11-13-20 Writing Class by Davon May https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh en-us 2020-11-13 03:21:40 UTC 2026-01-03 13:45:43 UTC hello@padlet.com Imani https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921366336 2020-11-13 18:43:59 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921366336 John Remy https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397385 2020-11-13 18:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397385 Valentina https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397813 2020-11-13 18:51:16 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397813 Jaylah https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397914 2020-11-13 18:51:17 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921397914 For Student C: davonmay https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921398951
1.   What did this student do well?

2.  What advice would you give this student to help improve the essay?
]]> 2020-11-13 18:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921398951 ALEXARAE https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399005 student A was very bad the invise i will give to mack shere that it mackes sense and student C was very good the invise i will give is read it and take out Q A R C like those. and fix the mistakis to .]]> 2020-11-13 18:51:31 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399005 Noah Alcantara https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399676 2020-11-13 18:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399676 Jasemi https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399970 2020-11-13 18:51:44 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921399970 yahir zarate https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921400412 2020-11-13 18:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921400412 Jasmine Borbon https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921403235 2020-11-13 18:52:27 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921403235 Emma https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921403337 Student C Gave an C E R she or he gave us all of it.
I would say take away the letters C R E and Q take away those letters and in the E he or she needed these S. C. Q? or E! they needed those.]]> 2020-11-13 18:52:28 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921403337 Mateo https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921405369 2020-11-13 18:52:56 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921405369 jade https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921407637 2020-11-13 18:53:27 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921407637 Jairo https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921408134 Student B made a mistake in take he or her said tack but some of it i]]> 2020-11-13 18:53:34 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921408134 Angelea https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921414854 2020-11-13 18:55:09 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921414854 Marlon https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921423610 2020-11-13 18:57:12 UTC https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921423610 As of 11:57 a.m on 11/13 davonmay https://padlet.com/davonmay/gswwh1vjuop8s0fh/wish/921424198 Aiden - exc

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