https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l Write a feedback statement for Selina referring to her letter. en-us 2020-03-30 20:54:23 UTC 2020-05-19 09:38:29 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/495410983 Well done Selina. Very creative text. We had a lot of fun hearing about your skiing adventure. Keep in mind that we use the past simple tense when telling a story about the past. Hopefully you won’t lose your ski next time. ;)

(Winkelbauer and Werner)]]> 2020-04-06 17:46:37 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/495410983 lenaleopold https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/498648681 Good job! This was an extremely nice story to read. You used a lot of really good vocabulary and your text was very creative. Make sure to remember that when you are writing a story you need to use the past simple tense.
 
(Jobst and Leopold)]]> 2020-04-08 13:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/498648681 https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500508690 GamsjWell done Selina, I loved hearing about your creative story about an accident while skiing! I admire your creativity and ask you to brush up on the rules of when the past simple is used. I've attached comments to your text and would like you to sit down and work through them. 
Looking forward to reading more of your work! 

(Gaar and Gamsjäger) ]]> 2020-04-09 13:23:24 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500508690 christinaslamanig https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500533995 We liked your text. Your story is creative and easy to follow. Please have a look on the corrections, there are a few mistakes concerning vocabulary and the time. Remember to use the past simple when you narrate a story which is already over. Well done! Some especially good parts are marked in green 😊

(Seyfriedsberger & Slamanig)]]> 2020-04-09 13:36:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500533995 https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500767183 Your story was very creative, and we enjoyed reading it. Your language was appropriate for a diary entry and the text was well structured. Although we liked your text, you have to be careful with the tenses. Take a look at our correction and think about when to use the past tense. You also made few mistakes with the vocabulary. Some words cannot be used in a certain context.
We are looking forward to reading your next story! :) 

(Hofer & Gasser) 

]]> 2020-04-09 15:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500767183 https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500901044 Very interesting story! I had fun reading it because it was very creative. I have added some comments  concerning tense use and vocabulary to your file. You have to use  the past simple tense when you write a story about past events. Also, make sure to be know the meaning of the vocabulary  you use in your texts. However, the text was very well written. I I am looking forward to reading another text from you! :)

 (Stampfl)]]> 2020-04-09 16:33:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/500901044 https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/501966930 Very well done, Selina! This was an very interesting and entertaining story. It was very creative and nicely written! Try to focus a little more on when to use the past tense and read through the comments I made on your text. Looking forward to your next text! :)

(Bittner and Fasching)]]> 2020-04-10 12:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/501966930 https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/551731535 You did a great job, Selina! I really enjoyed reading your story, it is very entertaining and creative. Next time try to focus a little more on the tenses, especially when it comes to the past simple and the present perfect tense. Also, commas are very rarely used in the English language, so try to figure out when they really need to be added.
Otherwise, your text was really good and fun to read! :)

(Steinberger)]]> 2020-05-05 10:56:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/551731535 simprous https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/579736278 Dear Selina,
we enjoyed reading your story about your skiing incident. It's wonderful to see how much thoughts go into your writing. Please take a look at our correction and feel free to reach out to us if you have any concerns.

One thing we like to point out: Be careful when using vocabulary related to skiing. Some of them are used incorrectly. You might want to take a look at https://dictionary.cambridge.org/ this dictionary. Here you will find English-English translations. This will help you choose the right words for your purpose. 

Keep up the good work, 
Simon & Agnes
(Prodinger & Sengsbratl)]]> 2020-05-18 12:23:07 UTC https://padlet.com/elkebeder/gdi3cxq34t3l/wish/579736278