 줄이고, 더 많이 재활용하며, 바다 청소에 참여해야 합니다. 정부와 기업도 더 나은 방법을 찾아야 합니다. 우리는 플라스틱 오염의 위험성에 대해 사람들을 교육하고, 그들이 행동에 나서도록 격려해야 합니다. 작은 행동이 큰 변화를 만들 수 있습니다. 지금 바로 행동하여 우리의 바다를 구합시다.

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요약문

Plastic marine debris is a serious issue, harming sea animals and affecting beach tourism, fishing, and human health. To combat this, we need to reduce plastic use, recycle more, and clean up oceans. Governments, companies, and individuals must take action and educate others about the dangers of plastic pollution to save our oceans.