Bookmarks by María Miranda Chang https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks Made with love en-us 2016-06-22 11:51:26 UTC 2016-08-11 03:10:32 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Moderncam.png Paragraph mmfamch https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/115268345 The arrogance of the lion takes him to fall into the trap of the clever fox.
If we read the story we'll see the lion has a trouble with a large thorn, a fox found him and of course the lion asked for help, but the fox was clever and he knew that the lion was suffering, so he put conditions like kick him.
The lion got angry but finally accepted, so the fox kick him first and then call his friend, and he thinks that he can eat the friend´s fox, but he can´t because the friend was a porcupine.
]]> 2016-06-22 20:19:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/115268345 Activity 1 mmfamch https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/115268380 1. Read the story bellow, notice the different elements used in the writing of these stories such as organization of ideas, punctuation, coherence, cohesion, grammar, etc.
 
2. Based on the story write a paragraph (100 words). When writing the paragraph pay attention to the information from the Writing section in unit 4 in your textbook where you will find the steps to write a paragraph (ps. 76-80).
]]> 2016-06-22 20:20:30 UTC https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/115268380 https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/116123921 Estimada estudiante, 
 
Primeramente lo que usted nos presenta es un resumen y parafraseo de la lectura sugerida, más no un párrafo en sí. 

Su párrafo no tiene un título. Recuerde que el título nos debe dar un idea acerca de lo que se va a referir el párrafo.

 Por otra parte, no existe una "topic sentence" y las oraciones que deberían argumentar esta oración  no describen la "topic sentence". Además no están conectadas correctamente, no hay conectores. El párrafo debe terminar con una "concluding sentence" la cual no existe.

 En base a estos comentarios le solicito realizar nuevamente la tarea. Recuerde que para escribir el párrafo usted debe revisar la sección de escritura de la unidad 4 de su libro. Es muy importante esta revisión para cumplir la tarea adecuadamente.

Esperamos su contribución.
]]> 2016-07-08 17:16:45 UTC https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/116123921 The Lion King and the clever fox mmfamch https://padlet.com/mmfamch/Bookmarks/wish/116779691 The lion king asked other animals for help. But they all feared the lion. So no animals came to help him. 

At last the lion approached the clever fox. But the fox said that he have a little friend who is an expert in this work, but he also said that he have some demands.

The lion asked him what his demands are. So the fox said it is not just food or money, the lion should allow the fox to give him five kicks on his back. The lion was surprised but he think for a moment and he just want to remove the thorn. After taking the thorn he will eat up his little friend, so the fox kick him, then called his friend that was a porcupine, so he can't take revenge for the five kicks.


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