1-3 말하기 수행평가 by

1. 초안 발표 및 자기평가

eeirnie — 2021-05-31 04:26:27 UTC

자신의 speech draft를 적고 핸드폰으로 speech 초안(연습) 영상을 찍어 하단의 카메라 모양을 눌러 업로드 합니다. 업로드 후, 자신의 영상을 보고 자기평가 checklist에 따라 평가하여 댓글로 작성합니다.
e.g.,
글 제목: 1901 홍길동 speech draft
내용: speech draft 작성 + 영상 업로드
댓글: 1. 5 2. 4 3. 4

2. peer feedback

eeirnie — 2021-05-31 04:26:27 UTC

친구들이 올린 speech 초안(연습) 영상을 보고 checklist의 항목에 따라 feedback을 작성합니다.
e.g.,
글 제목: 1901 홍길동
내용:
feedback for 1902
1. O
2. O
3. X
4. speech outline 내용 중 introduction 부분이 시선을 끌기에 부족하다
5. 마지막 문장을 힘주어 읽는다면 더욱 전달력이 높은 speech가 될 것 같다.

1315 손영흔

2021-06-02 00:24:26 UTC

Hello, everyone, I'm going to present a heavy topic today. Do you usually use disposables a lot? There are serious environmental problems caused by disposables these days. There are many ways to solve environmental problems, but the easiest way is to reduce disposables. Let's find out how to reduce disposables.

First, there is a way to reduce disposables using the platform. As the proportion of delivery food increases due to Corona, the problem of disposables is serious. In the delivery app 배달의민족, there is a compartment where you can choose not to receive disposable items when ordering delivery. Let's reduce the use of disposables by choosing not to receive disposables.

Secondly, it is a way to reduce disposables in cafes. Cafes use the most disposables. So when we get coffee at a cafe, let's bring a tumbler from home and put a drink in it. It will reduce a lot of plastic waste and paper waste. Don't hesitate to ask for a drink in a tumbler! Because cafes also think positively about putting drinks in tumblers!

In conclusion, there are ways to reduce disposables such as using platforms and using tumblers. Let's use this method to save the Earth by reducing disposables. We should practice together for environmental pollution. Because we are the owners of the earth!
Thank you for listening!

1304 곽서진

2021-06-02 00:24:34 UTC

Hi everyone! Today I'll talk about global warming. Every summer, you maybe felt more hotter than last summer. The reason was global warming. Global warming increases earth's temperature. To solve this environment issue, earth needs our help. Let's follow two solutions.
what kind of transportation do you usually use? It's a private car. The more car used, the more greenhouse gases. We should reduce usage of car. The solution is to use public transportation. Then, we can obtain effect that we plant young pine 159 trees which reduce greenhouse. Also, we can save our time by reducing traffic jams.
We should join and support environment group through on the Internet. Environment group is organization helping various environment problems. Supporting environment group, we make a step which saves our earth.
Now, what do you think about global warming? serious global warming threat our ecosystem. You should remember individual efforts make big changes. If you are interested in the environment, Our earth will be happy!

1301 강민경

2021-06-02 00:24:39 UTC

Hi everyone! Today I'll talk about covid-19 problem. I feel inconvenient to visually covid-19 coronic traffic line. So, I think solution plan is a safety guide messages and covid-19 related platform.
First solution is a safety guide messages. This method advantage and feature is that you can know the message alarm very quickly.
Second solution is use covid-19 related platform '코로나맵-코로나 알리미'. This method is have only to Google play store and Apple store from the down load. advantage and feature is covid-19 coronic came by traffic line simply know.
covid-19 coronic traffic line problem is easily hard to see. But get sloved a safety guide messages and covid-19 related platform. If you in the same situation the time for such use a platform I'd good. Thank you for listening

1318 위유솔

2021-06-02 00:24:52 UTC

The good platform.

Hello everyone. Today I'm going to talk about a platform that solves problems. Thank you for listening. Have you ever experienced any problems? The problem is difficult when solve math problem. So i found two solutions. The first solution is think as much as possible. The second solution is use the platform.First solution is think as much as possible (although it takes a long time.) Second solution is use the mobile app called the ‘QANDA(콴다)’. This app is take a picture of unknown math problems, then come out the problem’s explanation. So understand well and saves time. Because of these advantages, I often use this app. Although it is good to solve the problem alone but it is good to use platform. And i hope you trying to solve a problem using a good platform. Useful platform is help our problems in life. Then a little more can easily our life. In addition to this platform , there are many platforms that help our lives. I hope you try this app. Thank you for listening to my speech.

1302 강민주

2021-06-02 00:24:55 UTC

Hello, everyone! Have you ever experienced any inconvenience when a necessary product is not delivered quickly? Or have you ever forgotten to buy what you must buy? Today, I'm going to introduce you the ways to pre-order and receive the items you need. Whenever I forgot to buy urgent thing, I search most rapidly delivery service. I got a great deal of satisfaction to Qoupang (쿠팡) and I used it often. Of course, ordering 4 or 5 days ahead is the best way to prepare things!
I think Coupang rocket delivery is beneficial when we forget to buy what we have to buy or when urgent goods don't deliver quickly. Mostly when we use that service, we can receive goods in one day! So, many people get a hand with Qoupang's service.
Also, the way not to forget to order things is to write down what you need on your note pad when you think you should buy something. And if you order without forgetting what you wrote, you will be able to receive the goods when you need them.
I don't want you to be nervous about necessary stuff. If you use platform Qoupang, which arrives what you order in almost a day, you won't have any more trouble! And if you develop a habit of writing down what you need to buy on time, you won't forget to order things!
I hope you to do these two things I suggested. Thank you for listening to my presentation. I hope it was informative.

1311 나민지

2021-06-02 00:24:57 UTC

Hello everyone! I'm Minji Na.
Today I'm going to talk about exercise at home.
Don't you feel like you lose your stamina these days? Or didn't you move your body less often these days?
Recently, I realized that my physical strength has decreased a lot, and I found a way to exercise at home considering the current situation when I can't go outside because of Covid.
The first way I found out is to do 'Home training' at home. 'Home training' is simple exercise at home and nearly does not require exercise equipment.
However, since it is not learned directly from professionals, it will be difficult to imitate precise posture and others just by watching the video.
So the second way I found out is using exercising platform. The name of the platform I will introduce is "Women's Weight Loss App".
This platform does not require any exercise equipment. And you can easily follow each posture by replaying the reference video and measuring the time. In addition, exercising time is short but exercise intensity is little hard, so stamina will increase.
In conclusion, "Women's Weight Loss App" is helpful to lose weight and to improve stamina. So these days, when you can't go outside, exercise at home using exercising platform. In this way, your stamina will be improved much better. I'm already exercising using it, and I hope you to find a way to manage yourself like this.
Thank you for listening!

1320 이화선

2021-06-02 00:24:58 UTC

Hello, my name is Hwasun Lee. Today, I will talk about the smartphone problem. The smartphone problem I think is that if you use a smartphone a lot, you will lose concentration and grades. And I use my smartphone while walking around. We have prepared two ways to solve these problems. If you don't bring your smartphone into the room so that your first grade won't fall, and if you don't take your smartphone with you, your grades won't go down due to your concentration while studying. Also, there is a way to turn off the smartphone. The second solution is to reduce the usage time by using the app. The app is called How Much Do You Spend. This app isn't for parents, it's for personal use, and if you want to do it individually, you can do it.
If you walk around and use your smartphone, you may experience various accidents or other problems. To prevent this, walking around and not holding a smartphone in your hand or carrying it in your pocket or bag can prevent accidents a little bit. If you reduce the time of using smartphone, you can improve your grades and prevent various accidents.

1314 박찬영

2021-06-02 00:25:20 UTC

hi everyone. I talk about a problem that I usually feel uncomfortable. I have a problem I find uncomfortable these days. problem is what I don't concentrate when I'm studying. Solution of problem is open the door or window and use mobile app '열품타'.
First solution, open the door or window. Because I care about parent's watching when open the door and I overcome sleep by cold wind when open the window.
Second solution, use mobile app '열품타'. I can look at my measure time and other's study time. If I look for other's study time, I study hard Because of competitive spirit. and I can't use app that I don't set up when I use 열품타
Finally, I'm talking two solution I find uncomfortable. I think that Best solution is use app '열품타'. What do you think the solution of my study problem solutions

1312 나한비

2021-06-02 00:25:24 UTC

Hello everyone! Today I'll talk about how to solve problem that you don't know. If you don't go to the academy, what should you do when you have a problem that you don't know while studying alone? Usually you try to find by looking at the answer sheet but if you can't understand by yourself then you'll have a hard time. To solve this problem, there are ways to ask your friend and use the mobile app 'Qanda'.
First way is to ask your friend for help. Your friend can help you and explain what you don't understand. Also, if you solve with your friend then you get improved grades. It is convenient and good way to get help friends around you.
Another way is to use the mobile app 'Qanda' in urgent situation to find out a problem that you don't know. It's a good idea that experts in the filed can help you in real time. You can also set the study timer with your peers. The advantages of 'Qanda' are that you can ask quickly and get a commentary just by taking pictures.
If you have a problem that you don't know while studying alone, sometimes it's a good idea to ask for help from people around you . If you solve the problem with your friend, you will get good results. Also you can find out in detail quickly using the platform 'Qanda'.
Don't have a hard time alone, find a way to ask for help!
Thank you for listening!

1321 형효린

2021-06-02 00:25:41 UTC

Hello everyone! Today, I'm going to talk about smartphones that are a problem when I study. What can we do to solve this problem? Let's find a solution to the problem together.
When we study, smartphones get in the way. Because there are too many alarms and i am curious about the contents of the alarm. For solve this problems, we can try two ways ; don't put your phone in the visible place and use the online platform.
First, we can study with cell phones outside the room or in a harsh invisible place. In this way, you can increase your concentrate because your phone is invisible.
Second, we can use the online platform, 열품타. This app has a timer to measure the amount of time studied for each subject. And there is the function to stop the timer when the screen is turned on. This being so we can feel great and sense of accomplishment. Also, this app has a study time ranking. This makes it possible to study harder by competing with students of their own age across the country.
If you study hard and raise your grades through this methods, you and your parents will be very happy. And it increases your chances of achieving your dream. Of course the process is difficult but it will be good after you do it. People who have a problem with cell phone when studying should try this ways. We will be able to do it well.

1313 박예원

2021-06-02 00:26:21 UTC

Hello everyone. I will talk about study tips

Recently, Corona Virus is worsening. Because of Corona Virus, Online class has problems in that concentration is decreased and teachers cannot make sure that students understand correctly the class. These problems make that academic achievement of student is getting worse. In order to solve this problem, I will show you how to study at home

First, Make a list that written down your goals that you need to achieve that day. and when you achieve the goal, you put a checkmark next to the goals. This way can organize your goal. it also prevents you from forgetting the goal.

Second, you have to make a Zoom Study Group. and you should study at the scheduled time. It uses 'Zoom'. Zoom cannot only see each other but also have a function 'Sharing', so it is easy to explain the question. Zoom study group will become motivation that make you study

If you keep practicing, you will be able to realize your academic improvement. you have to try. Effort is the best way to achieve your goal.

1306 김민주

2021-06-02 00:26:22 UTC

Hi everyone,I am MinJu Kim
Today,I will talk about how to solve math problem.

Usually,we can't solve math problems which we got wrong. Instead of solving ourselves,we have help from teachers or look up an answer paper. So we have trouble in solving Problems we got wrong again.To solve this problem,we must think about it for a long time and use 콴다.
First, 콴다 helps us to Solve math problems by Showing explanation about it. And 콴다 recomends Similar problems such as problems which we got wrong. Because of this function,we can develop our abilities by solving various math problems.
Second,we must think about math problems for a long time.Because you can get various approaches by thinking for a long time and develop problem-solve ability. Furthermore,If you solve it yourself,you may solve it easily next time by using your own way.
To sum up, we must think about math problems for a long time and use 콴다. Instead of Seeing an answer paper,use these two ways. Using these two ways repeatably improves your problem -solve ability.

1310 김현서

2021-06-02 00:26:27 UTC

Title: The way of improving basic fitness

Hello,everyone! It's a refreshing morning! I'm going to talk about the way of improving basic fitness.
Are you exercising regularly these days? Because of COVID 19, I spend little time exercising and my physical strength declines. Recently, I felt need to exercise and so I thought about what I could do to improve my basic fitness. I've been thinking about what I can do to improve my basic fitness, that's taking a walk and doing home training.
First, Taking a walk is one of the method to improve basic fitness. I can go to 5.18 park for 30 minutes every day and take a light walk. I can refresh myself while taking a walk and exercise easily without any special equipment.
Second, It is also a good way to do home training using an online platform called 'Youtube'. I can search for the exercise I want to do in the Youtube search box and do the exercise for each part I want. I can get recommendations for customized videos that suit me through Youtube and work out at a set time in the video. It is also possible to learn exactly how to exercise posture by communication with physical Youtube creators in comments.
As such, solutions for solving the loss of basic physical strength due to lack of exercise are taking a walk lightly and doing home training on Youtube. I think it's good to think about how to exercise like this, but I think it's more important to exercise steadily according to the plan. So I'm going to exercise regularly in these ways that I proposed. I suggest that you find your own way to exercise and develop a habit of exercising in your daily life for a healthy life.
Everyone, try exercising steadily to improve your basic physical strength! Thank you for listening.

1316 신아현

2021-06-02 00:26:37 UTC

Good morning everyone, thank you for listening this speech. Have you ever lost something? Most people here will all have experience at least once. Today, what I'm going to talk about is the habit of losing. The problem with my life is that I lose my own things. How often do you lose things? I always lose things once a month. Then I'll discuss that why don't you know exactly the place or take the 🤬 to keep them from being lost. I'll introduce two methods for you.
Now let me begin the speech by showing you some numbers.The first one is that appoint the places of each things. It is that you appoint the place of things that is used often and set them the place. Then you'll lose them more less, and you'll improve ability to remember.
And the second one is store the location of an object and short writing using the mobile app,🤬. '🤬' is an app that has advantanges of keeping photos and texts or taking them out any time. If you use this app, you'll quickly find things that you lost, because the app is storing the photos and texts which keep the place of things.
Conclusionally, if you appoint the places of things and record the place, you will never lose them. I recommend these methods to the people who lose things well or take many time to find things. By practicing these methods that I recommend to you, I wish that everyone never lose their own things anymore. Thank you for listening this speech.

1317 오시현

2021-06-02 00:27:54 UTC

Hello everyone? Do you know a Famous saying "time is priceless"? So today, I want to share about How to solve the "time wasting" problem with you. Many people experience "time wasting" problems in their daily lives. Including me too. Then how can we solve this huge problem? I would like to introduce you to two solutions. First, reduce wasted and unnecessary time. Second, make a good time-sharing habit using "Routinary" application.
A common way to solve the problem of wasting time is reduce wasted and unnecessary habit. You can try many ways to reduce unnecessaty and wasted time. You might think that using a timetable is the best way to reduce that time, or you'd better do somthing small and effective in your spare time. I want you to know that this has a lot of good points. But you can find another quick and effective way.
Secondly, you can use the online platform "Routinary" to make time-sharing habits. "Routinay" is a mobile application that helps you make a habit. You can set your goals that you want to achieve, for example "get up at 9 a.m " or "training at 6 p.m". Then this app will sound an alarm at that time so that you can think and act on the habit. Moreover, "Routinay" is meet the demands of the time because it's an internet platform.
There's a lot of solutins and it has their own advantage and characterastic. Plan methods like "reducing wasted and unnecessary time in may way" to solve a problem have the advantage that people can quickly find "wasted time". On the other hand, online platforms allow you to allocate your time. What would you like to do to solve "wasted time"? How about finding new ways to solve problem?

1308 김수현

2021-06-02 00:28:54 UTC

Hello, everyone!
Today I'm going to talk about forgetting important things.
Have you ever been in trouble for forgetting something important?
Sometimes I forget what I have to do and miss it.
For example, forgetting an errand my parents ordered, or leaving a book to take home from school.
Forgetting such an important thing leads to bad things.
To prevent that from happening, let's look at two ways to solve this problem:
The first is to write what I have to do on notepad and put it in plain sight.
If I use this method, I'll be able to do what I've written on notepad, even if I've forgotten what to do.
In addition, it has the advantage of being used to tell others what to do.
The second is to use a platform that notifies me at a certain time when I enter what I have to do.
I don't know if such a platform actually exists, but if I use it, it will be convenient because it will notify me until I finish what I have to do, so I won't have to forget what I have to do, and I won't have to carry notes and writing instruments.
If you have the same problem as me, I would recommend you to try these methods.

1309 김은비

2021-06-02 09:33:19 UTC

Hello everyone! I'm here to talk about how to read books often. Many people in modern society rarely love to read books. Maybe it's because they are not interested in reading books, books are expensive, or they don't have time to read books. But reading is important to improve your thinking skills, and it help you see the world from a broader perspective. So I advise these solutions; youtube, used transactions, and e-book.
To be interested in books, you can look up some videos on youtube which introduce books. You can get some interesting informations about books. I'm sure you will love the story of books.
If you think that books are expensive, how about using 당근마켓? There are so many cheap used books. In addition, you can also use e-book which is cheaper than a paper book.
And if you don't have enough time to read books, I recommend you e-book and audio book. You can read or hear the story of book when you move, get ready to sleep, and even you wash. E-books use electronic ink which has less back light, so don't worry about eye strain.
As you've heard, you can read books often in easy way; youtube, used transactions, e-book and audio book. I hope that you will fall in love with books. Thank you for your attention.

1305 국채은

2021-06-04 11:25:12 UTC

Hello everyone. Today I’m going to talk about a head problem that we all might have had at least once.I feel uncomfortable because l don’t know this hair style fit to me before l cut my hair. So l found three methods. It is to ask hairdresser, use photoshop,and use app” hair fit “ Let me tell you about this once.First, To ask hairdresser how about this style. It is not bad because they are professtional. They experience many cause. So we feel trusty. And use photoshop. It is not recommend method. Photoshop takes a long time because it has to be adjusted according to the shape of the face. But there are also advantages. It takes a long time, so it looks most natural.Second,To use app”hairfit” l have tried this before. Because l have trouble about hairstyle. So l recommend this app. Because lt is easy to check hair style. If you want opposite hair style. You can know this hairstyle fit you and it does not need long time.Again, To ask hairdresser is reliable, and to use photoshop need longtime. To use app “haitfit” need not longtime. So the most recommended way is use “hairfit” and to ask hairdresser. I hope my advice help you.

2021-06-04 11:35:51 UTC

1314 박찬영-녹음파일

1303강지윤

2021-06-04 15:59:17 UTC

Problems caused by online study

Hi, everyone.The topic I'm going to present today is the problem caused by the remote class. Wasn't it hard for everyone to carry all the textbooks because of the remote class? The problem I felt these days was that because of Corona, I had to have textbooks when I was studying online, but I had to carry all of them every week. I study online every other week. So I have to pack all my text books every Monday and Friday. So it's too heavy and hard. So I found one way to take as few textbooks as possible and one way to use the platform.
First, the way to take less textbooks is very simple. Dose not take textbooks from subjects that are rare to use, such as music, art, and physical education. The weight of the bag is reduced. Making it easy to carry around a bag.
However, this method can only reduce the weight of three books. So I found a better way than this. It was the way to use the platform. The way to use the platform is to use an application called '디지털 교과서". You don't have to put textbooks in the bag because you have them all on your phone. It is also very useful because it is possible to take notes in '디지털 교과서'.
I would most recommend one of these two methods. It would be good to take fewer textbooks. But I recommend using '디지털 교과서'. Which is a way to avoid taking textbooks at all.Thank you for listening to my presentation.

1307 김선주

2021-06-23 00:02:07 UTC

hello everyone
Nowadays, it is important to make a healthy body. because of lazy body by covid 19. reduce the time to exerxise.
Think about what we can do in our daily lives. How should we try?
first solution, walk street at break of day. If you take off your mask and walking deserted street, The cold air makes you feel better.
second solution, use home trading system at home. For example watching Youtube home trading Channel Repeat or use home trading app.
Many to waste time for if you little exercise make harden body. The little exercise changes everyday life.
be formed hour, this trivial things change indolence habit.