Show Don't Tell by Stephanie Nickerson https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4 Rewrite the following sentence to 'show' not 'tell' the reader what is going on in the story: The students were tired. en-us 2019-02-08 14:22:31 UTC 2019-02-08 14:24:49 UTC hello@padlet.com the kids felt a big yawn slip out of there mouths. https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205540 Jamie ]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205540 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205675 the students walked like 95 year old people, they began to crawl to get to home, so they could jump in bed. - Ethan]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:22 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205675 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205740 When Ms. Nickerson was teaching math, everyone's eyelid was droopy then ,before you know it, everyone was snoring.
Nimo]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:29 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205740 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205780 The kids could hardly focus anymore. All they wanted to do was to go to bed right away.
-Nathan L.]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:33 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205780 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205828 I walk into the classroom and see everyone with their eyes drooping, heads lolled back. Some people were even with their eyes closed.

Arturo]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:38 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205828 The kids were siting then when their teacher finished reading you could hear the noise zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Justin https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205895 2019-02-08 14:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205895 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205917 The kids eyelids started to fall and not come back up much. This kept going until a sound came from the kids "z z z z z z z z z z z z..."
-Sophia C]]> 2019-02-08 14:25:49 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329205917 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206060 the students were tired after a whole day of school.

William C.]]> 2019-02-08 14:26:03 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206060 The kids hung their arms as they walked and they lay their heads on their desks almost about to fall asleep. Sarah https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206080 2019-02-08 14:26:05 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206080 RYAN https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206287 Mr. Sparks droned on and on... for 2 whole hours. when he was going to dismiss the students, he found everybody asleep.]]> 2019-02-08 14:26:24 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206287 The kids hung there heads as they walked to school slowly and exhausted at the same time https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206653 "Nathan W"]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:05 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206653 The students in Mr. John's class had drooping eyes when class was almost over. The student's heads almost touched their desks. https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206743 -Oscar]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:16 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206743 Vanessa https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206832 The kids eyes drooped and they they walked slower and slower until they fell on the floor and crawled up into a ball. As Ms. Nickerson taught the lesson the kids started to rest their heads on their desks. ]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:27 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206832 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206854 the students were very tired they almost fell asleep zzzzzzzzzzzzzzz!

William C.]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206854 kai https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206914 The kids were all yawning as they left the classroom]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206914 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206948 The students felt like they were about to collapse from exhaustion. They were stressed about the test they had earlier and hoped they got good marks.

NICK D]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:39 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206948 the kids felt there heads droop down on there desks https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206989 Jamie ]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:43 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329206989 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207052 the students swung there heads on there arms witch soon droped on there wood desks. sophia p]]> 2019-02-08 14:27:49 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207052 maddy https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207229 the students just wanted to fall down in a heap]]> 2019-02-08 14:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207229 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207388 The students were drooping there head. She was not able to pay attention to the teacher and he kept closing his eyes.

Emily]]> 2019-02-08 14:28:24 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207388 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207530 The students yawned and tried their best not to put their head on their desk.
--Alyssa]]> 2019-02-08 14:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207530 Jay https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207536 The kids ]]> 2019-02-08 14:28:40 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207536 Kai https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207733 the kids were walking slowly as they entered the classroom]]> 2019-02-08 14:29:01 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329207733 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208104 the kids moped as they walked home from school

William C.]]> 2019-02-08 14:29:45 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208104 Aishi https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208298 The students started to yawn there eyes started to drop they almost fell asleep]]> 2019-02-08 14:30:07 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208298 maddy https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208432 the students watched the video it was friday and they had a big math test]]> 2019-02-08 14:30:19 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329208432 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329210620 2019-02-08 14:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329210620 https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329211066 While their teacher was teaching science, the students minds were on another planet
Nicholas S]]> 2019-02-08 14:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/stephanie_nickerson1/gminso3n2gj4/wish/329211066