Dylann's Personal Narrative by Kevin Van Dyke https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2 What was your favorite part of the story? en-us 2014-04-16 02:02:24 UTC 2014-04-16 02:03:57 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/baby.jpg Denali Conover https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26397091 I love this story, my favorite part in the story is when you describe your anger! Good job!

]]> 2014-04-22 14:25:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26397091 Jaden Brand https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26486944 Dylann I understand what you were feeling when you said you hated your sister because I said that to my brother when I shouldn't of. I think my favorite part was when you felt the grass blades through your toes and when you described your anger as a cloud hanging in the air. I also love how descriptive you are your an amazing writer and I think that you have a lot of potential in your writing your AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!

]]> 2014-04-23 13:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26486944 Dylann Huyser https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26488826 Jaden-

Thank you so much for the time you took commenting on my narrative! The thought and quality you put into your comment was great!!! Sometimes I'm glad that I have so many regretful experiences because they make good writing material. Continue to make exceptional comments because others will enjoy hearing you heartfelt feed back! - Dylann

]]> 2014-04-23 14:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26488826 Korinne Jansen https://padlet.com/vandyke/DylannH2/wish/26669368 I loved your story! I liked how your story told your anger and how it was so fun to read. I understand how your reget something you say to somone ,I know I have ! I cant wait for another one of your stories! Great Job Dylann!

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