My epic padlet by Alexandra Conell https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5 Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2017-03-09 05:25:17 UTC 2024-05-17 19:38:49 UTC hello@padlet.com conell666 https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/158871715 2017-03-09 05:25:41 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/158871715 Not hired mitchell1rl https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/159473841
There was tons of good information in here but some of it dragged on for too long. Its like i started reading one paragraph and by the time i got to the next one i had already forgot what was said. If you kept to the key points like the parts about volunteer work, the degrees, and playable instruments you would be good. Everything in the last paragraph was great but the second paragraph dragged on too long for me to keep interest. ]]> 2017-03-12 07:28:04 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/159473841 I really liked this cover letter. The introduction was short and to the point, and you did a good job of explaining your past experiences, including where you graduated from. I think that it was maybe too wordy in some places, but also that you should include as much of your experience as possible if you are trying to get a job. I just think that a cover letter should maybe be more concise, and that some of the information you could have just talked about further in a resume. https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/159853476 2017-03-14 00:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/159853476 Hire The_Real_Bruce_Wayne https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/160150590 To begin, this cover letter was a little too long. Aside from that though, this was good. I see that you are very experienced as well as qualified and educated. Now, all you need to do is compress this letter down to perhaps one paragraph less. Good job overall.]]> 2017-03-15 03:01:18 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/160150590 Hire, akabe3mo https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/160391631
The content of the cover letter was solid, however, it was a little too long. Try and make it concise and too the point. The qualifications and reasonings that you gave to support why you thought you would be a good candidate were relevant and may set you apart from other candidates. That is the main reason for HIRE.]]> 2017-03-15 22:49:00 UTC https://padlet.com/conell666/g2c7k5lxj6c5/wish/160391631