https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback Post your full name and period in the "title" en-us 2020-07-17 15:53:40 UTC 2020-07-17 17:31:56 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657010703 Charles keeper well spoken and lots of emphasis on what the problem he was talking about was. 
Polishier be less repetitive if uyou repeat a phrae multiple time try rewording it. 
Andres keeper  very clear about what the issue was and why it should change 
Polisher add more emotion in your voice to show the importance of the issue and to keep people engaged 
Kimberly keeper the expamples of arguments against wear a mask was a good choice 
polisher add some number of how the virus rose after going back off quaritine 
Daniel keeper good use of pathos and trying to get people to understande what people go through 
polisher try to avoid using phrases like i guess in your speech 
China keeper good opener it was blunt making the listeners pay attention right away 
polisher try to avoid reading your speech if you are more memorized its more convincing 
Jacquelyn keeper showed passion for the topic in your voice 
polisher try and connect expirences so people can really understand the discrimination 
Jabari keeper good at explaining the situation at hand 
polisher try to be more momorized to make it more convincing

]]> 2020-07-17 16:25:56 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657010703 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657010877 Charles- Keeper (explained the currency issue well) - Polisher (Needs to look at camera more)
Kimberly- Keeper(She gives a good quote which is "50% is better than none") - Polisher (A little bit of background noise but it is okay)
Daniel- Keeper( Gives good statistic on children deaths which puts it into perspective)- Polisher( Does not summarize enough)
China- Keeper( Speaks very clearly and speaks well.)- Polisher (She paused for a bit but it is to be expected)
Jacquelyn- Keeper( She gives good examples of the oppression such as Trump banning transgender people from joining the military)- Polisher (She should have mentioned the hate throughout social media in some cases)
Jabari- Keeper (Gives good options for the money to go to such as housing and education)- Polisher (He should have mentioned the lives taken during the peaceful BLM marches)
Anna- Keeper (Gives good example of the discrimination with the nightclub incident)- Polisher (Speaks a little fast at times)]]> 2020-07-17 16:26:14 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657010877 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657011243 Charlie - Keeper - How he said it with passion.
Polish - Try not to say uh less.
Andres - Keeper- How he was using fact to help his topic.
Polish - Try talking a bit louder.
Kimberly - Keeper - How she said thank you at the end of he speech.
Polish - Try to talk a bit louder.
Daniel - Keeper - How his voice was calming
Polish - Try to speak louder.
China - Keeper - How she didn't have to stop talking.
Polish - nothing
Jacquelyn - Keeper - How she talked about something she can relate too.
Polish - nothing
Jabari - Keeper - How he kept talking and not stopping.
Polish - Try to not repeat facts.
Anna - How much she reseached and how much effort she put into her speech.
Polish - nothing]]> 2020-07-17 16:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657011243 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657012402 Charles - Keeper: Good presentation
Polisher: Maybe practice your next speech
Andres - Keeper: Good speech
Polisher: Needs to sound more alive
Kimberly - Keeper: Great speech
Polisher: Talk louder
Daniel - Keeper: Lots of emotion
Polisher: 
China - Keeper: Overall great presentation
Polisher: None
Jacquelyn - Keeper: Nice use of statistics
Polisher: None
Anna - Keeper: Lots of emotion, passion and facts
Polisher: None

]]> 2020-07-17 16:28:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657012402 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657013004 Charlie 
Keeper: good facts and information.
Improvement: Could have been a little more clear.
Andres
keeper: good points in argument
Improvement: Could have been louder.
Kimberly
Keeper: good facts in argument
improvement: could have spoken clearer 
Daniel
Keeper: talked clear
Improvement: facts could have been a little bit better
China
Good points in argument 
Could have been more clear
Jabari
Keeper: clearly spoken 
Improvements: could have been better points 
Anna 
Keeper: Very good points and facts 
Improvement: could have spoken a little clearer ]]> 2020-07-17 16:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657013004 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657013010
Charles; often repeating his facts and sentences./his passion for what hes fight for is great

Andres ; project his voice more/great points and facts.

Kim; Put more of a free and natural voice in her tone too stiff/great facts 

Danny; has a lot of space between his word/Good on his empathy tone 

Jacquelyn; Very good empathy tone and good points about the government involved in this problem/memorize more 

Jabari; Put more of natural tone to his voice/ He put a good concern tone to his voice 

Anna; Slow down her speech sometimes/All good points of inequality injustice.]]> 2020-07-17 16:29:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657013010 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657019513 Charle's speech was about immigration and how it's really hrad from immigrants to become US citizens. He talks about how the test should be easyer he also talks about how they should need to speak engilsh, and the path way to citizens should be cheaper.

Andres's speech was about the coronavirus and how people should still wear face mask and how you don't  you don't breath carbon dioxide say's any expert.

Kimberly's speech was about coronavirus and how people should wear face and that the fastest way to reopen the economy and the fastest way to go back to work.

China's speech was about Racist system in America and how anyone can reacist and how there's still Racist people in charge, she talks about how the police is supposed to protect everyone not kill or harass others just because the color of their skin.

Jacque


]]> 2020-07-17 16:40:11 UTC https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657019513 https://padlet.com/mrtsuyuki/engl10aspeechfeedback/wish/657041949 Andres Rivera-speaker

He brought up great points based on his subject

He could have talked a little louder.

Jacquelyn Serrato-speaker

she brought up great points about her topic. 

she could have less pauses

Anna Raquel-speaker

The points that she made were thing that I didn't know and that keeped me enticed to keep listening.

I didn't have any problems with it.



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