Subscription Box Class Feedback-P6 by Christopher Campbell https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49 Period 6 en-us 2021-02-16 15:47:26 UTC 2021-02-19 16:04:50 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4e6.png Sentence Frames for Your Feedback christophergcampbell1 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1207448778 1.) I enjoyed _______ because _____.
2.) Have you thought about _________?
3.) Your use of [rhetorical appeal] would be persuasive because ______.

]]> 2021-02-16 15:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1207448778 christophergcampbell1 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1207448800 For 2 groups that present, each of you will need to write one compliment OR one suggestion about their subscription box and/or marketing strategy using rhetorical appeals.

Put your first name and last initial in the title of your post.]]> 2021-02-16 15:47:26 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1207448800 Dean cullen your use of ethos was persuasive because you said 9/10 students approve and thats an appeal based on the speakers credibility because its whether you are telling the truth or not 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219217322 2021-02-19 15:35:23 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219217322 Griffin Owens https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219219511 Your use of pathos would be persuasive because I don't think people would want the puppy to cry.]]> 2021-02-19 15:35:54 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219219511 Dylan Tice https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219220380 I enjoyed your uses of pathos because it made me laugh.]]> 2021-02-19 15:36:07 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219220380 Yosely Rojas https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219223903 I enjoyed the overall concept of the box, I believe that it was very thoughtful and helpful for those who are stressful in their lives.]]> 2021-02-19 15:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219223903 Dylan Tice https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219224951 I enjoyed the title because it rhymed.]]> 2021-02-19 15:37:19 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219224951 Dean Cullen your use of pathos is good because it relieves "stress" which is an emotion 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219225789 2021-02-19 15:37:32 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219225789 Fiona F. 447948 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219227596 I thought your subscription box was very creative. I liked how you used ethos because I watched G Hannelius when I was younger. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:00 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219227596 Will G https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219227724 I liked your subscription box because stress affects a wide variety of people, so there are lots of potential customers.]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:01 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219227724 I enjoyed your theme of your box because I think it can be very useful for people of any age. https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219228347 Carly Weber ]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219228347 Vivian Dang https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219228361 I liked how you also used logos by including statistics in your presentation]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:10 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219228361 Fiona Bradford 4466851 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219230916 I thought the statistic was very persuasive, I would buy this subscription box.]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:46 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219230916 Dean Cullen I enjoyed your presentation because it has a catchy name that really relates to your box 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219231740 2021-02-19 15:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219231740 Will G https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219231839 I liked your subscription box because Michelle Obama likes it. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219231839 Griffin O https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219233735 I enjoyed your slide because I think the use of statistics and logos as your rhetorical appeal would be very persuasive.]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:28 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219233735 I enjoyed your presentation because it was very well designed and the pictures made your presentation very interesting. https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234342 Carly Weber ]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:37 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234342 gloria https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234453  liked your energy and your marking strategy.]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:39 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234453 Fiona Bradford 4466851 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234675 The use of ethos was really effective, I would buy it if Michelle Obama told me too, and I'm sure others would feel the same.]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:43 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219234675 Dean I enjoyed how you used ethos and talked about G Hannelius. I really liked G hannelius when I was young so this related to me 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235045 2021-02-19 15:39:48 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235045 Kaiya Mayhew https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235220 I like how your box changes theme according to the month]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:51 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235220 jordan portnoy 448217 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235420 I liked the idea of the box. It was very creative. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235420 I liked the fact that you used a puppy as a way of using pathos it sure convinced me/ Zamira Zabala https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235431 lol]]> 2021-02-19 15:39:54 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219235431 Hailey Baker https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219236975 I liked how you included Michelle Obama in the presentation, because a lot of people like her. Have you thought about including more color in your slide presentation?]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:15 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219236975 Niklas Sievers 449332 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219237039 I liked how The Rock liked your box]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:16 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219237039 Annabelle W https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219237145 I like the name of your box. It's clever and well-fitting given the contents, which paired with the other marketing strategies such as ethos encourages me to buy it.]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:18 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219237145 Hanya S https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219238067 I really liked how your box included many artistic aspects because I think drawing is a good way to implement self-care. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219238067 Lauren Pyon https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219238841 I really liked the kid-friendly theme of this box. Especially with your sponsor being a Disney channel star, this is something that I would've bought when I was younger. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:43 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219238841 Annabelle W https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239396 I think that all the techniques you used were very persuasive, especially the puppy and The Rock. Very few people want to make a puppy cry, so it's persuasive.]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239396 Niklas Sievers 449332 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239419 The facts and logos were very convincing.]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239419 Josh Gordon https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239600 I liked your use of ethos by using the Rock's credibility ]]> 2021-02-19 15:40:54 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219239600 David Polcyn https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219240147 I enjoyed the slide because of the Rock.]]> 2021-02-19 15:41:03 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219240147 Zamira Zabala https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219240936 I liked the way you used statistics it really convinced me.]]> 2021-02-19 15:41:15 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219240936 Jordan Portnoy 448217 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219241439 I liked the testimonial. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219241439 Dean Cullen I like how you guys used logos and certain statistics 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219243755 2021-02-19 15:41:57 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219243755 Kaiya Mayhew https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219245637 I like your catchphrase, I think there's definitely a market for this]]> 2021-02-19 15:42:20 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219245637 Joseph M 275159 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219246749 I liked the theme of your box

]]> 2021-02-19 15:42:34 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219246749 Vivian Dang https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219246855 I like how to the point it is and how pictures of the products are the focus of the slide]]> 2021-02-19 15:42:35 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219246855 Yosely Rojas https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219250151 I love this subscription box, this is very helpful to those who can't afford materials for school. The name of the box is also very fitting.

]]> 2021-02-19 15:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219250151 Lauren Pyon https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219259172 I like your use of these items since it will allow teens to venture more of their creative outlet. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:45:45 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219259172 Hailey Baker https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219261915 I enjoyed how you really considered people in need with making your box. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:46:25 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219261915 Josh gordon https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263278 I liked your use of ethos by providing statistics]]> 2021-02-19 15:46:45 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263278 Fiona F. 447948 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263881 I liked how you used all three rhetorical appeals. I think logos and ethos were the most effective. If Simone Biles told me that a certain brand of clothing was good to exercise in, I would listen to her!]]> 2021-02-19 15:46:51 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263881 Dean Cullen I like how you used ethos with simone biles because I grew up seeing her as a gymnast so this made me lean towards your product 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263937 2021-02-19 15:46:52 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219263937 Fiona Bradford 4466851 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219270686 The use of ethos was good, but why is the box $3000 a YEAR?! Maybe it can be $20.99 per month so that it totals to around $250 per year?]]> 2021-02-19 15:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219270686 Dean cullen, Have you thought about maybe lowering the price? 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219271635 2021-02-19 15:48:47 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219271635 Griffin Focht https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219275679 I enjoyed the kid friendliness of the box because not to many boxes are for kids]]> 2021-02-19 15:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219275679 Griffin Focht https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219279798 I enjoyed the way you used statistics]]> 2021-02-19 15:50:57 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219279798 Dean cullen 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219281049 I tried turning up my volume to max and I couldn't even hear a single word]]> 2021-02-19 15:51:18 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219281049 I like the name of your box, "make it yourself DIY" it stood out to me because I like to make things on my own and thats what this title means 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219282492 2021-02-19 15:51:40 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219282492 Hanya S https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219284757 I like your box a lot because it would be really nice to have something to look forward to in winter. It's nice to have something that can get you through the cold. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:52:14 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219284757 Dean Cullen, I like the way you guys used logos trying to show yours is the best, better than any other box similar to yours 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219285392 2021-02-19 15:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219285392 Lauren Pyon https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219286627 I love the theme of your box. I think this box is really affordable considering how much items you you have in there. I'd definitely purchase this. ]]> 2021-02-19 15:52:39 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219286627 Dean Cullen 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219289624 I love the theme and idea of your box, I would love monthly sports supplies! Your presentation is also very well organized. Your use of ethos is perfect, saying that famous athletes love the boxes]]> 2021-02-19 15:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219289624 Dean cullen\ 447836 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219295408 this is my group]]> 2021-02-19 15:54:50 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219295408 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219299293 2021-02-19 15:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219299293 gloria https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219303082 Your price is a little too high but other than that i liked the idea.]]> 2021-02-19 15:56:41 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219303082 Joseph M 275159 https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219333481 I liked the idea and use of your box]]> 2021-02-19 16:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/christophergcampbell1/g43ndb5x0unvff49/wish/1219333481