-Martin

I loved how creative the flower artwork was by using a variety of materials to create a fun colourful project.

I also appreciate how you tried to use a new method of online artwork and went out of your comfort zone to try new things.

Zoe McGrath

-McKenzie

• I liked your digital art piece, I thought it was a unique way to document your activity.

• I would suggest projecting your voice more.

• Good job on organizing your presentation

-Makayla Stark

I loved how pretty and colourful your slides were. Your presentation was clear and confident, even without a script! Good job!

-pictures were really nicely taken

- Presentation was clean, looked organized and unique with uses of color.

-documentations were unique, thoughtful and used a lot of personal experiences to relate to the games.

It was cool that you connected water and flow to your daily activities in a positive way.

I liked how you highlighted the artificial and natural world side by side.

-Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

-McKenzie

I enjoyed listening to your explanations for your documentation of each prompt.

I would suggest adding more energy into your voice.

I like your idea of adding a reflection at the end.

I also liked how you included your dad in a couple of the propositions, it looked like you both had a lot of fun with this.

-Zoe McGrath

- McKenzie

-I really like how the video documentation was unique including her dad.

-pictures were nicely taken.

-good speaker skills

-Used a lot of personal connections to enhance her project.

-I really liked your video of the colour green; and I think the sound and the colour go together really well.

- I enjoyed how you added in a lot of pictures! It made it very easy to follow along!

I like how you had high energy throughout the presentation.

Very cool interpretation of the fire map.

I liked how you incorporated minecraft and the beach as a child

Zoe McGrath

Maya Tennant

-I like how your explanations are clear and well organized.

-I likes how you included lots of visuals in your presentation

-McKenzie

-looked like she really enjoyed the project

-confident speaker

-another great video documentation

Journaling were neat, great hand writing.

-A lot of emotional attachments during the presentation that made it heartfelt.

I really liked your response to the video proposition. You made some very good comparisons between the land and growth, resilience, motion, and society as a whole. It felt very well thought out and insightful.

It was very beautiful that you were able to feel close to your late grandparents.

-Zoe McGrath

- McKenzie

-As a speaker he’s always able to make his audiences engaged and laughing

-presentation was more black and white, but the speaking made up for it.

-Used personal experiences, hobbies like music and compared it to sounds of water which made it entertaining.

-Poem was amazing as always.

I only caught the last sentence of your journal but it seemed very well written from what I got.

Watch your confident voice! Don't say something that you produced yourself is horrible when presenting!

Slam Poem: 10/10

-Zoe McGrath

-I love Japanese mochi, it’s one of my favorite desserts her including it brought back a core memory.

-rock pile was cool, she used a good connection that she felt deeply connected to. Using family as a statement for her connection.

-haiku sounded really good.

I like how you used green to give it a more nature vibe.

-Makayla Stark

If you can, try to project your voice a little bit more for those in the back.

Great song choice, so sweet and calm.

-Zoe McGrath

-Mckenzie

I like how you compare yourself to the past, nice drawing, also great digital art

Sienna

I like the idea that you use a flow chart to connect your flow

Maya

I like how you connect the color and sound also they way that you include your dad in the proposition

Sarah

I love the idea of using Minecraft to connect your past

Jenna

I like how confident you are and great video documentation

Robert

I like how you use emoji, engaging slam poetry

-Gary

-prompts were really interesting to go through as an audience.

-lot of green again, making it really eye catching.

-painting was beautiful

-Vegetables were cut really nicely

-Overall presentation was unique and entertaining.

The water colour was a very cool choice to represent water in your painting.

-Zoe McGrath

-McKenzie

-Journal was unique and cool

-The phot of the island was really cool

-she really implemented on how much she enjoyed the project.

-Mckenzie

-Zoe McGrath

I really enjoyed how you expressed the playground activity, honouring your younger self was a great idea. Your various art pieces were also very nicely put together!

Sienna Singh:

I liked how descriptive you were with all your propositions and activities, as well as the small anecdotes you added throughout, it made the presentation very engaging.

Maya Tennant:

I really liked your confidence when presenting, it made the overall experience very enjoyable. I also really enjoyed the video of your playing the harmonica, the representation of your propositions were well done.

Sarah Leblanc:

I enjoyed the audio clips you added, they were nice to listen to and visualize what you experienced. I also enjoyed the images you added throughout, it gave lots of nice details to what you were presenting.

Jenna Strong:

I really enjoyed how you expressed your propositions. The tree-hugging collage and various representations of water were really enjoyable to see. Overall, the entire project was very well done.

Robert Preda:

Your ability to confidently present and engage with the audience was very captivating. You also took care to add a lot of details to your presentation which made it all very engaging. The slam poem was awesome.

Amber Wang:

I really liked all the images you included for each prompt, it gave a good visual for what you were sharing. I also enjoyed your drawings and how you explained them, it was all very well done.

Mia Dekleva:

I really enjoyed your water colour drawing, it was really nicely done. I also enjoyed how you explained the meaning behind your poem, it was very interesting to see.

Keira Boal:

I liked your art pieces and documentations, your ability to thoughtfully explain the process behind all of it was very engaging and enjoyable to see.

Makayla Stark:

I enjoyed the video and audio clips you added throughout your presentation, they were nice to see. I also enjoyed how you added your brainstorming and the process it took to create the various documentations, it made it all very realistic and captivating.

Your journal was beautiful, I think if I saw it at a book store I'd buy it.

-Zoe McGrath

-I like the pictures that you took of yourself at the playground!

-I love the flower art you made and how creative it looked.

-Your presentation was so well put together and you really showed how you experienced and reflected through these activities.

Sienna:

-I really like your flow chart and how you broke up the different aspects of where you flow best!

Maya:

-I love how you and your dad did your song on the harmonica as a way to reflect.. very creative but I LOVED it.

-You did a great way at showing us how you reflected and what you experienced through this activity.

Sarah L:

-I really liked how you documented the sounds and the video of you and your brother playing by the water. I really enjoyed your presentation:)

Jenna:

-I loved your tree collage and the unique branches of the tree you photographed.

-I liked the video you took of the riverbank and how you reflected on the different elements present.

Robert:

-I liked how you connected your proposition to that rainy day art piece and drawing in stuff you have learnt from other classes into this presentation.

No fun artistic theme for the presentation:(

-It's okay! you did a good job at explaining your reflection process.

-Nice poem... love the passion!

Amber:

-I really like your first slide with the collage and how you so uniquely placed all the pictures... they really make me connect deeper to the song you showed us.

-amazing drawings!!

Mia:

-I love the drawing you made and how this really captured your experience as well as your explanation on reflection.

Keira:

-I liked your art piece and how your really made an effort to capture all the details in the waves.

Makayla:

-I enjoyed your poem i think it really captured how this proposition made you feel and what it was like to experience it.

-i really liked the music with the video of the flower as it makes us feel spring is coming.

-McKenzie

I like the theme you used for your presentation and how you had a table on contents at the beginning. I also liked how you recreated the photo of you on the playground when you were a child. Your flower art collage was really cute! Your presentation was really thought put and engaging!

Sienna:

I liked the flow chart you created for your first proposition and how you colour coded based on each element. I love the name of the story you created about the water droplet! I liked that you did an overall reflection on the whole experience

Maya:

I liked the collage of photos you made with the different places where the sunlight is reflecting of things. Love the video of you playing the harmonica with your dad! You were a great tree and I liked the you used a tree that you planted yourself for the last proposition

Sarah L:

I like the theme you used for your presentation! I liked the collage and flavour map you created for the third proposition. I enjoyed the use of photos in your presentation :)

Jenna:

I love the photo of you hugging the tree and the collage you created to go along with it. I like how you related the elements of the river to parts of the society. I really appreciate the connection to your family in the last proposition.

Robert:

I liked that you connected the rainy day painting and other drawings from your other classes into the first proposition. Maybe add a bit more colour presentation for it to be a bit more engaging, but you did a great job your process and reflection. Great slam poem...very enthusiastic!

Amber:

Love the theme! I really liked how you laid out the photo collage based on the song you chose in the first proposition. Really great drawings!! I really appreciate the connection to your family for your proposition

Mia:

Love the painting you created for your second propositions I think it really captured your experience. I also really liked the poem you wrote

Keira:

I like all the photos you have in your presentation and you did a really good job presenting. I can tell that you enjoyed doing these propositions. I also liked your art piece and how you made it look like wet

Makayla:

I really enjoyed your poem that you created, i think that it really captured your experience with this proposition. I also liked the video and the music that you added to it. Overall, really good presentation!

I really liked your art pieces and how included different materials in your representation of flowers. Your collage was also really nice and I like how you connected to your inner child.

Maya:

I really like how creative you were and how you included your family in your experience.

Sarah:

Your presentation was very creative and playful and I really enjoyed watching you present. You seemed very confident and concise in your reflections. Good job!

Jenna:

I really liked the way you shared your personal experience and connected with your inner child. I like the way u chose a tree that looked like it had arms. It helped connect human life to wildlife and nature.

Robert:

Your slam poetry was really good, I like the connections you made to the earth and how it’s important to listen to it.

Amber:

Your reflection was very well thought out and I liked how you described the deserts and how they relate to the cherry blossom.

Mia D:

I really like your art pieces. You did a great job of showing different textures of materials in nature.

Keira B:

Your art piece was so beautiful I really like how you included the colors and textures of the ocean in your piece. very artistic. Your presentation was also very well made and eye-catching.

Makayla:

I liked your daily journal. The template was very well organized and I like your creative decisions in creating the journal.

-Great photos again

-video and selection of song was amazing

-Flowers looked great

-Journal cover looked great

-Journal was documented with a lot of details, she put in a lot of effort for all her prompts.

-great presentation really enjoyed it.

-the drawing and writings were always colorful and neat.

-she really elevated the sunlight prompt using so many descriptive activities. It made it really entertaining for us audiences as it felt like we were doing the activities too.

-I agree that waves are really calming

-video was cool, as it gave us a better insight of what she was hearing.

-Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

McKenzie

-presentation was eye catching

-Drawing was really really good

-story was a good way to document and addition with the photo.

Your drawing of silk was so cool, very creative. You're a great artist! I can't believe you made that comic!

-Zoe McGrath

-Mckenzie

Love you mind map and how you reflected it to playing soccer and connecting it to your family! I really like your picture you made for the 2nd proposition it was very creative :) The video sounds very peaceful! I like how you were able to reflect on your experience for each proportions

-I like her selection of music

-a lot of different fonts for different slides making it eye catching

-videos were peaceful good quality and sounds were calming.

-good speaker

-cool collages.

-McKenzie

It was cool that you got to appreciate the birds in the morning, your reflection on slowing down and enjoying the day was something that I think I could apply to my own life.

Your presentation appeared very organized and the themes you used for your propositions were very nice.

-Zoe McGrath

-writing was cool

-cool that she included a picture where she was at sfu

-overall great presentation, eye catching, great speaker and really creative.

-videos were cool too

-Makayla Stark

I liked your slides and responses!

-Zoe McGrath

-McKenzie

-cool drawings

-video and journal were nice

-really eye catching and entertaining.

I couldn't hear you very well at the back :(

I like how you included a very nice sketch and identified the challenges of it.

-burger profile was creative

- kid photos were funny and cool

• entertaining great speaker

• Beaches looked rly good

-Makayla Stark

-Zoe McGrath

You projected your voice so well, very confident.

Smart idea going to order a hot drink, thats an activity a lot of us participate in regularly and likely don't think about it from these other perspectives.

Your drawings were so good!

-Zoe McGrath

-I really liked the squirrel

-colorful presentation

-Starbucks was creative

-good speaker

-descriptive speaker

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-Process of documentation was unique and fun to watch.

-I really liked the video of the river, it was unique cool and calming.

-I like the little pictures in the corners of the presentation that really brightens the slides.

-Zoe McGrath

-Makayla Stark

I actually really enjoyed your reflection on the sunset, it was a refreshing take on a picturesque moment, thank you for sharing a vulnerable response.

Great poem! I loved the time lapse!

-Zoe McGrath

-Zoe McGrath

• i liked her personal connection recreating her photo from 12 years ago

• very clearly organized presentation

• her artwork was well thought out and represented her ideas well and was very creative

For Sienna Singh

• connected very well to emotion through interaction with her propositions

• the drawing represented the image very well i like how she pointed out the natural light and the artificial light

• it was creative adding a voice audio

• the reflection added a great touch to conclude

For Maya Tennant

• great presenting voice and engaging speaker

• i liked the personal connection to her childhood

• very good reflections that connected to her emotions

For Sarah Leblanc

• engaging speaker projected her voice well

• the flavour map was very cool i like how it was thought out and planned

• i liked the personal connection and the video of her and her brother when she was younger

For Jenna Strong

• engaging speaker connected well to the audience

• very organized powerpoint and visually pleasing

• great connections to mud trees sounds of bird and rocks in her 3rd proposition

For Robert Preda

• good voice and volume was a very engaging presenter

• i liked her connection to another class material he was familiar with

• creative pictogram art creation

• his slam poetry had a lot of emotion

For Amber Wang

• i liked the layout of her presentation and how she organized her images

• engaged well with the natural environment

• i liked her connections between the cherry blossoms and almond cake and macaroons

For Mia Dekleva 

• i loved her presentations visuals

• her artwork was really nice and articulated her ideas well

• connected well to herself and the past making her beet salad

For Keira Boal

• great presenter with a good speaking voice

• artwork was very creative and was cool to see that she went beyond and added texture to it

• i like how she visually represented her videos and arranged her powerpoint

For Makayla Stark

• i loved the visuals of her powerpoint

• she has a good presenter voice and engagement with the class

• i liked hearing her personal connection and her story about her grandmas favourite tree

• she did my proposition and executed it very well i loved seeing how she brought my ideas to life and engaged with the prompt thoughtfully!

For Gabriella Pastora 

• great engaging speaker

• good personal connection to family, food, and soccer in her mind map

• very thoughtful engagement with each proposition that was clear through her images

  
  

For Jordan Nicol

• great reflection to how fast the world changes

• i loved her connection to her childhood memories

• great artwork and it represented her ideas well

For Megan Hawkins

• i loved her journal reflection it was very thoughtful

• the cloud proposition was very creative and cool to see how she interpreted the clouds in her own way

• i liked her rock videos!

For Emily Long

• she did my proposition! it was really cool to see how she interacted with my prompt. she did a great job and connected well emotionally

• i loved the display of he powerpoint it was well organized and thought out

• her journal entries were very thought out

For Kirra Trites

• great speaking voice and engaged well with the audience

• good emotional connection to her mood and how the natural world impacts it

• great connection to her family through her reflection on what her dish means to her

For Daisy DeRuiter

• very engaging positive speaking voice!

• thoughtful engagement with propositions

• really creative artwork for the coffee cup

For Ysaura Jaliri

• i loved seeing her personal connection to her mother her childhood and her home country

• i liked how each slide for each proposition had a section for connection insight and reflection

• lots of visuals made her powerpoint very engaging

For Silvia Parkinson

• engaging clear speaker

• i liked her poem it was very thoughtful

• it was interesting to see how she engaged with the sun and how it was actually not positive but more of a sad interaction

For Avery Amores

• i loved her pink visuals in her powerpoint

• very engaging speaker

• i can tell she put a lot of thought into completing each proposition

For Arjan Dhaliwal

• engaging speaker an connected very well to the audience

• he did a great job doing his dance it takes lots of confidence to do that so i respect him for stepping out of his comfort zone

• i liked his videos he included within his presentation (rock skipping video)

I really like the layout and colour choice of the presentation, it’s very simple, lovely, and easy to see! The playground picture recreation is really cute and accurate :D

The art pieces are very well executed and I can tell you took some time and a lot of effort to make them very nice and presentable.

Sienna:

I really liked how you explained all the parts of your flow chart to help us understand it instead of just showing us the chart for a split second. All the documentation forms were great and the overall presentation was very well made. The slides were so pretty and it was very easy to see and understand.

Maya Tennat:

I love your energy and confidence while you present, it felt like you were just talking to us like friends instead of a final project presentation! The harmonica documentation was so cute! What a great way to express the colour green and outside. Your presentation was very pretty as well, lots of nature aspects that fit in well with your presentation.

Sarah Leblanc:

I think your propositions are very very well executed, with the documentation I can tell you spent a lot of time to do them and had fun as well! I loved how smiley you were throughout too, I didnt feel like you were nervous at all even thought you might’ve been, it didnt show at all!

Jenna Strong:

Your presentation looks very visually pleasing and I really like it. You were very confident while speaking and pretty casual which was nice and I felt very engaged while you spoke! Your reflections were very thoughtful and I love your laughter it was very contagious !

Robert Preda:

I think it’s very impressive how you managed to do 3 prompts about listening to water all very different and well! I had 3 about the sound of the forest so i related to you a lot. I think the presentation itself couullldaaa had a little bit more colour to allow it to pop more and be eye pleasing but the simplicity is also nice to look at. Very very impressive slam poem

Amber:

I really how calm your voice was, I felt very engaged with your first prompt, the song and your voice were both very soothing. Your reflection about the rock being a foundation relating back to your past which was very interesting. I like the presentation itself too, it was very nice to look at!

Mia dekleva:

Your presentation looked very nice, awesome template. The photos were very good, they represented well all your prompts and documentation and it felt like I was there with you for all of them. Your art was also very pretty!

kiera Boal:

The volume and confidence of your voice is so perfect, you sound like a very seasoned presenter! THE MOVING SUN IS SO AWESOME, the baby deer are sooo cute. The picture of the water was so beautiful, what a beautiful day to go out and do a project relating to water.

Makayla Stark:

Your presentation voice sounds very confident! Your journal is so so well made, I can tell how much time and effort you put into this project, the dedication to do it for a week is amazing, I dont know if id be able to keep up with it. Love the way you described that water “minerally.” A very well executed presentation.

Gabriella Pastora:

Your mind map is super nice and looks so good and mind mappy. I love all the colours included in your presentation, it looks super nice! One thing i noticed throughout your presentation was how clear you spoke, and the emotion in your voice, it was very nice. Your connection with rocks and humans is very thought provoking, i completely agree with you, just like rocks we are all different and thats completely ok.

Jordan nicol:

The font and colours used in the presentation are very pleasing to the eye. The sunset pictures were super duper pretty. I love how you executed my prompt, the pictures from the past were very nice and exactly what i wanted out of that prompt. your paintings were so beautiful and professional.

Lauren Miao:

The song playlist and the little web look very nice and I can imagine that was a wonderful experience. You spoke very calmly and collectively, very clear without any ums which was very nice and easy to listen to. You spoke not too fast and not too slow and at a good volume! love the documentation as well.

Megan Hawkins:

Your journal looks very nice, i like how it’s hand written but online. The little drawing on the bottom of yourself lying down very was cute too. The word map is very creative and you put down a lot of words, very impressive! The videos for dropping rocks were very entertaining and the reflection was very thoughtful. Overall, I can tell you put a lot of effort into your presentation.

Emily Long:

I love the way your presentation looks, it’s so colourful and nice to look at with the little touches of popart. Your volume was a little bit quiet and difficult to hear unless i listen very closely. Overall, Your reflections and documentations were all wonderful and you had great attention to detail in your slides.

Kirra Trites:

The colourful presentation was very nice to look at, it matches the theme of the presentation super well. You made lots of eye contact with the audience instead of staring at a script so I felt very engaged and involved in the presentation. It felt like you were talking to us, not to a piece of paper. The poem was amazing, the rhyming was immaculate.

Yusaura:

I really like the template you used, everything fits very well together with the photos you included. The connections you made to your home country were very thoughtful and interesting. I can tell you put a lot of thought and effort into every single one of your propositions and that was well appreciated!

Silvia Parkinson:

The thing you associated green with is different than a usual association with the colour and that was interesting! I actually like the use of colour in the presentation, it’s simple, but matches to each prompt. Your poems are wonderful and creative! That video was amazing!!!! no words just, so well made, and the vibe of the song was very fitting.

Avery Amores:

I adore the template of your presentation, the pink is so beautiful and how you displayed the pictures was very creative like little polaroid pictures. You spoke very softly but it had a good volume, I was able to hear you clearly.

Arjan Dhaliwal:

I love your use of humour to engage us, the audience. And the way you asked us to hype you up was very fun, amazing dance. I like how you did all your documentation as videos of yourself, it was a nice change of pace and fun to watch. The skips were very impressive. I enjoyed your confidence in talking to an audience, it was like we were just buddies!

I liked how many videos you added into your presentation which made me feel like we were all involved in the process and there for the experience. It was a good way for us to really feel the negative and positive feelings you were demonstrating.

-Zoe McGrath

Julia Hellyer

I liked that you had an image that showed a past event. Also very relatable trying to avoid stares. The flower art piece was well done. The next art piece was especially interesting, with the rain drops each having accompanying words that represent what you felt. Overall it was very creative.

Sienna Singh

I liked all the connections you made between the environment, yourself, and others. The last part where you reflect on the entire project was a nice touch.

Maya Tennant

I liked all the connections you drew from your memories. The interaction with your father further solidified how much you value those connections.

Sarah LeBlanc

Good voice projection and confidence. I liked that you mentioned how much you enjoyed doing the propositions themselves and how they allowed you to relax.

Jenna Strong

I liked all the connections you were able to draw with your interactions with the environment. Especially proposition 3 where there were 4 different connections. The last part talking about reconnecting with your grandparents was also heart warming.

Robert Preda

I liked your confidence, the jokes were also funny. I especially liked your slam poetry. The connections you drew from interacting from the environment and talking to rain and an ant were interesting.

Amber Wang

The arrangement of the overlapping images show how they are similar to each other was cool. I liked the inclusion of food from other cultures in your drawing.

Although your voice was a little quiet, you were very confident throughout the presentation. I also liked the how you used rocks to show your families strong support for you.

Mia Dekleva

I liked how you used the images to show the process. Also the mention of memories was a nice touch. You were also confident and had good voice projection

Keira Boal

I liked how you detailed how you made your painting. The appreciation you felt from the environment was greatly demonstrated. I also liked that you were very passionate throughout the presentation.

Makayla Stark

I liked that you chose to document some things that were important to your family.

The journal documentation of how sunlight affected you was also very interesting. How you divided into your mood, goals, and reflection.

Gabriella Pastora

I liked all the photos you had. The mind map was really colourful. for I especially liked the thoughts you had regarding comparisons and how they affect how everyone sees each other.

Jordan Nicol

I liked the photo collage of the sunset you made and your reflection on how fast change happens. The photos that showed your family enjoying the beach showed your appreciation for the environment and interactions with others.

Lauren Malo

I liked that you used songs that you already knew to try and connect to nature. I also really liked all the photos and video clips shown.

Megan Hawkins

I really liked the cloud photos and the images you saw in them. Voice projection was a little weak. The word art was also cool, though it didn't have a lot of colour variation making it somewhat hard to see. But that was because of all the connections you were able to think of. The rock dropping was interesting, though I also wanted to see the rocks being spread out instead of being clumped together to show the area of effect.

Emily Long

I liked the photos shown and all the detailed account of your documentation process. Your voice was a bit too soft at the beginning, but it got louder as the presentation progressed. I could tell you were confident though.

Kirra Trites

I liked how you included the memories and interactions with your family. Though you were talking a little bit too fast. I also liked that your word collage looked like a blooming flower perhaps representing your feelings about the beach.

Daisy Deruiter

I liked the recounting of how the squirrel walked up to you, and your thoughts of why it did that. You were very confident, though talking a little too fast sometimes. I also liked that you commented about how different areas had different animals in the area and the many man made structures that can be found in them. The continuous line art looked cool.

Ysaura Jaliri

I liked that for prop. 1 you drew connections included connections to the country the food originated from.

I also liked that on your slides there was a spot with a short sentence concerning connections and insights, and reflection.

Silvia Parkinson

I liked that you went and compared the poems with each other to find out what you valued. All the connections you made with the sunset were very interesting. The time lapses and the song really matched together.

Avery Amores

The design of the presentation looked amazing. I liked the video clip slideshow and the detailed thoughts and reflections you made for each proposition.

Arjan Dhaliwal

It was very funny and your confidence was palpable. I liked that you mentioned past experiences. Your dance was the best part. I also liked that you mentioned the struggles you went through doing the propositions and it was sort of shown during the rock skipping. The comparisons between the waves and your thoughts were interesting.

I really liked your various mind maps, it showcased your thoughts and ideas in an organized and interesting way. I also enjoyed how you were able to confidently express what you experienced, it was very nice to see.

Jordan Nicol:

I enjoyed how you described how you tackled each proposition, it gave plenty of detail to what you were expressing. I also really liked your drawing and painting, they were both very nicely done!

Lauren Maio:

I like how you connected all of your propositions to meaningful and relatable parts of your life, it made things very realistic and was a nice personal touch. I also enjoyed the audio clip you included with the birds, it was all very peaceful.

Megan Hawkins:

I really enjoyed all the images you included, it was nice to see a visual representation of your activities and the process of your project. The videos were a nice addition. Overall, the entire thing was very well put together and presented.

Emily Long:

I really enjoyed how you formatted your presentation, it was very aesthetically pleasing. I also really liked you drawings, they were nicely done. The entire presentation was very interesting to observe.

Kirra Trites:

I liked your creativity when it came to how you presented your propositions, most of them, like the flavour profile, were newer concepts which was very refreshing to see. Overall, you did a great job.

Daisy DeRuiter:

I enjoyed your confidence when presenting, your positive attitude made the whole thing very engaging. I also enjoyed how you showcased your activities in many various forms, it was all very interesting to see. The drawings were great!

Ysaura Jaliri:

I really liked all the images and stories you included in your presentation, it made it very interesting to see specific parts of your life. I really enjoyed your poem about water, it was very well written.

Silvia Parkinson:

I enjoyed how you formatted your presentation, it was easy to follow and nice to watch. I also enjoyed your reflective ideas, it brought up points and perspectives that I hadn't thought about before, I found it all very interesting. The video was super cool!

Avery Amores:

I really liked how you explained everything in detail, it helped make your presentation very engaging and enjoyable to see. I really liked your poem about the sunset, it was very well written and the imagery was beautiful. Well done.

Arjan Dhaliwal:

I really enjoyed your dancing video and your confidence in expressing your presentation and propositions. All the videos you included were very interesting to watch. The entire thing was very engaging, especially for being the last presentation, it was all very enjoyable to see.

I like how you connect your favourite song with the sound of nature

Mia

I like you poem, and the way you format your presentation

Keira

I like how you make the watercolor art 3D and you really show that you enjoy the project

Makayla

I like your poem and the video of flower with music on it

Gabriella

I like the picture of the sun, and how you connect different rocks

Jordan

I love the comic you made, and the painting is amazing

Lauren

I like how you choose the song, and the sunset photo was so beautiful

Megan

I like how you include yourself in the picture and how you connect the rock and sound

Emily

I like the drawing you have as well as the video and journal

Kirra

I like the poem, burger profile and they way you connect it with you family

Daisy

I like how you reflect on the man made “house” on the forest

Ysaura

I like how you connect all your reflection to the past and present

Silvia

I like the time lapse and your reflection on the sunset

Avery

I like your poem and how you include different picture of sunset

Arjan

I love the dance and all the video you have in the presentation

- Gary

I liked that you mentioned how your family interacted with your proposition. I also liked that you mentioned all the thoughts and feelings you had during the proposition.

1)Julia H.

I like Julia’s crafted flowers. You are very creative. The recreation from an old photo gives me a nostalgic feeling! I believe that as we get older, our interpretation/explanation for our experiences and feelings becomes more complex. When we were in elementary school, we just enjoyed the play time we had in the playground. The word gravity won’t be explicitly mentioned if no one asks or teaches. Nevertheless, we have experienced the effect of what we now know as gravity, such as vividly feeling how the force pulls us downward when we try to hang off a monkey bar.

2) Sienna S.

What a nice flowchart (water) that presented the important things and how they are involved in your life —work, family, school, and pet. I love your reflection on how you appreciate the people, things, and nature in your life. Your drawing of the sunset was the very cool choice of tool you used. It provided a dreamlike vibe.

3) Maya T.

I love the photo collage, it has various sunlight views. I like that your dad was the person who held the camera while you played your Harmonica. I can feel how the music’s sound or rhythm expresses the atmosphere of chilling and calm — vivid green. In addition, WOW, a tree that you planted in grade seven is still growing strongly.

4) Sarah L.

It is great that you got to try out all the different senses and have multiple ways to document each proposition. It is a great idea to show a picture while having the audio button on the side. For the element of fire, you decide to grill vegetables for the family. It is quite a lot of work to cook for the whole family, but I am glad you took on the challenge and made it happen — it is very encouraging.

5）Jenna S.

Hey Jenna, it is great to see you out in nature and embracing them so closely — hugging a tree. I also like the video you filmed, the sound of the water flow was very nice. The poem you wrote creates nice imagery of how water went from how the figertip felt cold to a happy feeling of warm and enjoyable. It was cool and having the courage to visiting childhood memory places with grandparents and jornlling at the sea side. Thank you.

6) Robert P.

I enjoyed the humour and seriousness balanced in your presentation: “We listen, but we don't judge.” Your slides were simple, and you caught the audience’s attention through your voice and posture. Since most of your propositions involved the element of water, I can see you have a deep experience with this element, especially in how you adjust different documentation methods from journal entries, slam poems, and videos. Great presentations. I wish you all the best.

7) Amber W.

Hey Amber. Nice presentation! Your PowerPoint slides included a lot of cool visual elements. I found it interesting that you could connect one of your favourite songs that can represent the peacefulness that you experience for a walk. The flow map was wonderful You presented a photograph of cherry blossoms, and you drew out the dessert that can remind you of the cherry smell. In addition, I get to know more about you as you share more about your culture and connect this part of you with the rocks you are working with. I like your creativity.

8) Mia D.

I truly appreciate how methodically you have presented everything from the start. It shows great organization. The variation in how you cut the beets and carrots in each picture is impressive. Some are neatly diced, while others are cut into square shapes. This not only adds visual interest but also showcases how patient you are. Taste root vegetables that connect with family culture. Well done!

9) Keira B.

Your art piece was simple but very provokes emotion of the water, using tissue paper and pencil crayons. I like the sun animation (rotating) on your PowerPoint slides. Your sharing really made me think of the last leadership presentation reading about walking.

10) Makayla S.

I like to write in a journal every night before I sleep. I found it cool that you have made your own journal tracker of how you feel about the weather changing, especially since this is something you do not do often. I love the physical tracker you showed in the class. Thank you.

11) Gavriella P.

Hello Gavriella, thank you for sharing wonderful ideas with us. Your mind map and the idea of different rocks represent different personalities or characteristics. I enjoyed your poem a lot. Each rock has a unique shape and texture that is distinct from others, which is a great observation.

12) Jorden N.

I love how the sunset just changes over time and goes down. You capture it well! The comic was great, cute drawing that told a story.

13) Lauren M.

Your presentation is great. It is a great reflection on how we should sometimes slow down and take things easy — breathe. Also, listening to a playlist while walking in a forest/ that has trees is nice. I love your sharing of how your mood changes.

14) Megan H.

The cloud drawing was creative. It was wonderful to witness Daniel's perspective being so effectively conveyed. I could tell that he was meticulously exploring the optimal number of rocks for the player to throw and the corresponding volume of the sound as I was listening to his proposal. It was a great pleasure to observe both the brilliant mind behind the game concept and the Megan you as the player who documented this specific proposition. You did an excellent job in reenacting the "Drop rocks into the water" activity. I enjoy it!

15) Emily L

It was very nice to see that my preposition turned out so great in your hands! I was glad that you got a chance to explore our campus and film a video of the waterfall. Although drawing was not your strength, the skitch turned out beautifully, especially the water splash. Adorable PowerPoint design — phone displays audio.

16)Kirra T.

Great sharing and connecting this assignment with your childhood. Nice collage and a balance of online pictures and pictures of your own.

17)Daisy D.

Loud and clear! You have the enthusiasm to present what you did. The squirrel was cute to see. Wonderful reflections.

18) Ysaura J.

Hey Ysa, love your documentation methods. I enjoy you looking at the collage you have of rocks and openly sharing your culture with us. Thank you.

19) Silvia P

Wonderful Vlog, point of view of landscape on skytrain! I can feel a sense of time in your time-lapse video. I always find green colour is very calm and peaceful colours comparing to other colours, also good for our eyesight when we look at a green forest. The poem that you wrote connecting the values in our life to green was great. Very inspirational.

20) Avery A.

Hello, Avery. I like your PowerPoint. The slide on what you did for your playful proposition and the reflection about nature were well-explained and organized. The playlist you made was super cool I find. Thank you for sharing!

21) Arjan D.

I like the dance you recorded. It was very inspirational how you moved your arms slowly and wavy. This is an excellent documentation of water’s movement. Slow, peaceful, and calm. Your voice was loud and clear. I did not want to miss a second because you sound like you are ready to share more new information or a story with the class. Thank you.

22) Apple (Thoughts)

Thank you, everyone. I am very grateful for this class. I like this project a lot and seeing everyone engage with the game concepts that were created by another peer. The project creates a bridge for us to interact with each other directly or indirectly.

Sarah: 
You did a great job with your slides, clearly showing what you did for each proposition. Your voice was also clear, which made it easy to follow your experience throughout the process. 

Lauren: 
Your slides were really well-organized, and your voice was clear and easy to understand. It was great to hear about your suggestions and your experience. Also, I loved all the songs you picked for your Proposition 1 playlist. 

Kirra: 
You had a clear speaking voice that was easy to follow, and your slides were really cute! I also loved that you grew up making your own burgers. I did the same with my family, and it brought back such nostalgic memories for me too.