https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf We have been learning about reworking our writing to add interest for the writer. These are our favourite sentences and paragraphs! en-us 2017-08-16 23:34:45 UTC 2017-08-31 00:09:34 UTC hello@padlet.com anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348784 One thundery day there was a gruesome horey monster that scattered out from under my bed . He would say "I come in peace". ]]> 2017-08-16 23:40:28 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348784 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348989 2017-08-16 23:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348989 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348993 one night as dark as one million midnights there was a pink scaly & slimy monster that slithered away from my  under neath my  gloomy bed 


]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:00 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348993 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348996 One dark stormy night the leaves rustled, wind howled and lightning struck. There was a monster named "Beep Boop bomsteer" ]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348996 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348998 one night the goblin played a crack up prank on my parents it was the funniest thing on earth i nearly fainted!! ]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:02 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181348998 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349018 One dark and gloomy friday night there was a mystical monster that lives under my bed. He is called goosey and he eats all my holy socks and stuff like that]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:16 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349018 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349028 One spooky halloween night a monster spat poisionous venom all over my floor. It smells like fish. It reeks. I feed him cookies I snuck in my pocket bed. ]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:24 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349028 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349029 one spooky night there was a terrible ]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:25 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349029 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349053 every day my monster like playing tricks on my lovely family specially my mum]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:40 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349053 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349074 Although the Monster was a generous Monster he was also a trickster even one night he toilet papered our house and from then on i ve had to hide and feed my monster to keep him quiet overwise the secrets out.]]> 2017-08-16 23:43:56 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349074 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349107 The ceerfull monster loved playing tricks on me and my family. I feed my monster my school uniform and train set to keep him steady . But some time -s he glaces at my little sisters bed for some thing to eat like here tedy bear and dress hehe.]]> 2017-08-16 23:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349107 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349127 One dark and gloomy Friday night there was a mythical monster that speaks any language and lives under my bed. He is called Gooshy and he eats all my clothes and to be funny I said to my mum ''the monster under my bed ate all my clothes". Mum said "I don't believe you because you are wearing clothes". Oh not these ones! ]]> 2017-08-16 23:44:38 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349127 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349154 one dark and gloomy night the goblin escaped from under my pink and blue velvet bed.]]> 2017-08-16 23:44:54 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349154 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349189 one dark and stormy night the leaves rustled and the wind howled when lightning struck.there was a slimy sticky booger monster that squirmed so fast from under my dirty smelly ratsnest bed.]]> 2017-08-16 23:45:19 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349189 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349279 Whenever my small aren't in the rubbish he always devours them one by one, which takes like an hour. "Huh, mums these days!" I said quietly. "SHUSH!!!" shouted the monster shouted really fast, giggling a bit. ]]> 2017-08-16 23:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349279 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349342 One day the monster played a joke on my dad and then the dad laughed so hard he fell over and broke his back!]]> 2017-08-16 23:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349342 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349420 On one mysterious night on halloween a monster named burger he is evil and when he is angry he disappears and turns into a black spider.]]> 2017-08-16 23:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349420 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349449 The goblin loved to play funny tricks me and my big family. I feed him clothing to shut him up.but sometimes he escapes to find something to chew on.]]> 2017-08-16 23:48:20 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349449 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349460 One glorious night the gooey monster escaped from a cave. He skoft all the discussing junk. He was amazing at tricks too.]]> 2017-08-16 23:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349460 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349529 One spooky night there was a green slimey monster that escaped from the scientists lab. ]]> 2017-08-16 23:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349529 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349545 The next day the monster played a hilarious trick on my mum.Well my mum was reading her book in her room the monster made a drink for her but he put a magic pill in it.Mum came to have her drink and five minutes later it was finished.The next second mum sprinted outside and picked stop laughing up some of fluffys dog poo.She put it on a plate and ATE IT.Then the pill turnded off and she puked in the toilet when she heard what she did.Me dad and the monster couldnt stop laughing]]> 2017-08-16 23:49:24 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349545 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349547 One dark scary night there hid a red scaly monster.

]]> 2017-08-16 23:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349547 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349551 kaboom suddenly my monster vanished  I was kind of realived actaully  No more feeding my monster and trying to keep him quiet]]> 2017-08-16 23:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349551 anderson19 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349773 "Ahhhh" I peered out of the corner of my wall. Thats him! Ooooohhh the boom was a jam bottle smashing on the floor. ]]> 2017-08-16 23:51:29 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349773 https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349961 one mysterious night there was a monster that lived under my bed. ]]> 2017-08-16 23:53:28 UTC https://padlet.com/anderson19/gl95ylfbfjkf/wish/181349961