Week 4 - I1 by ISC all users https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w en-us 2023-02-05 09:36:34 UTC 2023-02-06 14:06:53 UTC hello@padlet.com Mobile Phone - Planning sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w/wish/2469939923 2023-02-06 11:54:34 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w/wish/2469939923 Reading into Writing sussex_isc1 https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w/wish/2469940225 2023-02-06 11:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w/wish/2469940225 Yakubu, Amal https://padlet.com/sussex_isc1/ggmmfwlxe86ebt5w/wish/2470057787 1. Argument because it says in the introduction that this essay will argue about how technology affects learning.

2. Yes 

3. Yes 

4. Yes

5. Yes 

6. Contradiction to the thesis/counter argument. Opposes to the thesis/links back to the thesis

7. The second sentence 

8. One point from each 


9. Yes, source has been reviewed and the structure has been changed 

10. 
How do you know it is the writer's own voice? The writer has responded well from the sources because he only uses a few points from his source and mainly talks about his own views and provides examples. 


11.  Yes 


12. Yes


13. Yes


14. No

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