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      <title>My Error Correction by Mary</title>
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      <description>What mistakes can you work on? Write a couple of examples here.</description>
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      <pubDate>2017-11-08 17:07:20 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-15 16:30:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-19 20:29:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-19 20:34:14 UTC</pubDate>
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         <author>nk2503</author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/mkr3/gdc04d84f6f/wish/208562023</link>
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         <pubDate>2017-11-20 02:04:02 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Mary&#39;s Example</title>
         <author>mkr3</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Incorrect: She<strong> is</strong> a backache.<br>Correct: She <strong>has</strong> a backache.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 14:46:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>My Example</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Incorrect: I drink with my friend yesterday.<br>Correct: I drank with my friend yesterday.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:10:30 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>My error correction by Hiro</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div><br><br> Here is my example.<br>Wrong: Oh, no you must enter go into a hospital.<br>Right: Oh, no, you must go <strong>to the </strong>hospital.<br><br>Wrong: Yes, and you must operate on your cancer and you should stay in the hospital on 2 months.<br><br>Right: Yes, and <strong>a doctor </strong>must operate on your cancer<strong>,</strong> and you should stay in the hospital <strong>for </strong>2 months.<br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:13:12 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:15:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Wrong: I toke your blood pressure, and a scale measure your height.<br>Right: I will take your blood pressure, and with a scale, I will measure your weight and your height.  </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:18:32 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Paola’s examplo</title>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:20:40 UTC</pubDate>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/mkr3/gdc04d84f6f/wish/349552177</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>I talk about your healt  incorrect <br>Correct : l will talk to you about your health.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:22:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>juyoun&#39;s exampie</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Wrong: Then the nurse led <strong>my</strong> into an examination room.<br>Right: Then the nurse led <strong>me </strong>into an examination room.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:22:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <link>https://padlet.com/mkr3/gdc04d84f6f/wish/349552669</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Incorrect: Hank speak English to his client yesterday <br>Correct: Hank spoke English to his  client yesterday. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:23:03 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Christine  Exampie</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>1. X I am really worried your stomach.<br>Right: I am really  worried about your stomach.<br>2. X Mr David! You must stop eating spicy foods!<br>Right: Mr. Ritter! You must stop eating spicy foods!<br>3. X I am really worried about your hearing<br>Right: l am really worried about your hearing.<br>4.X Mrs Christine! You must stop listening to loud rock music!<br>Right: Ms. Wang! You must stop listening to loud rock music!</div>]]></description>
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         <title>My Example</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Wrong: ...<br>Right:  She was washing her hair in the bathroom?<br>Right: We were doing homework in the living room. </div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:24:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>Paola’s example<br><br><br>No: Paola’s more thin than Juyoun.<br>Yes:  Paola’s thinner than Juyoun.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:28:49 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Camy</title>
         <author></author>
         <link>https://padlet.com/mkr3/gdc04d84f6f/wish/349556510</link>
         <description><![CDATA[<div>Incorrect: when you driver dont.<br>Correct: When you are the driver, don’t talk on your cell phone.</div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:29:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Aili example</title>
         <author></author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>X: The lab technician did me some blood tests <br>Right: The lab technician did some blood tests. <br><br></div>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2019-04-08 15:34:13 UTC</pubDate>
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