Final Papers by LeeAnne Godfrey https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks Post a link to your final paper for peer review. en-us 2016-09-08 18:27:13 UTC 2025-11-16 21:09:51 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png LeeAnne berg1207 https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/307053547 Here is a link to the paper assignment (you would post a google doc link to your final paper).  Also include 1-3 things/questions you'd like a peer reviewer to focus on while reading your paper. ]]> 2018-11-22 15:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/307053547 Peer review paper - Frederick https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/307511906 https://drive.google.com/drive/my-drive

Please open link to review my paper. As you read, it would be a good idea to focus on the following: 1) Is the paper clear? 2) Is the difference between implicit and explicit grammar teaching clear? 3) Is the paper organised/structured well? 4) Is the information contained in the summary useful? 5) Do the arguments used make sense? 6) General comments]]> 2018-11-25 14:45:54 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/307511906 Rebecca - Peer Review https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/308842565 Vocabulary instruction in the ESL classroom - linked below. 

1. Analyze  academic tone, flow, and clarity. 
2. Is the paper useful to the ESL teacher? What would you like more/clearer information on?
3. Are my APA citations/reference page in the correct style?
4. This is my first time writing a literature review. Did I do it right? ]]> 2018-11-28 15:36:18 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/308842565 Mary-paper for review https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/308862869 What are methods used to help build strong phonemic awareness and phonics skills, which are important in developing English Learners proficient in reading?
1. Does the paper feel cohesive and make sense?
2. Does the paper clearly answer the research question?
3. I think I may have gone too far off topic in my last paragraph. Can you check it out?
Lit Review

]]> 2018-11-28 16:03:06 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/308862869 Jenna-Peer Review jkotula01 https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309030182 Linguistically Responsive Teaching

1.) I realize that I am well over the word limit. As this is a draft, I am not worried with having more to work with, however, I need help cutting things out and making it more concise! 
2.) How is my APA format? When I refer to another idea from the same author within the same paragraph, is it correct to put (year, p. 123) after the second paraphrased idea for example? I was uncertain about this. 
3.) The authors sometimes cited other authors. For example, one of my authors cites Krashen with the year of his publication about the language input hypothesis. Would this mean that I have to search for Krashen's article about language input and put that into my references?
4.) This is my first time doing a literature review as well. As Rebecca asked, "did I do it right?" 
5.) General comments about what I need to improve to make my paper follow the guidelines of what a real literature review should look like. ]]> 2018-11-28 20:16:15 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309030182 Nicole-Peer Review https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309111407 Incidental Vocabulary Learning through Extensive Reading 

1. Are my APA in-text citations formatted correctly? 
2. How is the organization? 
3. I also have never written a literature review (seconding Rebecca), so is this a literature review? ]]> 2018-11-29 01:44:49 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309111407 Nick Hermoza Peer review https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309136535 Utilizing full language Rep

How does intro and objective look?

How is APA format?


]]> 2018-11-29 04:42:16 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309136535 Frederick https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309448374 I hope this link helps you more than the other one.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1dIK6gm_5uXsC6jGI2K9ny3TLeKol7HP9qr1msNHd6gc/edit]]> 2018-11-29 17:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309448374 Hightower Rough Draft https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309644830 1. Is my question clear and concise?
2. Is my in-text citations formatted correctly?
3. What needs more emphasis to get my final point across?

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1X8fj-GTuRhyInHI4u74Zw_4LXadBtt1UV9e4HuxbM4I/edit?usp=sharing]]> 2018-11-30 05:17:30 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/309644830 Lauren Bartelt Peer Review https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/310194754 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1hS_syimAxB8ajQwQpf6ErQ7ilbqLKbqNO-SMv-mL-IA/edit?usp=sharing

1) Feedback on citations. 
2)  Organization of the paper.    
3) I've reached the word limit already but I feel I've bared scratched the surface in discussing my findings and how they relate to one another. How can I be more concise?  What can be cut out that is not relevant to the discussion of my research question? 

]]> 2018-12-02 17:58:50 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/310194754 https://docs.google.com/document/d/15BfY3485dyt1r1qqEKEwtVcc0EVkpV09H5AdAojm0Oo/edit https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/310250777
1) Are my citations accurate?
2) How can I write a better introduction paragraph?
3) How can I better organize the paper?

]]> 2018-12-03 01:10:45 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/310250777 Lit Review: Caroline Cherry https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/311635768 https://docs.google.com/document/d/11_D-G2J_m13rhVwp6ogVG_VLb3mj8yOP7S6HxbDqIRU/edit

1. Are my citations accurate?
2. Is my paper clear and well-organized?
3. Does it make the case it sets out to make?]]> 2018-12-05 23:53:20 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/311635768 Frederick - latest version https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/312337493 https://docs.google.com/document/d/1S9LETXVlX33UVp1wnrLoGOjf5KHN7Vd8-4_WwanWUfE/edit

Are my citations according to APA?

Should authors that were cited in my sources, and that I used in my paper, be listed in the reference page?]]> 2018-12-07 17:42:32 UTC https://padlet.com/berg1207/Bookmarks/wish/312337493