https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0 Please post at least 1 thing that stays with you as you hear your fellow Writers share their piece. This could be a single image or idea. And please offer what works very well in their stories. en-us 2021-02-25 15:06:01 UTC 2025-12-23 19:21:15 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242411760 "mirrors dont always tell the truth sometimes they switch and flip images" is very important to think about and consider because sometimes things look a bit distorted or inverted which might affect how you like what you see]]> 2021-02-25 17:59:49 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242411760 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242412289 "mirrors can't tell the truth"
"no more than a reflection of me" that's raw. I liked the word play and diction]]> 2021-02-25 17:59:55 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242412289 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242413717 Something that stayed with me is the phrase "swallow a galaxy." I think that the personification and imagery that was used. ]]> 2021-02-25 18:00:10 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242413717 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242414043 There was a lot of dramatic imagery in here, particularly with movement and imagination, I thought was really powerful.]]> 2021-02-25 18:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242414043 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242417085 "painting my emotions" 
"When I'm feeling particularly animated"]]> 2021-02-25 18:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242417085 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242426479 I like the thought of is the mirror deceiving or is it the human eye ]]> 2021-02-25 18:02:30 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242426479 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242451004 “Feeling like a puddle in the rain” really brought out the raw emotion.]]> 2021-02-25 18:07:06 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242451004 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242452232 "this reality is confused" ooh!
We talked about a lot of these ideas and additions and I really love how you depicted the clues to the situation and the sensory details. Loved the head pulsing and the feeling as if we are in the narrators skin.]]> 2021-02-25 18:07:20 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242452232 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242454700 "Covering up the disdain of a situation" I think you did a great job of making it seem confusing and twisted up. It felt like I was in a maze of mirrors.]]> 2021-02-25 18:07:47 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242454700 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242457081 " a sinister laugh not the laugh of a clown" helps the tone a lot because it seems very dark but the talk about blood flow and pulse also helps that ]]> 2021-02-25 18:08:12 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242457081 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242468783 "A dark figure appears the hundred others." Was a fantastic line]]> 2021-02-25 18:10:21 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242468783 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242470270 "Aa dark figure appears among the others". The imagery was captivating and there was alot of emotion. ]]> 2021-02-25 18:10:37 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1242470270 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259915700 Something that stayed with me is the phrase "glass still breaks. It just doesn't shatter." That really has a profound impact on the audience. I think that all of the questions the narrator asked were really well done. It went great with the Mirror Mirror on the wall theme. ]]> 2021-03-02 18:14:46 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259915700 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259932313 I loved the repetition of mirror mirror and how it dictates the movement of the peaker and the breaking of the mirror. ]]> 2021-03-02 18:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259932313 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259936917 "This is not the reflection I recall" I loved that because it takes a turn on the original line which I honestly like more.]]> 2021-03-02 18:18:13 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259936917 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259941200 i really liked the inclusion of mirror mirror on the wall because it relates to a fairytale and normally it seems picture perfect however here we are dealing with insecurities ]]> 2021-03-02 18:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259941200 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259951607 The idea that you are made up of your relatives in the beginning is really strong. the description of the bookcase brought a historic feeling while also bringing the audience ideas about what the room has seen. ]]> 2021-03-02 18:20:39 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259951607 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259953849 i like how descriptive this is, it feels like were being taken through a museum of history, I also like the incorporation of the book and all the dust on it.]]> 2021-03-02 18:21:02 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259953849 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259955091 You see pieces of your parents in you and I think that's very beautiful.

]]> 2021-03-02 18:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259955091 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259959899 "full of worlds I've never been to and probably never will" is a good line because it shows how many places we want to go and things we want to do but know we will never get the chance to. It's a very subtle way of accepting that your dreams won't come true.]]> 2021-03-02 18:21:58 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259959899 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259967900 This feels very personal, especially because I've struggled with insecurities myself, and this seems to be a sort of reflection.]]> 2021-03-02 18:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259967900 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259974338 The physical and mental imagery was fantastic; very descriptive and imaginative.]]> 2021-03-02 18:24:14 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259974338 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259994761 "you exist in" I really like that way of opening instead of hearing "I see you in"
I liked the tattooed memories in the stains. beautiful imagery]]> 2021-03-02 18:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259994761 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259996444 "You tattooed our memories to the carpet with stains and spills."]]> 2021-03-02 18:28:06 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259996444 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259998014 The phrases "beaming on the cracked walls" and "tattooed our memories" stuck with me because that shows how the speaker is affected by the events. I also enjoyed how you used second person point of view, as if you were speaking to the audience. ]]> 2021-03-02 18:28:22 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1259998014 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1260004268 "Tattooed our memories" was a really great use of imagery. I enjoyed your use of similes]]> 2021-03-02 18:29:26 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1260004268 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1260005720 I love the constant imagery and metaphors and similes. The figurative language is strong in this one. It really makes you question who exactly this is about.]]> 2021-03-02 18:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1260005720 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270503979 I love the constant sorting through confusion it really strays from your normal work, where you always know what's happening.]]> 2021-03-04 18:10:08 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270503979 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270504385 2021-03-04 18:10:12 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270504385 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270505384 2021-03-04 18:10:23 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270505384 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270508147 Feels fairy tail-like, but so suspenseful and disturbing too. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:10:52 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270508147 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270508915 I really like the self questioning nature of the speaker, it reflects the self-consciousness of the text. I like the tone, its like monotone sarcasm with a lapse of emotion that only really comes out when asking a question. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270508915 brunsonn2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270509737 I like the phrase "I see it. It doesn't see me." I also like how simple yet complex it is at the same time. It's very relatable, especially being aware of what you look like in the camera. I liked the pun as well. ]]> 2021-03-04 18:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270509737 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270511915 the relation of google meets is very relatable because i think it is such a common feeling right now because of the e learning situation and I think the pun ending was a good conclusion to bring your feelings together in the end.]]> 2021-03-04 18:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270511915 achanaj2021 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270512521 2021-03-04 18:11:36 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270512521 https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270559694 2021-03-04 18:19:33 UTC https://padlet.com/smustafah/fzqza5qz1in6jbi0/wish/1270559694