Term 2 Invent: Talking to animals by Laura Hewlett https://padlet.com/EnglishGIS/T2Moderation en-us 2025-03-05 02:50:36 UTC 2025-05-22 00:52:31 UTC hello@padlet.com Talking to animals hewlett_l https://padlet.com/EnglishGIS/T2Moderation/wish/3351746526 Students imagine and create a conversation between an animal and a character. Work should be moderated against the relevant KPIs already taught this academic year.

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Some evidence of sentence control with punctuation for dialogue and fronted adverbials. Not all sentences flow, and the plot is rushed.


The narrator addresses the reader and is playful with tone.


The story was not completed in time, so errors have not been corrected.


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Excellent control of causes

Punctuation accurate

Powerful, thoughtful imagery

Very confident

Subtleties conveyed by word choice

Better than Y8

Strikes us as an avid reader

Specific verbs

Greater Depth

Target: paragraphing

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https://app.pobble.com/moderation/writing-samples


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Performance meets expectations but is a low example. While punctuation and certain taught features have been addressed, there is insufficient elaboration around the speech, and there is a frequent reliance on repetitive structures.

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Repetition of 'said'.

Story tailed off.

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