D Block: Anonymously post your claim and 4 answers by Bethany Kothapalli (HRS) https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9 en-us 2020-02-28 12:26:27 UTC 2026-01-02 01:23:02 UTC hello@padlet.com Even when times are tough, you can still find hope https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/451993077 Body P1: Times are tough for Parvana because her father is in prison, so now she has to do all the work no that she is a boy
Body P2: Times are tough for Liza because her father died when she was seven, so she couldn’t go outside with any safety
Body P3: Parvana finds hope when she begins making more money by digging up peoples bones.
Body P4: Liza finds hope when she thinks hopeful thoughts about the painting, and the ocean.


Excellent! This looks good!

]]> 2020-02-28 14:52:46 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/451993077 Even when times are tough, it helps to have hope. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452000926 Paragraph 1: Parvana went through a tough time when the Taliban took her father. 

Paragraph 2: Parvana showed she was hopeful when she wanted to light the lamp for her father. 

Paragraph 3: Liza went through a tough time when she had to watch her father die. 

Paragraph 4: Liza remained hopeful that Afghanistan will change into a better place. 

Awesome! This looks great.]]> 2020-02-28 15:02:33 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452000926 When times are tough, it helps to have hope. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001379
Answer #1: A specific time that was tough was when the Taliban soldiers took Parvanas father to prison. 

Answer #2: Parvana has hope about her father finding a way home

Answer #3: Liza has a tough time when she is not able to go to school and go see the ocean for the first time.

Answer #4: Liza is hopeful about being a painter and seeing the ocean in real life.

This looks great! Awesome job so far!]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:06 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001379 Never lose hope, even when times are hard. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001476 1. Parvana doesnt lose her hope and tries to help her family to make money.
2. Parvana doesn't give up even when she loses her father.
3. Liza doesn't lose her hopes about her life and wanting to see the ocean.
4. Liza's family is struggling with the Taliban since her fathers death.

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Body paragraph #2 Topic Sentence should be about times being hard for Parvana. Make sure you have text evidence in your essay that really supports your topic sentneces/answers.]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:14 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001476 During tough times it is helpful to be hopeful. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001702 BP1: Parvana and her family really struggle when her family is taken to prison by the Taliban.

BP2: Parvana is able to remain optimistic that her father may return home.

BP3: Liza goes through tough times when the schools are shut down.

BP4: Liza still keeps going and carries hope when she's painting that her dreams will come true.

Excellent! This looks good!]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:33 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001702 https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001737 In tough times there's almost always hope, just persevere until  you find it.
 Answer 1: When Parvanna's father is taken away, her and her mother go to the prison in hope of finding her father.
Answer 2: Parvanna preserves until she finds her farther by working in the Market and making money
Answer 3: When Liza's father is killed and she can't go to school her hope is lost. Then Liza starts painting
Answer 4: Liza persevered when she stayed hopeful that she in the future would see the ocean.


]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:36 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001737 When you are at rock bottom there is nowhere to go but up 🎈 https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001864 when Her family was at her worst, when her mothers at her worst and her father in jail they had no way of living without a man. They were running out of things

When Parvana thought they were at their worst her father walked up the stairs. Their family was almost repaired and back to a bit normal.

Her father died and they couldn’t go to school and she thought it would always be like that forever.

But she stays hopeful and remains happy after


Your last topic sentence is too vague: But she stays hopeful and remains happy after
You should have a specific example of how Liza stays hopeful as your topic sentence.]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:47 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001864 When times are tough, stay hopeful. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001871 paragraph one: Parvana has a tough time when her father gets arrested.

Paragraph 2: Parvana stays hopeful when she goes to the prison to get her father, and reconnect there family.

Paragraph 3: Liza has a tough time when her father dies.

Paragraph 4: Liza stays hopeful when she paints the ocean because one day she wants to be an artist.]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:48 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001871 Even during tough times, it’s important to stay hopeful. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001914 Body Paragraph #1: Parvana went through a tough time when her father went to jail.
Body Paragraph #2: Parvana is hopeful when she wanted to light the lamp.
Body Paragraph #3: Liza went through a tough time time when her father died.
Body Paragraph #4: Liza is hopeful when she is painting the ocean.



]]> 2020-02-28 15:03:52 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452001914 Even when times are tough, you can always find hope https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452002476 Answer 1#: parvana is hopeful because she hopeful that she will see her farther again 
Answer2#

So far, so good! You are missing your second answer.]]> 2020-02-28 15:04:38 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452002476 Even if there are rough times, you can plan for your future. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452002906 Shauzia had rough times when her family always argues.

Shauzia planned her adventure to get to France and have a good life in her future.

Liza has rough times when her father died and she can't go to school and sits at home bored. 

Liza plans and dreams of her bright future and being an amazing artist.


]]> 2020-02-28 15:05:13 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452002906 When times are tough, it helps to have hope. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003227 Parvana goes through a tough time when her father goes to jail.

Parvana remains hopeful when she leaves the light on for her father.

A time when it is toughest for Liza is when her father died.

She is hopeful when she is painting the ocean.

Revise: A time when it is toughest for Liza is when her father died to A time that was tough for Liza was when her father died. Besides this, it looks great!









]]> 2020-02-28 15:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003227 When times are tough, try to stay hopeful https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003661 Paragraph 1: Parvana went thorough a tough time when her dad went to jail and her family depended on Parvana to carry the family and get them food and money. 

Paragraph 2: 
Parvana is hopeful when she hopes her father will come back home.

Paragraph 3: Liza goes through a tough time when her father dies  

This looks great so far! Make sure you have a topic sentence for your 4th body paragraph. ]]> 2020-02-28 15:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003661 when both of their father is took away when there bothe not able to go to school https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003724
This post does not go along with the directions. Please seek out teacher support when you are working on this essay.]]> 2020-02-28 15:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003724 Even if there are rough times, you can still plan for a better future. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003825 A1: Shauzia living a very tough life when her family keeps arguing. 
A2: In the breadwinner Parvana’s mother and siblings go to Mazare sharif to get a better future. 

*Make sure you have text evidence to support this asnwer. 

A3: In Kids of Kabul Liza is having a tough time with her life, especially when her father dies.
A4: So Liza plans to make art to make people have a good feeling again. She is planning for her future. 

Overall, this looks great!


]]> 2020-02-28 15:06:27 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452003825 Even in tough times, there is always hope https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452004131 Paragraph 1: Parvana had blisters on her feet and could barely walk.

Paragraph 2: Even though Parvana is working hard everyday and probably extremely exhausted, her hope of creating a better future for herself is driving her to earn money.

Paragraph 3:Aman is working his absolute hardest in the tough times her is in.

Paragraph 4: Aman thinks of his future and hopes for a good one.]]> 2020-02-28 15:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452004131 Even when times are tough, always have hope. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452005203 Body paragraph 1: Parvana went through a tough time when her father was taken to prision.

Body paragraph 2: Parvana remained hopeful when she believed her father would come back from prison.

Body paragraph 3: Liza went through a tough time when her father died.

Body paragraph 4: Liza remained hopeful because she believes that she will be a famous artist and see the ocean one day.]]> 2020-02-28 15:08:02 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452005203 https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452005577 Even when there is tough times stay hopeful

1:  Parvana had tough times when her father got taken away.

2: Parvana stays hopeful when she tries to get her father.

3: Liza faces a hard time when she did nothing just sat inside

4: Liza shows hope when she paints the ocean.

Make sure you have text ]]> 2020-02-28 15:08:34 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452005577 when there both not able to go to school https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452006036 This post does not go along with the directions. Please seek out teacher support when you are working on this essay.]]> 2020-02-28 15:09:12 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452006036 When times are tough persevere https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452006123
BP1:Parvana goes through tough times when her father gets taken


BP2:Parvana persevered when she goes into the market as a girl and gets stopped by the soldier


BP3:Aman Went through a tough time after his family was killed

BP4:Aman persevered when he didn't like his job but still did it

This looks fantastic! Well done!]]> 2020-02-28 15:09:18 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452006123 in tough times, never give up https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452007490 1.Parvana goes through a tough time when her father is taken to prison.

2.Parvana doesn't give up hoping her father will come back.

3.Liza went through a tough time because Liza had no men to take people outside safely so her family had to stay inside

4. Liza didn't give up because she didn't give up and wanted to think of happier things, so she started painting.

Fantastic work! This looks great!]]> 2020-02-28 15:11:01 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452007490 remain hopeful, no matter what. https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452009481
Revise claim: When times are tough, it helps to remain hopeful. ]]> 2020-02-28 15:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/needham/gl1ujcu6l7m9/wish/452009481