https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7 Write description segments that elaborate on a critical story element. en-us 2019-11-14 19:05:33 UTC 2025-12-09 21:06:34 UTC hello@padlet.com michelle_martin11 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428260 The old pirate had long tangled black hair with golden chains braided in. He spoke with a thick British accent and wore think black eyeliner on the bottom of his eyes. ]]> 2019-11-14 19:07:02 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428260 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428624 The smelly pirate had a hook for his left hand and a eye patch for his right eye. He smelt as if he had jumped in a big bucket of fish. He had black boots with red stripes black pants that where way to small and a white shirt all put up with Yellow suspenders. A green bird sat on his shoulder and repeated every word he said. A gray beard draped down over his chin. A big black and white hat sat on his gray haired head.]]> 2019-11-14 19:07:29 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428624 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428709 Ugh, just looking at this pirate makes me sick to my stomach. He had beady black eyes that were as bad as sin. He had plenty of black makeup and a revolting grin. He had a sharp sword in his pouch, giving me a creepy chill. His hair needed to be brushed, and needed a bead remove. ]]> 2019-11-14 19:07:36 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411428709 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429106 This pirate had long black hair , an eyepatch , and a hook. He looked like he just jumped in a sea of sweat. He stank like he hadn't taking a shower in two years.]]> 2019-11-14 19:08:08 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429106 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429233 This pirate looked like he was in his mid 20's. Standing at 6'3, he had medium length mangled hair with jewelry put into a tiny braid. His voice sounded hoarse and he seemed to be wearing makeup. ]]> 2019-11-14 19:08:18 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429233 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429459 Looking around the sunken ship I saw a skeleton with a teared pirate hat and ripped clothes and a broken skull.]]> 2019-11-14 19:08:36 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411429459 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430077 The pirate scared me, it made me want to throw up from the stench. I couldn't stop looking at the wooden leg and eye patch. His teeth...he probably never brushed his teeth! I felt if I were to vomit my intestines out! He was disgusting! Yuck!]]> 2019-11-14 19:09:24 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430077 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430151 I was walking through the woods and saw a pirate behind me and he started talking to me and his voice was deep and clear. He had A big hat and a lot of jewerly and his hair was like girls hair.]]> 2019-11-14 19:09:29 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430151 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430785 The Pirate is funny he is looking for treasure he his brown eyes and also he look outside he fad some treasure as he look at the treasure he got so happy.]]> 2019-11-14 19:10:20 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411430785 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431037 The tall sized pirate had short hair and with a smile and sword.]]> 2019-11-14 19:10:41 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431037 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431319 The pirate had a deep voice that practically growled. It had ratty brown hair with a blue bandanna fastened around. He had a gleaming sword with a blade sharper than a great white sharks tooth. He had shoes that were as black as tar with mounds of mud on them, they had silver buckles on the front.]]> 2019-11-14 19:11:06 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431319 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431589 The Pirate had a black hat on top of his head with tangled long brown hair. He had a black patch on his right eye. In his hand he held a sharp sword. On his feet he had on black boots.]]> 2019-11-14 19:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411431589 https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411432530 The pirate was a good pirate he ]]> 2019-11-14 19:12:38 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_martin11/gnp2ac5p0je7/wish/411432530