https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1 Made with joy en-us 2017-03-07 20:09:15 UTC 2023-04-09 03:23:50 UTC hello@padlet.com thelen1hj https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/158487050 2017-03-07 20:10:00 UTC https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/158487050 mitchell1rl https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159472732 I vibe well with the whole idea of playing in sports that lead to great leadership skills. I feel like using sports to depict skills of teamwork will always give you a one up on other applicants for the job if the hiring manager played sports at anytime in their life. However, there is not enough information in here to tell me about your skills or experience in a marketing field. but nonetheless, those are good traits to have. ]]> 2017-03-12 06:44:21 UTC https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159472732 https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159853105 I agree that it is pretty great that you played sports but I'm not sure that that is enough to give you the angle and be hired over someone else. I think that you need to tell more about your skills and other areas of experience/things you learned during your time at Alma. I do agree that sports give you some awesome leadership skills, etc. but you need to talk about other ways you are experienced in the world of marketing and communication and what you can bring to the job. ]]> 2017-03-14 00:24:35 UTC https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159853105 kendycakes15 https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159854369 I would not hire this applicant because of their lack of explanation for their certain skills and lack of experience in the field. I feel as though mentioning sports involvement, while that connection to leadership is correct, it does not pertain to the job at all.]]> 2017-03-14 00:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/159854369 The_Real_Bruce_Wayne https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/160150200 This cover letter had a couple good points to it, however to an employer showing that you played and participated in clubs in your cover letter shows your priorities. I believe to an employer you need to sell yourself with credibility and experience in the field of work that you are applying towards.]]> 2017-03-15 02:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/thelen1hj/gphaeyygj6s1/wish/160150200