that i could have more details in my paragraphs 

but i mainly had everything i need in my essay. I think

I really need help with my thesis and topic sentences

because it be really hard to come up with it. Over all i

my essay was pretty good, I had support, format, 

organization

and more.I think I'm getting better but its still things i 

need t

work to be great.I think this project was very interesting 

because i showed me that race shouldn't be about 

anything or anything you do. The book was racist but i 

understand the book was written to everyone to inform 

that if one person believes in doing the right thing just 

because majority of the society doesn't. Over all the 

whole assignment was fun to do but i also learned about 

racism, rights, freedom, education, and whats right.