https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80 Which row of the rubric was especially STRONG? Which row of the rubric needs the most WORK? Give a positive comment and some constructive criticism. en-us 2020-11-16 15:14:29 UTC 2025-09-26 08:58:09 UTC hello@padlet.com 21604931 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/929346093 Establishing the argument was strong, as I really got a sense of what was the issue. The collaboration reflect was a tad weak as answers weren't specific enough and were really guessed. ]]> 2020-11-16 21:18:17 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/929346093 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/929347769 2020-11-16 21:18:49 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/929347769 2160566 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/930206645 Each of you did a really good job at making your argument/issue clear. You guys did a good job at finding relevant evidence to report on your perspective. I just think you guys need to work on the collaborating part and making the transitions sound more cohesive. ]]> 2020-11-17 04:56:21 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/930206645 21603111 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/930280099 For going first it is very nerve wracking, but even with this in mind the presentation given was amazing and spoken well (under the circumstances) overall everything was pretty good and the only thing would be clearer communication between classmates and more confidence in speaking.]]> 2020-11-17 05:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/930280099 21605711 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934048460 The argument was strong, the research was well established. The visualizations were also really good and kept me engaged. Although collaboration could've been more thought out. Solutions were good too. ]]> 2020-11-17 21:13:34 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934048460 21603111 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934051118 Overall the presentation and the information was pretty good, but definitely being more prepared would help out ]]> 2020-11-17 21:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934051118 23601421 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934059236 I think that you guys used a lot of evidence to back up your claims which is good. The graphs and visuals were also good]]> 2020-11-17 21:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934059236 23600311 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934061348 Overall, there was a lot of good information put out with relevant evidence. You guys sounded confident while presenting and the different perspectives were clear. The corrections that need to be made are just some fine tuning type stuff. There needs to be a smoother flow between lenses, and the presentation needs to be shortened. ]]> 2020-11-17 21:17:14 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934061348 23603512 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934062106 They did a good job explaining all of their points and summarizing their lenses. They used good images, like graphs, to depict what they were trying to explain and used the graphs effectively by explaining them. Something they should work on is probably time management when it comes to actually presenting, and then certain group members just have to get done those questions at the end.]]> 2020-11-17 21:17:26 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934062106 23603512 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934070124 The group overall did a great job starting us off by presenting all of their claims effectively and going into detail by using evidence. The main thing this group has to work on is those ending questions for sure and maybe controlling the nerves when presenting because it was very noticeable.]]> 2020-11-17 21:19:48 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934070124 2160179 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934072223 Definitely very strong evidence and support with detailing where the information came from. Maybe some more flow with these different ideas would help the audience understand what you’re trying to say more clearly. ]]> 2020-11-17 21:20:25 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934072223 23600441 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934100267 There were really good points and good evidence throughout the presentation. Their explanations can be shortened with transitions between the lenses. The solutions can also be better explained. Overall there was really good information and they got their point across well. ]]> 2020-11-17 21:28:49 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/934100267 21604931 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/937372513 The introduction was very strong however their transitions as well as their explanations need to be worked on ]]> 2020-11-18 16:04:15 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/937372513 2360136 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/943434940 The presentation was well formatted and clean but the way you guys presented wasn’t very efficient. Not everyone in the group was engaged and prepared to explain their lenses. But overall, it was pretty good. ]]> 2020-11-19 20:49:31 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/943434940 2160566 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/944023533 I think the visuals and evidence were great, but I think you guys should work on making the transitions and collaboration more cohesive. ]]> 2020-11-20 01:07:53 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/944023533 2360217 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/947375809 The introduction to the issue was very clear and very well done with relevant evidence. I believe that your group needs to practice a bit more to know when its their time to go which may make you guys be more confident.]]> 2020-11-20 23:19:58 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/947375809 https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/977062709 Introduction was really good and strong, the transitions from going to and from your slides and lenses could be better organized. ]]> 2020-12-01 18:43:26 UTC https://padlet.com/english218/gsmubvd0v4vffo80/wish/977062709