https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s Please write a nice comment about your peers speech! en-us 2021-05-17 14:59:21 UTC 2021-05-18 15:36:04 UTC hello@padlet.com rbisel2 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531835229 I loved the way you used transition words to transition from one idea to another. After reading and listening to your speech I now know I need to be better at picking up my trash. ]]> 2021-05-17 15:42:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531835229 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531931145 I liked how you were jumping strait into the writing. you were also nice to the reader, along with being stern and strong with good words. I am convinced! ]]> 2021-05-17 16:01:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531931145 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531937484 I loved the way said everything the right way and organized it in perfect clean paragraphs. I agree with you that we should have a gym. Teddie.]]> 2021-05-17 16:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531937484 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531939571 i like how you pushed the rederto clen up gaerbege teddie /baird

]]> 2021-05-17 16:03:24 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531939571 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531952021 i loved the way you were telling the reader every thing you were writing about.

from: hallie ]]> 2021-05-17 16:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531952021 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531954166 I liked how in the beginning you said the all topics that you were going to read about.
Julia]]> 2021-05-17 16:06:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531954166 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531970423 I  Loved  the way you used transition word to transition from one idea to anothe]]> 2021-05-17 16:09:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531970423 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531974958 i like how your saying people to not litter ]]> 2021-05-17 16:10:36 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531974958 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531978415 I like how strait forward your speech is and how clear you are telling your audience about your oppinon 
Irena]]> 2021-05-17 16:11:16 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531978415 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531980250 I love how you hooked me in by making me want to learn more because you made me wait for the graetnes that is speech. I am completely convinced that students should have a longer rereces.from zach]]> 2021-05-17 16:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531980250 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531988302 I liked how you told me one of your experiences on the playground. I agree with you that we should have a longer recess. Teddie.]]> 2021-05-17 16:13:06 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531988302 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531988888 I liked how you used strong words and sentences, and hooked me to keep reading. The transition words are also amazing. You have convinced me!]]> 2021-05-17 16:13:13 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531988888 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531995234 i like how you made fackes to convins  the reder /baird


]]> 2021-05-17 16:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1531995234 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532003721 I liked how you convinced me into adopting a dog. Good work! from Romy.]]> 2021-05-17 16:16:11 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532003721 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532005966 I liked how you made a personnel experience to hook me in! I'm convinced! :Declan]]> 2021-05-17 16:16:38 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532005966 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532014316 i loved how you were writing the story like your reading it to
 mrs. walker.]]> 2021-05-17 16:18:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532014316 vkallman26 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532024232 i love how you did  ]]> 2021-05-17 16:20:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532024232 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532026109 i like that you did examples and a story and im convinced!!!]]> 2021-05-17 16:20:41 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532026109 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532027155 I liked that you used strong examples and words. It made me care and want to give my pets more attention!]]> 2021-05-17 16:20:55 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532027155 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532033091 I love how you used pain to convince people I think that is a very good strategy and I am very convinced good day.zach]]> 2021-05-17 16:22:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532033091 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532036088 i like how you said all the harm garbeg could do /baird]]> 2021-05-17 16:22:40 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532036088 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532041383 you paused to convince people

luke ]]> 2021-05-17 16:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532041383 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532048033 I liked how you added parks, beach's, etc. I am convinced to stop littering (even though I have never littered in my life.) Teddie.]]> 2021-05-17 16:25:05 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532048033 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532050603 I loved that your convincing
 mrs. walker  to put in a gym

from:hallie]]> 2021-05-17 16:25:37 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532050603 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532054437 I like how you used strong words and convinced me. From Romy]]> 2021-05-17 16:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532054437 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532059050 I like how you used transition words in every sentece
Irena]]> 2021-05-17 16:27:22 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532059050 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532065402 I loved how you used examples and lists to give more detail. The transition words are really crisp and I love how you told the major problems and plastics. I am convinced, keep up the good work!]]> 2021-05-17 16:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532065402 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532070610 i like that you have strong resense to tell your reader how you feel]]> 2021-05-17 16:29:46 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532070610 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532073255 I love how the it like you men it]]> 2021-05-17 16:30:20 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532073255 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532075421 i lie how you looked a the camra the holen time

luke]]> 2021-05-17 16:30:48 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532075421 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532076838 I loved how you contacted to Mrs. Walker directly. Teddie.]]> 2021-05-17 16:31:02 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1532076838 https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1536136849 Joaquin]]> 2021-05-18 15:31:12 UTC https://padlet.com/rbisel2/ghun959342y30e0s/wish/1536136849